Re: research paper help!

Feebs11 — Thu, 22 Feb 2007 11:56:08 GMT

Your introductory paragraph should present the topics you intend to discuss, your reasons for selecting them, and (if possible) some kind of link to the title.

November 8, 1989,   it is not necessary to insert commas before and after the year in this context

during the late 19^th century - centuries = 1800-1899 19th century; 1900-1999 20th century, 2000-2999 21st century. Your sentence is obscure as the reference to the American Civil war is without context.

The United Stateâs involvement    The States are multiple states within the Union, so plural.

United Nations formed    Many nations are members.

The Iraqi's and     The apostropher makes this a possessive - The Iraqi's house. Do not use apostrophes with plurals.

blamed by the Africanized honey bee. Was the bee blaming someone or is the bee being blamed for the deaths? Blamed by for the first, blamed on for the second.

spread and distributed into Central America - you don't need both.

, condemning the first death in America by a killer bee "said to be" .   You have referred to South America and to Central America. Here you really need to identify the US as the location. America is the entire continent.

further~~more~~ on the study of Africanized honey bees.

1990's    = possessive. In this context, 1990s{the decade of 1990-1999) would be better.

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Re: research paper help!