By Business letters, Dates

It's in blue, so it's just an alternate possibility, not a requirement that you change it.I suggested the change because the dates already make the time sequence clear.Further, the briefer terms your letter of, my letter of, etc. followed by the date are typical in business letters.CJ

Dear Sirs, In American business English, we would not say this. If "Dear Sirs" is a common way to start a business letter where you are, then it's fine. But if you are writing to your own boss, wouldn't you use his/her name? This is to inform you that My Air ticket's...

Dear Mr.Ben, Allow us to take this opportunity to express our heartfelt thanks for the kind cooperation you extended to us over past years. We appreciate all your supports for so long time that is really meant so much to us. The purpose of this letter is inform you that due to the raw...

Hello Mr.John The letter should start 'Dear Mr X' or 'Dear John'. Is John his first name or surname? We only use Mr with surnames.Well and Wish the same from you. (ungrammatical but not appropriate for a business letter anyway). I am writing regarding the Spider Instrument. During our last...

Well and Wish the same from you. This is regarding Jack Instrument As per our last telephonic discussion, you told that your financial department will be contacting us for further process. Still I didn’t receive any call from them. Kindly update me the status on that. If it is possible,...

Dear Sir I am new to this english forum. I am very much weak in writing business letter. please correct below letter. Thanks in advance. Hello Mr.JohnWell and Wish the same from you. This is regarding Spider Instrument.As per our last telephonic discussion, you told that your financial...

I would like to ask one question out business writing. In a formal business letter, sometimes we see the following lines under the return address and the date: Jalan Arjuna 7Jakarta 11190Indonesia 28 August 2006 Your ref: JL/fh/246Our ref: SB/sl May I ask what they mean? I noticed that "SB"...

UEFA Stadium Construction committeeTo: Mr. John Ericson From: Football club “Shahter” (Donetsk)The registration number and date: №490, August the 3rd, 2006.Topic: An invitation to present at FootBall club "Shater" We are glad to confirm you (UEFA) as a General contractor for building five star...

Hi!This is a test letterI've done the translation but I really need your helpenglish speakers please look through this text and if you find mistakes let me know..this is very important for meThank you UEFA Stadium Construction committeeTo: Mr. John Ericson From: Football club...

Hi, CAN YOU NAME/LABEL THE PARTS OF A LETTER? Your address and date. If it's a business letter, then name and address of person or company you are writing to. Greeting (eg Dear Fred,). Body of letter. Ending and signature (eg Yours sincerely, Tom Smith or Love, Tom) Best wishes, Clive