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Re: Please help me proof it. Thanks

Cheese1987 — Sun, 11 Nov 2007 04:39:46 GMT

Julielai wrote:

Some parts in red for you to fix

Cheese1987 wrote:

Thank you!

Account of the recent language learning experience and insights gained through the course both inside and outside of class

      I have learnt some useful skills in the course in these months.(incomplete sentence) The most impressing (missing three letters) lesson teach me how to write a composition in an (article) appropriate (sp.) style. I do know it is important to choose the appropriate style and tone when writing. I also understand that language style can be classified as formal, neutral and informal before. However, I do not know how I can write in an appropriate style correctly. The skills are not taught when I am in secondary school. After the lesson, I understand choice of vocabulary, sentence structure and grammar, use of transitional words and phrases, use of punctuation and use of abbreaviations and short forms affect the language style. I feel happy that I know how I can write in an appropriate style now. I believe that I can match the type of writing more correctly and therefore, my writing will _not__ _be__ (Insert words here) awkward or unnatural.

      Reading English newspapers also helps me to improve my English. I am not used to reading English newspaper before. But I am required to buy South China Morning Post from the courses. From then on I try to make reading South China Morning Post to be my daily routine. I find that it is an effective way to learn more vocabularies. It also helps me to broaden my horizon(Review your use of not only but also) Now I read South China Morning Post form Yahoo. So I can read South China Morning Post everyday. I deeply believe that South China Morning Post is worth reading.

Personal changed feelings/opinions/attitude towards English language learning

    I am convinced that English language learning are stressful and frustrating before. I feel nervous when everyone is focus on me and when teacher is listening carefully. I believe this feeling comes from my self- doubt. I think classmates are step ahead of me. I also cannot correctly pronounce some sounds and sets of sound. To be frank, I have thought that English is no more important because I am in Chinese Language and Literature Programme. I no need to improve my English anymore.

However, my friends told me that mastery of the English language is important. Hong Kong being a service - oriented economy, the advantage of having a competent English-speaking work force has become all the more improtant. I know that being a Chinese Language and Literature student is only an excuse to avoid learning English (You shouldn't think like that! Nothing wrong with being a Chinese major.). This thought only badly affects my interest and progress of learning English. I do know that if I lose the interest of learning English, my English cannot improve anymore. I need to find some ways to prevent feeling so embarrassed.

     There are ways for me to prevent feeling so embarrassed. I think the most practical way is to improve English. I should study English continuously. When I find some words that I cannot pronouce, I will check the electronic dictionary immediately. I will also try to speak English with my friends. I believe I can speak English fluently if I often do that. My friends can also kindly point out my grammatical mistakes. They will not laugh at my absurd mistakes. Therefore, I will not feel embarrassed anymore.

Personal Learning Plan

Long term goals:

a)         To get a C grade in Use of English in Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination

b)        To get a band score of 7 in IELTS

Short term goals:

a)         To finish all the exercises in Advanced Grammar in Use.

b)        To keep reading South China Moring Post and Hong Kong Standard

c)        To write compositions

Materials to use:

a)         Advanced Grammar in Use Exercise book

b)        South China Morning Post

c)        Hong Kong Standard

Activities to engage in:

a)         To join some workshops held by ITC

b)        To exchange oversea in Summer

How often:

a)         Doing 3 exercises everyday

b)        Reading Newspapers everyday (Look up the difference between "every day" and everyday)

c)        Writing a composition every 2 weeks

Mode of learning:

a)         Keep doing exercise and composition

b)        Keep reading newspapers

Mode of assessment:

a)         To sit for Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination.

b)        To sit for IELTS.

Re: Please help me proof it. Thanks

julielai — Sat, 10 Nov 2007 22:06:53 GMT

Some parts in red for you to fix

Cheese1987 wrote:

Account of the recent language learning experience and insights gained through the course both inside and outside of class

     Some useful skill I have learnt in the course in these months.(incomplete sentence) The most impress_ _ _ (missing three letters) ~~me is the~~ lesson teaching me how to write a composition in a (article) approicate (sp.) style. I do know it is important to choose the appropriate ~~and~~ tone when writing. I also understand that language style can be classified as formal, Neutral and Informal before. However, I do not know how I can write in an approriate style correctly. The skills are not taught when I am in secondary school. After the lesson, I understand choice of vocabulary, sentence structure and grammar, use of transitional words and phrases, use of punctuation and use of abbreaviations and short forms ~~are a critical issue~~ affect~~ing~~ the language style. I feel happy that I know how I can write in an approiate style now. I believe that I can match the type of writing more correctly and therefore, my writing will ~~be avoided to regard as~~ ___ ___ (Insert words here) awkward or unnatural.

      Reading English newspapers also helps me to improve my English. I am not used to reading English newspaper before. But I am required to buy South China Morning Post throught the courses. From then on I try to make reading South China Morning Post to be my daily routine. ~~I find that not only vocabularies I can learnt more , but also the horizon I can borden.~~ (Review your use of not only but also) Now ~~when the days I cannot received Newspaper from the lesson,~~ I read South China Morning Post form Yahoo. So I can read South China Morning Post everyday. I deeply believe that South China Morning Post is worth reading.

Personal changed feelings/opinions/attitude towards English language learning

    I am convinced that English language learning are stressful and frustrating before. I feel nervous when everyone is focus on me and when teacher is listening carefully. I believe this feeling comes from my self- doubt. I think classmates are step ahead of me. I also cannot correctly pronounce some sounds and sets of sound. To be frank, I have thought that English is no more important because I am in Chinese Language and Literature Programme. I no need to improve my English anymore.

However, my friends told me that mastery of the English language is indispensible. Hong Kong being a service - oriented economy, the advantage of having a competent English-speaking work force has become all the more improtant. I know that being a Chinese Language and Literature student is only an excuse to avoid learning English (You shouldn't think like that! Nothing wrong with being a Chinese major.). This thought only badly affect my interest and progress of learning English. I do know that if I lost the interest of learning English, my English cannot improve anymore. I need to find some ways to prevent feeling so fear and embarrassed.

     There are ways for me to prevent feeling so embarrassment. I think the most basical way is to improve English. I should study English continuously. When I find some words that I cannot ~~ensure to correctly~~ pronouce, I will check the electronic dictionary immediately. I will also try to speak English with my friends. I believe I can speak English fluently if I often do that. My friends can also kindly point out my grammatical mistakes. They will not laugh at my absurd mistakes. Therefore, I will not feel embarrassed anymore.

Personal Learning Plan

Long term goals:

a)         To get a C grade in Use of English in Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination

b)        To get a band score of 7 ~~marks~~ in IELTS

Short term goals:

a)         To finish all the exercises in Advanced Grammar in Use.

b)        To keep reading South China Moring Post and standard

c)        To write compositions

Materials to use:

a)         Advanced Grammar in Use Exercise book

b)        South China Morning Post

c)        Hong Kong Standard

Activities to engage in:

a)         To join some workshops held by ITC

b)        To exchange in Summer

How often:

a)         Doing 3 exercises everyday

b)        Reading Newspapers every day (Look up the difference between "every day" and everyday)

c)        Writing a composition every 2 weeks

Mode of learning:

a)         Keep doing exercise and composition

b)        Keep reading Newspapers

Mode of assessment:

a)         To sit for Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination.

b)        To sit for IELTS.

Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Clive — Sun, 19 Aug 2007 00:38:44 GMT

Hi,

Put your personal info at the top (eg name/address/phone/email)

You need an Objective section - what kind of job do you want?

SUMMARY

yes, bullets (black dots) are great

I'm going to comment and also make some suggested wording changes

But I'm not a doctor.

Clive

Highly motivated and dedicated, with excellent patient communications
Superior diagnostic skills and treatment planning, utilizing evidence-based medicine (speak about diagnostic skills?)
Adept at wide array of clinical procedures and skills
Outstanding research abilities - eager to do more research on comprehensive health care in the work environment (does this mean you want a job thatinvolves research?)
Effective decision-maker, with problem solving skills in highly stressful environments
Team-player â able to work well with other medical staff and patient families to ensure quality and individualized patient management
Committed to humanitarian, volunteer activities
Excellent familiarity with medical needs of rural areas (does this mean your objective is a rural job?)
Dedicated to keeping medical skills current, while still critically evaluating new ideas
Medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories (talk about yourself,not your school)
Computer literate (familiar with any medical or patient related software?)

WORK EXPERIENCE AND QUALIFICATIONS

2006 â 2007 x Health Clinic, City, country

General Practitioner (GP)

Compulsory National Service

use bullet points again

Provided care as needed for a regiment ? 999 people?: delivered primary health care services, executed comprehensive patient management, dealt with field emergencies, carried out general medical procedures, provided full medical and psychiatric consultation

Devised problem-oriented research to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management with consequent institution of preventive and educational measures resulted in 27 percent reduction these kinds of figures and quantities are great in most daily encountered complaints

Delivered lectures about most common and important health issues for the staff what staff? other doctors?

Managed three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistants, monitored their work, coordinated personnel, scheduled night shifts

June, 2007 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Permanent Medical Practice Certificate no. x

December, 2005 Medical Council,

Medical Council no. x

December, 2005 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no. x

EDUCATION

Don't put the months, not important 23 September 1997 - August, 2005 Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00) I don't think you need to put grades

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

Research X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 2003)
Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

PUBLICATIONS

European Conference, city, country (October, 2007)

Iron Deficiency association with â¦

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, city, country (December, 2004)

Moderate Physical Activity in Female Amateur Athletes and Insomnia

SKILLS

Language I think perhaps you shouldn't put the langage section ??

IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (July 2006 - present)

Clinical

Excellent doctor â patient communicational skills, knowledgeable in conducting evidence based medicine

Experienced in IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube (NGT) insertion

Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, experienced with research proposition and making and reviewing proposals, Teamwork conscious

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus, Familiar with Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage

Sports Perhaps don't put this.

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

VOLUNTEER WORK

x Earthquake, city, country Red Crescent Organization (2004)

Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken Bam, I wouldn't put these capitals >>> Involved in in-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aid Groups and connecting them with Iranian health authorities and services

AWARDS AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS

health Clinic, city, country (2006 -2007)

Award ??? for outstanding accomplishments and services during 16 month work period

health Clinic, city, country (February 2007)

Internship in above rural area, implemented a survey to determine reasons why registered patients failed to follow-up their routine scheduled visits â Subsequent 23 percent attendance increase

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers city, country (2004)

Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity â¦

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (2003)

Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among university all branches nationwide

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Isfahan University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

X Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

PERSONAL INTERESTS Maybe omit this ???

Playing Basketball from very young age has taught me to appreciate team work and self-sacrifice and be well versed in time management. Other interests: Reading., Table Tennis, Foreign Languages, world history and civilizations, Internet, Climbing, Hiking, Music, Computer

Referees and Supporting Documentation Furnished Upon Request

Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Anonymous — Sat, 18 Aug 2007 23:41:57 GMT

Hi Clive,

Thanks a lot for your realy precious feedback and time.

As you mentioned I made some major changes to the resume.I'd like to post it again.

please let me know how you think about this one

SUMMARY

A highly motivated and dedicated recognized for excelling doctor-patient communicational skills
Superior diagnostic skills and treatment planning with high appreciation for executing evidence-based medicine
Adept at a wide array of clinical procedures and skills
Outstanding research abilities - enthusiastic to implement researches and surveys to institute more comprehensive health care in the work environment
Effective decision-making and problem solving skills in highly stressful environments
A team-player â work in harmony with other medical staff and patient family to ensure best individually-based patient management
Committed to humanitarian activities with a two-week voluntary work in catastrophic Bam earthquake
Deep insight into and exposure to working environment and requirement of rural areas
Determined to connect learned medical knowledge to perpetual stream of medical updates, while being critical to them from content and methodology perspectives
Full of praise for sports â skillful basketball player â proficient with team work and time management
Medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories
IELTS score: 7.5-Computer literate

WORK EXPERIENCE AND QUALIFICATIONS

2006 â 2007 x Health Clinic, City, country

General Practitioner (GP)

Compulsory National Service

Delivered primary health care services - executed comprehensive patient management - dealt with emergency settings - carried out general medical procedures - provided full medical and psychiatric consultation

Devised problem-oriented researches to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management with consequent institution of preventive and educational measures resulted in 27 percent reduction in most daily encountered complaints

Delivered lectures about the most common and important health issues for the staff

Worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, responsible for monitoring their work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts

June, 2007 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Permanent Medical Practice Certificate no. x

December, 2005 Medical Council,

Medical Council no. x

December, 2005 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no. x

EDUCATION

23 September 1997 - August, 2005 Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 2003)
Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

PUBLICATIONS

European Conference, city, country (October, 2007)

Iron Deficiency association with â¦

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, city, country (December, 2004)

Moderate Physical Activity in Female Amateur Athletes and Insomnia

SKILLS

Language

IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (July 2006 - present)

Clinical

Excellent doctor â patient communicational skills, knowledgeable in conducting evidence based medicine

Experienced in IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube (NGT) insertion

Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, experienced with research proposition and making and reviewing proposals, Teamwork conscious

Computer

Sports

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

VOLUNTEER WORK

x Earthquake, city, country Red Crescent Organization (2004)

Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken Bam, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services

AWARDS AND ACCOMPLELISHMENTS

health Clinic, city, country (2006 -2007)

Honor praise because of the outstanding accomplishments and services during 16 month work period

Devised local research and survies, promoted health care system, fostered evidence based medicine practice

health Clinic, city, country (February 2007)

Internship in above rural area resulted in implementing a survey to sorting out the reasons for registered patient to fail to follow-up their routine scheduled visits â Subsequent 23 percent attendance increase

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers city, country (2004)

Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity â¦

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (2003)

Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among university all branches Nationwide

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Isfahan University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

X Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Referees and Supporting Documentation Furnished upon Request

Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Clive — Fri, 17 Aug 2007 16:34:01 GMT

Hi,

Yes, I agree that my summary is too long, Shall I eliminate it and instead write a cover letter? I would just make it shorter and in point form. Think of it as a chance to highlight your strengths.

Is this summary suitable to be a cover letter? You could use parts of it, but focus on the purpose of a cover letter.

Say what job/kind of job you want

Introduce yourself and your skills briefly, in terms of why people should choose you for this job.

Ask for an interview or whatever action you want the agency to take

Do I need a cover letter for a recruiting agency after all? I don't know. I think it's probably a good idea.

What about the rest of CV? I've added a few comments.

There are also books etc. available that give sample CV's for professional people. Have you had a chance to look at such things? You should.

Best wishes, Clive

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. *** Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

s.x@gmal.com

SUMMARY

A highly motivated, determined, and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner (GP) with practical work experience in conducting evidence based medicine during my 16th month compulsory national service, when I was working as a GP in a health clinic handling most aspects of a GP responsibilities. My appreciation for importance of â evidence based medicineâ has led me to propose surveys and researches to gather appropriate data concerning most daily encountered medical problems. My commitment to humanitarian activities and my professional obligations led to a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent during the very first days of catastrophic *** earthquake ( date), when I experienced working with the least equipment and facilities during a natural disaster of massive number of casualties and lots of emergencies. I spent two month of my internship and one month of my clerkship in a rural health clinic where I became familiar with the the country health system and policies in rural area while under supervision I was responsible for daily patient care and visits, handling and updating patients records, doing patients follow-ups, vaccination, pregnancy and pediatric routine cares, birth control, consultation, monitoring community health and addressing any health problem in the community. I proposed a survey during this invaluable experience of my internship to find out the results of failure of patient for following up their routing visits especially for pregnant women and juvenileâs which resulted in 23 percent increase in their attendance. The rest of my internship was in a large medical center in *** city during which we were trained for conducting a wide array of medical skills in all medical disciplines. I understand the value of research in medicine and have always been keen to conduct practical researches to solve some problems of community or bring new treatment to practice, which could be noticed from my research background. I have always been eager to connect my current knowledge to perpetual stream of new medical breakthroughs and practices through reading reputable medical journals, however my research background makes me to be critical to new article and research papers form content and methodology perspective. Playing Basketball has taught me the value of teamwork and to be more proficient in indispensable art of time management. I studied medicine in and graduated from a medical school listed in both WHO and IMED directory of medical schools.

WORK EXPERIENCE

*** Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)
As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts. Put it all in point form. Don't tell it like a story. eg

- responsible for this

- did that

- supervised these staff

- performed this kind of surgery

- etc. etc.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683
.
Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617

EDUCATION

Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country (23 September 1997 - August, 2005)
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 â June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 â June, 1995)
High School Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

Very often, people with advanced degrees omit info about lesser things like High School.

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

SKILLS

Language
IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (2006 - present)

Clinical

Experienced in: Evidence-Based Clinical Practice, IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube insertion (NGT).
Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus. Familiar with: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage.

Sports

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Name of University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

Name of Youth Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

VOLUNTEER WORK

*** Earthquake, Town, City, Country.
Name of Red Crescent Organization (200-)
Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken name of town, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services.

HONORS and AWARDS

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 200-)
Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (September, 200-)
Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among *** University All branches Nationwide.

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Anonymous — Wed, 15 Aug 2007 17:05:32 GMT

I was recently requested by a recruitment agency to provide them with my CV, so they will be able to find me a job. I have prepared this CV for that propose.
I highly appreciate if you review my CV and tell me about every kind of errors that I have made from the content to style, even punctuation, address, grammar, vocabulary, use of capital letters and articles, and every kind suggestion, or whatever you think about it.
Many thanks again for your invaluable feedbacks and assistance.

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. *** Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

s.x@gmal.com

SUMMARY

WORK EXPERIENCE

*** Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)
As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683

Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617

EDUCATION

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 â June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 â June, 1995)
High School Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

SKILLS

Clinical

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus. Familiar with: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage.

Sports

VOLUNTEER WORK

HONORS and AWARDS

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Re: Any advice on how to improve my English

Lady Sigh — Fri, 20 Apr 2007 19:59:37 GMT

Reading articles will help you alot, and there is forum about IELTS and Toefl tests.This forum is very good one.

Re: i am desparate and need help

Lady Sigh — Mon, 19 Feb 2007 06:00:05 GMT

Hi,

Well, I have done them both and I think ielts is easier than Tofel becaues of two reasons:

1- Tofel is on line while ielts is written form.

2- Tofel's reading test is difficult because there would be 5 or 6 articles that you have to read.

Anyway good luck..

Re: Please help me !!!!! task 2 writing IELTS.....***

Anonymous — Thu, 28 Dec 2006 13:20:09 GMT

In addition to my comments above I have found a hint in the articles-section of this forum:

http://dark-rain.org/useful.expressions.for.essay.writing/index.html
(This hp provides you with some expressions you might use in your essay)

Best wishes

Moe

IELTS: 10 Mistakes You Must Avoid

IELTS-blog — Sat, 15 Apr 2006 21:38:39 GMT

IELTS: 10 Mistakes You Must Avoid

By Simone Braverman

The process of studying for IELTS can be overwhelming. It always is of great importance to oneâs future and the stakes are usually high. Among countless rules of IELTS it is easy to loose focus and begin drifting in the wrong direction, especially when you have nobody to guide you. This is the reason why people donât receive the score they really deserve. Here are the top 10 mistakes IELTS candidates make.

Give more answers than necessary

As I have already mentioned in one of the previous articles, instructions are there for a reason. If they say âgive one answerâ or âanswer in 3 wordsâ, this is exactly what the examiners will be looking for, and if they find two answers or four words â points are lost forever.

Write answers in the booklet, not on the Answer Sheet

Of course, writing answers on the booklet margins looks more natural then having to copy them to some special Answer Sheet. Well, surprise â the only answers IELTS examiners count are those copied to the Answer Sheet. Every answer written on booklet margins only scores zero.

Lose track of time

During Reading and Writing sections it is candidatesâ responsibility to manage their own time. No one will tell you to stop working on the current task and to move forward to the next one. So, in worst case scenario, you could spend all the time working on just one passage, when there are 3 more to go.

Waste a lot of time on one hard question

All IELTS questions are of different difficulty. It is wrong to assume that every next question will be harder than the previous one. This is why getting stuck on one hard question is a bad idea. By moving forward to some easier questions you could win points, which otherwise would be lost.

Read the whole passage first in Reading section

Those passages are not meant to be read. It is enough to scan through the text, noticing what the text is about and what the purpose of each paragraph is. After getting familiar with the passage, it is the time to read questions and look for answers.

Assume they know the answer

There is an old saying âAssumptions are the mother of all mess-upsâ. Many people walk right into this trap, by reading the question and assuming that they already know the answer from their experience or general knowledge. What a mistake! The answer is what is written in the passage and not what comes first to your mind. If, for example, the question is âDoes smoking cause cancerâ and your mind says âYesâ but the passage says âNoâ, then âNoâ is the correct answer.

Copy the task in Writing section

Let me list reasons why this would be a mistake. First, instructions forbid this. Second, you donât get any points for it. Third, it wastes precious time you could use writing something meaningful.

Not checking the answers

It is only human to make mistakes and there is nothing wrong in admitting it. This is a good enough reason to check and double-check your answers if there is time left.

Trying to impress the examiner

What usually happens when a person starts trying to impress the examiner is usually the opposite. Be the best you can at your level, donât try to claim a higher level you are not at. Donât start trying to use super complex sentences or big smart words (without being sure what they mean).

Answering with âYesâ or âNoâ

When examiner is asking you a question, it is not the answer he is after. His goal is to make you speak. As for you, every chance to speak is an opportunity to show how fluent your English is. Answering with âYesâ or âNoâ ruins every chance of good grade.

About The Author

Simone Braverman is the author of "ACE The IELTS" e-Book. She once had to take the IELTS test to open a door to a dream. Her curiosity pushed her towards researching into different aspects of IELTS test.