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Help Revise PLEASE

bonbonxkim — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 20:20:29 GMT

A. Colin Tangeman
University Of Houston
4800 Calhoun Rd-T2-339
Houston, TX 77004

Dear Professor Tangeman:

My name is Kim Nguyen, currently enrolled in Technical Communication 3363. [act1] Iâm a junior at University of Houston, planning to purse[act2] a major in Bio-Technology. I want to take advanced[act3] of this course, because my standard[act4] communication skills are fairly weak.

Iâm[act5] specifically interested in learning more about the elements of job application letters, informative interview, arguable claim letter and much more. [act6] Iâm wants [act7] to use everyday writing to everyday life. But [act8] I canât ever seem to understand the process of moving from static [act9] documents to richer content. When I took ENGL 1301, I didnât gain anything besides writing good essays to get a decent grade. [act10] The TELS 3363 course wills[act11] definitely an importance [act12] field I needed [act13] to be successful in any of my career choices. [act14]

Therefore, Iâm looking forward to developing a better understanding of communication skills in TELS 3363. I will try my best to expand my knowledge for [act15] this course. Iâm hoping to have a great semester at University of Houston.

Sincerely,

Applying for scholar ship

SadeqMorshedloo — Sun, 17 Aug 2008 13:28:43 GMT

Hi everybody,
I should say this is one of the best websites I have ever encountered in this area.(Learning English).
Well I have written an application letter, but I know there is lots of errors,
so I would be glad if you have look at my essay and give me your comments,
Thank you all of you.

Aug 17 2008

Ms <Name Surname>

Awards and Scholarships Manager

British Council
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<City, postal code, State>

Dear Ms. Ahmadi:

I am very interested in British Council, Chevening scholarships or any other financial assistance opportunities available for graduate students.

I have already finished my undergraduate studying in the course of petroleum engineering. I have graduated in Jul 2007 with a grade 17.7 of 20 (excellent) in the Iran university system. My major is Safety and Technical Inspection Engineering. To deepen my knowledge and to specialize in the field of Technical Inspection Engineering, I intend to do my Master of Engineering.

I am currently experiencing an educational period in the field of technical inspection and corrosion prevention at NIOC-OTC (National Iranian Oil Company-Oil Terminal Company) which has started in March 2008 and will last about 16 month. I have also finished two training periods, each of witch last about 2 months at the same company in Jul & Aug 2005 and Jul & Aug 2006.

My career goal is to work in an international company where this Master degree would be helpful. I am interested in traveling and getting to know different cultures and people from various countries around the world.

I am an open-minded and friendly person who is interested in international aspects and intercultural relations. Therefore, I would enjoy studying at UK universities which have a high proportion of international students. It is possible to get to know people from more than one country. Normally, this would require a world tour. Furthermore, I am keen on looking beyond my own nose to learn from other nationalities and cultures. Only personal experience can give you a real view of other cultures and behaviors.

Please send me the appropriate application and deadlines, including any other necessary information I would need to complete a proper application process with Chevening scholarships.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Sadeq Morshedloo

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Re: urgent need helping to edit my application letter for secondary one

New2grammar — Thu, 31 Jul 2008 04:22:27 GMT

I don't feel comfortable writing an essay or a letter for someone else. In fact, I don't even feel comfortable writing my own As much as I would like to help, I really can't. I'm sorry. Maybe a native speaker will.

Wish you all the best.

Re: Part of application letter, please review

ha-nocri — Sat, 07 May 2005 10:19:18 GMT

ok, just one more thing. the answer had to be 15 lines, and it came
out just 13-14 so i want to edit this sentence that is not so clear:

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That being said, my choice of Council of Europe Development Bank among the other departments was rather straightforward.
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to:

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That being said, my choice of Council of Europe Development Bank among the other departments was rather straightforward â traineeship in Council of Europe Development Bank is likely to grant me a valuable experiences in the field that has my attention now and is likely to retain it in years to come.
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actually, the first one was clear by itself already since there is this form where i
first pick the department and than elaborate my choice with this short essay. but,
i now have to insert something more like this second sentence and would appreciate
some advices here as well! TNX!