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Re: Please help - application letter for secondary school

Anonymous — Tue, 21 Oct 2008 16:12:12 GMT

Hi MountainHiker,

Here is another application for our son. Can you help also?

My address
Date
Mr. Lee (The Headmaster)
School name and School address

Dear Mr. Lee,

Re : Application for Form One Place (2009-2010)

Applicant â CHEUNG Nok Hang Enoch (ID No. Y657970(A))

We would like to apply for admission for my son to your school in 2009.
My sonâs name is Enoch Cheung and he is studying in primary 6 at ABC Primary school.
We have great respect for the school's reputation, and we think highly of the school's facilities. Thus, we have encouraged Enoch to study here to equip himself for his future challenge.

With Godâs giving, we have tried our best to raise up Enoch and believe that good education is very essential for his long term development.

Moreover, being a Ying Wa Girls Schoolâs alumni, I love my old school so much. I really appreciate the culture of Ying Wa which does not only emphasis on academic performance but also whole person development. The learning atmosphere in the school also impressed me very much.

We are proud of my son who is appreciated by all of his teachers. He grows up in a liberal family which emphasize on positive and moral education. He is a joyful, aggressive and loving boy. His joyful heart and friendly attitudes have influenced all that acquainted with him. With the Grace of God, Enochâs talents and abilities will be fully developed through your school life.

In addition, Enoch has good examination results and has got a overall academic ranking of Grade A in his primary school. He is creative and has actively participated in school activities especially in playing badminton. He demonstrated to be an independent and diligent learner with high self-confidence, good communication skill and easy-going character.

We highly recommend Enoch to be a student of your school, and would be very grateful if you can favorably consider his application.

Yours sincerely

Mr. and Mrs. Cheung

Re: Application letter for vacation

Mister Micawber — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 23:36:40 GMT

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Your date numbers are wrong. I have guessed at the right ones.

Therese N. N
PDNA

The Director
PDNA

Dear Mr [surname],

APPLICATION FOR VACATION

With due respect, I hereby apply for three weeks' vacation from July 30th through August 21st. This is to permit me to travel for pressing personal matters.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

N.N

urgent need helping to edit my application letter for secondary one

catcat612000 — Thu, 31 Jul 2008 01:08:52 GMT

Hi, everybody,

i'm a mother of a P.6 student who will be promoted to secondary one to a school which is not of my will, so i decided to apply another school for her. As mother, i do hope my daughter can receive better education it is very important for her future, i will greatly appreciate if anyone kind enough to edit my application letter .

the following is my draft :

Date:

To: The principal

address

Dear Principal,

The principle and ideal of teaching in your school have so deeply impressed me that I would like to apply for admission of secondary one for my daughter to your school in the coming academic year.

Her name is ***, she graduated primary six in *** school . Her English foundation is good so she is suitable to accept English as media for teaching and her personality is active and creative so that she can be taught by flexible methods used in your school. I believe it will help her future development under the excellent cultivation of your school which is so important.

I hope she can be granted an interview and admitted as a student in you school. Enclosed please find her transcripts from P.5 to P.6 along with other necessary documents. Any further information will be supplied if required.

I understand it is too late to apply that your enrolment quota were fully occupied already , but I hope she can be filled in the vacancy at anytime if available.

Thanking for your attention and awaiting for your reply.

Yours sincerely,

catcat
(Mother of ***)

Re: write a letter to ask about scholarship

Hampeh — Sat, 15 Mar 2008 09:38:44 GMT

Thanks Mister Micawber for your reply and your advice. Sample of Job Application Letter help me a lot even though the purpose of the letter is different.

http://jobsearch.about.com/od/morejobletters/a/jobappletter.htm

How about if I change to this:

[Name of recipient]

[Address of Company A]

[Phone of recipient]

[Date]

Dear Mr [Name of recipient],

With reference to your advertisement at www.abc.com, I am interested in applying for the scholarship you offer.

The opportunity presented in the advertisement is very interesting, and I believe that my strong technical experience and education will make me very competitive candidate for this position.

I have Degree in Computer Engineering from MIT and currently still pursuing my Master in Software Engineering at University of Oxford. I have 2 more papers and should be finish in May this year and I will be graduating on October this year. Besides that, I also have Certified Cisco Network Associate (CCNA).

I have over five years of experience in various positions as Technical Consultant, Engineer, and Project Manager in various companies; Company ABC, Company DEF and Company GHI.

I have attached my resume for your reference. Should you require any further information, please let me know.

I can be reached anytime via my cell phone, 123456 or my email, myemail@yahoo.com. Thank you very much for your time and consideration, I look forward to speaking with you about this scholarship opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

[My Name]

URGENT!!! Would someone check my cover letter for me, please?

Anonymous — Sun, 25 Nov 2007 09:00:11 GMT

I'm a new graduate student and this is my first time I write a cover latter. So I hope that some kind person here can help me to correct some mistake from is. Thankx.

Nov 25^th, 2007

Dear Ms. A,

I was informed by your advertisement on OOO that CCC is now hiring secretary/administration officer position; therefore I would like to show my interested in its by sending my Curriculum Vitae along with this application letter.

As this moment, I am a new graduate student of AAA University from MMM (VVVi University Campus) and my subject is Business Management with Financial Major. During the period of time, I always have qualified high marks in most of the subjects taken.

Last year I had one-month internship with BBB working in Sales Department. I did learnt some skills which I think it will help me do well in the position above such as translating, communicating and do some short financial report. Moreover, I am not only having ability to prepare a short oral presentation but also do well on computer software.

Since XYZ is a new company, focus on new type of activities (fixed income market) which has potential chance to develop in the future, I saw myself as a candidate who would be so glad to have a chance to be in the staff at XYZ.

I do believe that the chances are equal for all and the purpose of this announcement is finding right people to put in the right place; therefore, I am looking forward to receive your email.

Yours sincerely,

Nguyen, Thu Hien

Re: work experience application letter

Feebs11 — Wed, 03 Oct 2007 15:26:45 GMT

Philippe3572 wrote:
hi,

I am writing a work experience application letter to Ernst and Young. I am 15 and in transition year (in Ireland). Could you please give me advice on the letter so far and maybe how to round it off nicely. Thanks a lot.

(my address)

[DATE]

Mr. ****,

(address)

~~O1.10.07~~

Dear sir/madam, [above you seem to have a name. If you do, then Dear Mr ***]

I am writing to apply for a work experience place at Ernst & Young between the 23^rd and 30^th of November 2007.

My name is **** and I am 15 years of age. Iâm a transition year student in St. Michaelâs College. I did business studies for the junior certificate and for transition year I have chosen Economics as one of my ~~choice~~ [elective] subjects. I have a particular interest in Economics, Maths and Science (Physics and Biology). I am currently doing the EDSL in school and I am good at Word and Excel ~~processing~~.

I hope I can learn a great deal from this work experience and that it will guide me in the future. ~~This,~~ I feel it will ~~would~~ be invaluable, first-hand experience that will give me an insight about working in such an established company like Ernst and Young.

I very much look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely [if you had a name]
[if you had no name, and had to start "Dear Sir/Madam", then end Yours faithfully]

__________________

thanks

You need to say that you are prepared to do whatever the company has for you to do. Add a sentence to this effect at the beginning of your last paragraph.

You must be consistent in the company name - is it an ampersand > & or "and" in the title. Accuracy will count in your favour with a possible employer.

Re: Hi!

Clive — Sun, 25 Mar 2007 01:18:28 GMT

Hi Inna,

Hi! My name is ina, and I am almost new in this forum. I wrote first in 2004 and I was very surprised and happy to receive so quicly the help I needed. Now I have wtitten already two times for the last three days and I have not received even a simple answer. I do not understand. It's simply that there is too much work and not enough people to do it all. Look at how much text is posted here for editting. It takes a long time to review and correct long texts. Don't forget that we are all unpaid volunteers. In addition, correcting long texts is much less interesting to most people. I saw that there are many ather people who have not received the help thy asked for in this forum, and still others who got more than five replys. Usually, because their post was short and interesting. I really need somebody to read and tell me my mistakes or to give me some ideas so I can improve my letter. This should be a short application letter, because afterwards I have to add two pages of explanation on my motivation. I really hope that there is somebofdy to help and I thank him/her a lot!

I'll try. Please read carefully to find my changes.

Best wishes, Clive

Dear Sirs,

I am exciting to be applying for the Master program â¦.. and at the prospect of joining your academic team. I first heard about this program from a college and friend of mine, â¦â¦, who is now completing it. I became interested and obtained information from your Internet site.

I am very enthusiastic about the opportunity which your program gives to young specialists from different fields to join, learn, and work together for the solution of economic, social and ecological problems. I especially like the international background of this field study, the practical training, the team work, and the great variety of areas in which I can in future apply my combined knowledge of science, technology and resource management.

During my years of study in Bulgaria, USA, and Germany I have shown myself as a motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. I thrive on overcoming challenges. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can.

I am excited by the opportunity to join an academic group where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm.

My CV and my motivation letter, enclosed herewith, contain additional information about me, my experience and interests

Thank you for your attention. I look forward to receiving your positive reply. For further questions, please feel free to contact me at any time.

Yours sincerely,

Not another motivation letter ...

Anonymous — Thu, 11 Jan 2007 21:59:43 GMT

Hi,

this is the 7th version of the "letter of purpose" and 5th of the "studienvorhaben" (how to translate this??). I am applying for an exchange semester at the University of California, Berkeley and the selection is based on the marks of the first year. As I am only average (of all those who are allowed to apply :-) ) the application letters must give me an edge. If you were the professor, what else would you want to know?

So please, pimp my letter!

*****************************************

Letter of purpose:

Dear Sir or Madam

My name is **** and I am a 21 year old **** Biology student in the second year. I first took interest in life sciences during a hospital internship when I realized that even the best trained athletes can die of cancer or other diseases and health is mostly a matter of research and development. Therefore, I believe that biochemical knowledge holds the key to many diseases and highly trained specialists play an increasingly important role in the community.

Why go on exchange? Like many other students of my generation, I want to have an enjoyable and rewarding experience in a different educational and cultural environment. As a Swiss of Chinese descent I am very interested in the USA, especially how so many different ethnic groups and cultures live together.

A former exchange student introduced me to the UCB. I was impressed by his description of American education. Courses and exercises demand a lot of active contributions from the students in form of presentations and discussion groups. But above all I am eager to do an own independent research project under professional supervision.

Moreover, I strongly believe that this is a great opportunity for me to improve my English and meet students from different countries. As I have never been to an English speaking country for a longer period of time before, I think that an exchange would benefit me a lot.

I am certain that studying and living in a foreign country encourages initiative, independence and responsibility. When I moved to **** to live on my own and began studying at the ****, I was a bit overwhelmed in the beginning but the new challenges in **** motivated me to do my best and I earned a good result in the exams. I think that my motivation and commitment grow along with higher challenges.

This exchange is a unique opportunity for me and I am very interested and motivated in studying for a semester at the UCB. Thank you for taking the time to review my letter and application.

Yours Sincerely,

"Studienvorhaben":

I would like to study at the Department of Molecular and Cell Biology of the UCB in the fall semester 2007.

It is my goal to obtain a diversified educational background that enriches my overall academic experience. An exchange is therefore an opportunity to acquire new qualifications and skills. I want to gain insight into specialized fields of research and try out interdisciplinary fields of work.

It is my plan to spend most of the time during the exchange on a supervised independent study and research project (MCB 199). This is the main reason for me to go on exchange because I want to put theory into practice as early as possible by being an active contributor to teamwork and research output. My interest lies in biochemical mechanisms in the cell and I will contact the respective departments at the UCB after being accepted for the exchange.

Furthermore, I will take three additional courses. Compared to the **** , the UCB has fewer courses which are therefore more intensive and some courses at the UCB are equivalent to concept courses at the ****. Concept courses are required for the Master Degree at the **** so I will take Biochemistry, Cell Biology and Survey of General Genetics at the UCB which can also be useful for my laboratory work. If possible and by consent of the instructor I would also like to take a graduate course on a specific topic.

(Here is a table with the courses.)

The biotechnology industry is an economic sector at the forefront of globalisation and there is no doubt that international cooperation and collaboration are becoming more and more important in any field of natural sciences. This means that being a biologist will most likely include working abroad for a period of time. As the USA is the worldâs largest economy and its universities are well-resourced, I could imagine doing my PhD there.

Generally, I am certain that the experiences of an international exchange will prove very beneficial for my future career.

********************************

Ok, that's all, thank you in advance!

bye

Re: please can any one modify my covering letter pleaseeee

Clive — Thu, 16 Mar 2006 01:14:27 GMT

Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

I've made/suggested various changes.

Best wishes, Clive

13th March, 2005

Mr.

Graduate Recruitment Manager

Dear Mr./Mrs./Ms.

Subject: Candidature for internship.

I am intensely interested in joining an organisation like yours to pursue an Internship as part of my MSc program. I came across to this opportunity through---------- . I am writing this application letter in the hope of obtaining this position, which matches my educational background and my qualifications.

I am currently studying for my MSc IT - Major in System Integration and Project Management at the Institut SupÃ©rieur dâElectronique de Paris (I.S.E.P), one of the most well-known nad most reputable engineering schools in France.

My Masters program at ISEP includes subjects like Corporation organization and Project management, which have sharpened my project handling capabilities. As I have an extensive background in software design and development along with commercial base<<< I don't understand, say it another way, my skill set can bring a great deal of strategic alliance and business development in your company<<< I don't understand, say it another way.

I know that this internship program at -------------- provides a solid base for professional and personal development. Therefore, becoming an intern in your company and pursuing my cherished wish to work on enhancing projects in an international environment will not only benefit your company but also further enhance my professional experience. I am further encouraged to appply by the working environment, the vision, the possible growth areas and the reputation of -----------------.

I am a highly numerate and IT literate student with a strong emphasis on team-work.

What my resume does not fully describe is my character. I am a conceptual thinker, a generator of creative ideas, and a self-starter. I would greatly appreciate being included on your invitational list. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

please can any one modify my covering letter pleaseeee

Taps — Wed, 15 Mar 2006 18:51:35 GMT

13th March, 2005

Mr.

Graduate Recruitment Manger

Dear Mr./Mrs./Ms.

Subject: Candidature for internship.

I am currently a student of MSc IT - Major in System Integration and Project Management at Institut SupÃ©rieur dâElectronique de Paris (I.S.E.P) one of the well-known, reputed engineering schools of France.

I am intensely interested to join an organisation like yours to pursue an Intenship as part of my MSc program. I came across to this opportunity through---------- I wrote this application letter to your company to be a candidate for that position, which suit with my educational backgrounds and my qualifications.

Masters program at ISEP included subjects like Corporation organization and Project management which sharpened my project handling capabilities. Having an extensive background in software design and development along with commercial base my skill set can bring great deal of strategic alliance and business development in your company.

This internship program at -------------- provides a solid base for professional and personal development. Therefore becoming an intern in your company and pursuing my cherished wish of working on enhancing projects in an international environment will further enhance my professional experience. The working environment, the vision, possible growth areas and reputation of ----------------- encourages me to apply in it.

I am a highly numerate and IT literate student with a strong emphasis on team-working.

What my resume does not describe is my character. I am a conceptual thinker, a generator of creative ideas, and a self-starter I would greatly appreciate being included on your invitational list. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely