The content is not as much incorrect as it is confusing.  Business letters should be very precise and as brief as possible.   Comments:  "Agreements" is plural - meaning two or more. Also, if the reply is to a large company you might

Idioms are phrases that have become embedded in a language over time, replacing what had been the standard way of saying something. They are accepted for formal use, and usually are chosen for use because they are the most efficient way to

look forward is very formal and more suitable for business letters ;and looking forward gives a sense of excitement and informality. I am looking forward to a stimulating conversation and harmonious friendship. ( Try to use lively vocabulary and

New degree of perfection Amazing! In Russian it sounds pretty good. Now I don't believe russian-english dictionary . I just don't want to use a title like 'A business offer'. It should attract reader's attention. I would

Reply continued... John is the first name, but we don't know each other. It's a matter of personal preference, but if I was sending an unsolicited business letter to someone I didn't know then I would address it as

2) Would you say the word in bold would be better as exhausted ? "Exhausting for" is wrong. You could say "... I sat, exhausted by how long I'd been waiting ...", though some people might consider this grammatically

Hi, 1.dash use: Would you say a comma is necessary here? Why anyone wouldn't put a comma here? Do you think a complex or compound sentence can be used after a situation like this involving a dash? Leave this on the board to act as an example

I guess it has. There are some people who see every evolotion of English as a sign of declining standards and moan and whine about how it's not the language it used to be. That's sad - a language should be a living thing. Perhaps the

Hello, I need help to improve my English writing, to check grammar and sentence, I do not know when to stop sentence and is missing grammar. For talking better than writing in my experince. How can you help me please?. Best Regards, Makram

There was a brief story in today's newspaper about the "Q letter". Some career coaches (how-to-get-a-job consultants) advocate this as ... shows the employer that the applicant can form complete sentences and compose a business