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Re: Application letter for vacation

Grammar Geek — Sat, 05 Apr 2008 00:47:39 GMT

First, capitalize the word I and other proper nouns, and then rewrite this without using abbreviations, and spell August correctly - then we can worry about grammar and syntax.

Re: Please check the grammar.

Mister Micawber — Thu, 07 Feb 2008 12:41:45 GMT

Dean, College of ****(or) Chairman, Department of **** Sorry, but, Sir, I've been asked to directly address the principal. Will it be wrong to do so? -- Universities in my country do not have principals; principals are heads of primary and secondary schools.

Dear Dr [Dean's/Chairman's surname]: I don't know his name. Will it be wrong to say "Dear Sir"?-- Only if you cannot manage to learn his/her name.

I have completed my ~~intermediation~~ (diploma? certificate?) [thank you again, Sir. Yes, it's a certificate. Can I say "H.S.C."?] -- it would be better to spell it out in full: High School Certificate (?)

in pre-engineering, and would like to pursue a BE (Telecommunications) degree at ABC University. [Do I have to use the university name here. I am confused a bit. When I have already mentioned it above in the address section, do I again need to mention it here?]-- Yes, use it again. 'Highly estimable' is simply fawning.

I have always been interested in telecommunications, and more recently I have narrowed my goal to becoming a telecommunications engineer. Enclosed/attached are my educational records. [I've already provided them with all the necesarry documents and records.] -- Then mention that fact here.

Since my family is unable to bear the full cost of tuition, could you advise me of any financial assistance available? [They have already given me a concession of 50% with the grace of God, but they have still asked me to write an application letter for it as a red tape. I know for a fact that bluntly mentioning the desired concession is rude. Therefore, can I say "Since my family is unable to bear the full cost of tuition, could you please offer me some financial concession?"] -- 'Concession' is not a word I am familiar with in this context, but yes, use your sentence if it has been pre-arranged.

Sincerely yours, [As I have told above, I don't know his name. Do I still need to use "sincerely yours", or should I use "faithfully yours" now?]-- Yes, to be safe, use 'Faithfully yours', though few are aware of this fine point nowadays.

Re: Please check the grammar.

Mister Nutty — Thu, 07 Feb 2008 10:41:59 GMT

So, finally I got help. Thank you very much, Mister Micawber.

Full return mailing address Okay, as you say Sir.

Date Okay, as you say Sir.

Dean, College of **** Sorry, but, Sir, I've been asked to directly address the principal. Will it be wrong to do so?
(or)
Chairman, Department of ****

University Name

Full mailing address

Dear Dr [Dean's/Chairman's surname]: I don't know his name. Will it be wrong to say "Dear Sir"?

I have completed my ~~intermediation~~ (diploma? certificate?) [thank you again, Sir. Yes, it's a certificate. Can I say "H.S.C."?] in pre-engineering, and would like to pursue a BE (Telecommunications) degree at ABC [Do I have to use the university name here. I am confused a bit. When I have already mentioned it above in the address section, do I again need to mention it here?] University. I have always been interested in telecommunications, and more recently I have narrowed my goal to becoming a telecommunications engineer. Enclosed/attached are my educational records. [I've already provided them with all the necesarry documents and records.]

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours, [As I have told above, I don't know his name. Do I still need to use "sincerely yours", or should I use "faithfully yours" now?]

Signature

Name

Re: please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Feebs11 — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 14:39:10 GMT

Quangtrungvtv wrote:
Marius Hancu wrote:

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

Why did you give me some advice?

Are you asking "Why did you not give me some advice?"

Marius has indicated where you made errors. If you check these in a dictionary, you may be able to correct them yourself. If you still cannot find an answer, ask again about the ones that are a problem.

As a matter of the way in which to write a letter to a company in which you do not have a contact, You address it to "Human Relations Department", and with an opening salutation "Dear sir/madam,"ending with Yours faithfullt". This site gives lots of information on how to write letters: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/549/01/

Re: please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Quangtrungvtv — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 01:44:19 GMT

Marius Hancu wrote:

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

Why did you give me some advice?

Re: please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Marius Hancu — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 11:09:53 GMT

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Quangtrungvtv — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:54:59 GMT

my address:

Tp ÄÃ Náºµng, October 28, 2007

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

Sick application letter

Mr. Streetwise — Wed, 14 Feb 2007 01:26:45 GMT

Hello, Could someone please have a look at the sick application letter below for grammar mistakes, and weird sentences?
______________________________________________________________________
Dear Madam,
The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was I was seriously afflicted with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4âo clock in the previous night. The doctor had given me some injections, and had advised me to take some rest, as the energy level had been quite low.
Therefore, I feel I should be allowed to use sick time.
Meanwhile, thanking you and assuring you of my efforts as ever I put in.

With great regards,

Sincerely,
Name

______________________________________________________________________

please check real quick the grammar of my application !!

Summer23 — Tue, 21 Nov 2006 15:09:38 GMT

(This text is my application letter for my internship application, can you read quick over it and point out the possible mistakes to me? thanks for the help)

Dear .....,

We emailed one year ago, I put my previous emails together for you to remind you of our chat.
Further down you can read some of them. I applied for an internship and you were my contact partner.
After a discussion with .... you decided not to take students for an internship in 2006 at you company.

Today, after a year, I want to try again and apply for the position of a 2007 internship for the duration of
six weeks to three months. I'm available on semester holidays from 5. March until 13. May or 5. August until 10. Octobre.
In that time, I would come to L.A., rent a room and hopefully work at .....

I'm still very enthusiastic about it and look forward to meet ..... whom I only hear on mp3, to meet
the others in real life, to invest my knowledge and ambition in the company and to enjoy my first
internship in the USA.

In the attachment you will find a recent photo of mine and the resume.

Thank you for the time you take to read and hopefully till later.

Internship application - pls have a quick look

jjjana — Wed, 27 Sep 2006 23:43:43 GMT

Hiya here again,
I am trying to write an application letter for a summer internship. Could you please have a look at it as I have already spent hours doing so without any further progress. Your help is highly appreciated! Any grammar or content suggestions are welcome!
Cheers Jjjana
_________________________

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to express my interest and enthusiasm in having an internship within your organisation starting in summer 2007. I found out that your organisation perfectly matches my career aspirations and offers interesting working environment. At the same time I believe my qualifications and abilities could bring a lot of assets for your team.

My name is *** and I come from YYY. I noticed your organisation this September when I was planning my holiday in Norway. I have explored your internet pages thoroughly and I was strongly attracted by the topics you are dealing with. Therefore I was immediately excited by the opportunity of internship for foreign students you offer.

Since 2004 I have been studying MA course in Regional Geography at the *** University. Regional geography is very complex science. It investigates individual regions from all different aspects with the emphasis on mutual relationship between their socioeconomic and natural spheres. My course has involved lectures on the planning process, land use, sustainable tourism and regional development. During prior studies I have been working on several projects dealing with the EU Regional Policy and the Structural Funds. I also have an essential knowledge of the geographical information system (GIS).

I would like to apply for one-to-two month internship in summer months of 2007 at the YYY unit. I am confident that my knowledge would be beneficial especially when dealing with the departments of YYY and YYY. Apart from my theoretical qualifications I can offer enthusiasm and strong commitment to work. I learn quickly and after short training I am perfectly able to work independently, but at the same time, I am a useful team player. I am very reliable and flexible person, who can work hard.

During my holiday in Norway I had a chance to get in touch with local environment and people, and, I have to say, I really fell in love with the country. I had an opportunity to visit the Rondane National Park and see the beauty of the Scandinavian nature with my own eyes. The chance to actually take part in the management of this environment, and with this to put my experience and education into practice, would be priceless. Simultaneously I believe, my stay would be profitable for you as well, as I could enrich your team with my knowledge and international background and perspective.

Attached to this email for your review is my resume, containing additional information on my experience and skills.

Should you have any questions, please, feel free to contact me via email. Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

***