Re: Sentence structure is back bone in business writing, how much effective it is?

Anonymous — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 12:00:38 GMT

Its very true and I totally agree with you. Think for a while that why resumes and cover letter writing is considered very effective for getting a job. What do you think why in all institutions all over the world teach their business level students subject of âBusiness communicationâ? The reason is that even to get a business deal you must known how to impress the other party through your expression and that usually includes both writing and speaking skills. Now suppose if you write an application letter to a multinational company and you do not take care of the exclamatory marks or the grammar rules or any lingual rule, do you think that you will be able to give string impression? No not at all. Thatâs why it is very true sentence structure is the backbone of business writing.

Re: please correct my application. please help :-(

Katarina — Thu, 19 Jan 2006 18:51:57 GMT

ManiacX78X wrote:
Hello,
i study technician engineering in germany and my last english lesson is about 7 years ago. I've wrote an application in german, but i need an english translation too. Therefore i have used the follwing free online translator http://www.worldlingo.com/en/products_services/worldlingo_translator.html.
But I think there are a lot of mistakes and grammer errors.

Please i need your help to translate it in good english. please help me.

Application:

Ladies and Gentlemen,

with ambition and strength of will I fought by the study and won myself. In the training as the industrial mechanic aroused interest in technical connections solidified itself during the study.

Purposeful coworkers get your renowned enterprise going.

My theoretical and practical experiences correspond to your applicant profile. Gladly I place myself again and again to new challenges.

In order to secure success durably, further training and auxiliary qualifications are necessary. For this reason I acquired knowledge in the range of the motor vehicle and laser technology into trend-setting technologies and existed the teacher qualification test. During the study I worked on different projects such as device construction.

My specialized technical and my know-how help, To realize visions. Likewise sole responsibility and team ability distinguish me. Among my natural kind of nature rank reliability, safe occurrence, good umgangsformen and a maintained appearance. Flexibility, I prove and let mobility and good sprachkenntnisse gladly me your enterprise internationally represent.

I expect to the invitation to a personal discussion gladly and remain yours sincerely from Dortmund

Thanks for help Andreas

Hello Andreas,

You can't really depend on such online translation softwares. You will always end up with innumerable mistakes in sentence structure AND grammar. My advice to you is to try write the application letter in English yourself. Then post it again here to be corrected.

Start your letter with "I am writing to apply for the position of ... " And then you can write in details about your qualifications and experience.

Kat

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