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Hello,Thank you very much for your suggestions. As you pointed it seems to me that you are right about the cliches. I will consider that and re-write it.Kind regards,JP

Hello, JP.It is very well-written grammatically, but also very boring-- it uses all the cliches and stock phrases that cover letters are prey to. All the self-praise will count for nothing with the potential employer until an interview is held. I would suggest that, while keeping it brief, you...

Hello all,I really appreciate if somenone would help me correcting my letter for a job application. Thank you very much. Dear Sir(s), I am writing to apply for the position of Supply Manager as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions. I appreciate challenges...

this is my the first time in forum. i try to learn English, but it looks not easy. did i wrote the cover letter correct or not? thank you in advance. alfredas December 1, 2007 Dear Sirs, Referring to your career opportunity advertisement at Newspapername, dated December 18, 2007, for...

DEAR ALL, PLEASE KINDLY HELP ME TO WRITE AN APPLICATION LETTER FOR A SCHOLARSHIP I NEED TO PUT IN THIS LETTER WHY I WANT TO DO THE COURSE MASTER IN BUSYNESS ADMINISTRATRATION IN AUSTRALIA I'M CURRENTLY IN MOZAMBIQUE I'VE DONE A COURSE IN COMPUTER SCIENCE OF MANAGEMENT I'M WORKING SINCE...

Hello, Could someone please have a look at the sick application letter below for grammar mistakes, and weird sentences?______________________________________________________________________Dear Madam,The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was I was seriously afflicted with...

Vincent, To answer 1) I would write 'She enjoys all activities inside and outside kindergarten INCLUDING common academic lessons, ballet dancing, violin lessons, PICNICS WITH HER CLASSMATES, SCHOOL EXCURSIONS, and many other activities.' or 'She enjoys all activities inside and outside...

Vincent, I have corrected any grammatical errors, and reworked certain phrases so they read 'easier' in English. The first thing I picked up on was that you often switch between "we" and "my." You are writing the letter as a couple yet refer to your daughter as only "yours." This makes it...

Dear all, Please help to give me an advice and correction. Thank you. Regards, Vincent ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- My address Date Mr. Wong (The Headmaster) School name and school address Dear Mr. Wong: We would like to apply for...

I'm looking for the translation of the Dutch "in opdracht van" (which is shortened to "i.o." in formal letters). Altavista translates it in "for", but I wonder if that's correct. It is used, for example, when replying to an application and the staff employee writes the 'declined application...