New degree of perfection Amazing! In Russian it sounds pretty good. Now I don't believe russian-english dictionary . I just don't want to use a title like 'A business offer'. It should attract reader's attention. I would

First of all thanks a lot!!! I couldn't imagine that there were so many issues in my letter. Sorry that I wasn't clear enough. I should clarify things a bit before continue. The company I'm writing to is a world-wide organization. In

hi all, below is an email to an executive, first I want to know should I use (As well or Also)? and when we can use them? also if there is any corrections please advice! Dear *** I tried to reach you by phone but was unsuccessful. I wanted to

Hello: I work for an online proofreading and editing service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't revise your whole essay here, but I will show you the changes I would make in your first two paragraphs (which I have combined into

I won't do the whole letter, but I will do an edit of the first paragraph (including the salutation). Here's my edit. To The Selection Committee: I recently graduated from the Universidad Autonoma de Yucatan with a ___degree in __ __. The

We have arranged for the surveyor to inspect these goods in November (or do you mean, on 7th November). After that: your paragraph sounds like it is part of a formal letter to a client or customer, so that "after that" is slightly too informal.

I'd just like to point out that this isn't grammar - this is "style." And different style guides will tell you different things. American: Colons after the salutation in a business letter, comma after the closing. Do NOT indent the

I'd place more emphasis on what you can do for them rather than what they can do for you - so re-think your first paragraph. Address - it is not correct to refer to a woman as 'Madam name....' Only use madam if you do not know the woman's name.

Dear Mr. Ericson ! Do not end a salutation with an exclamation mark. In US English use a colon :, in British English use either a comma or nothing. As you are already aware, Football Club “Shahter”(Donetsk) is about to build a new 5-star stadium,

Looks good to me apart from a few word choices in the second paragraph. Business letters are not supposed to sound 'emotional'. collaboration - equals collaborate, employers and employees don't collaborate. roughly - either cut out entirely