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Attorney (Commercial Law), CV - Need some remarks..

royazr — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 04:41:09 GMT

Shalom, My name is Roy. and I'm an attorney (in the commercial area). I want to send my CV to some law firms and companies. hope you can help out!

Here is my CV, any suggestion & remarks will help. Roy.

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* Contact: ..

* Education, Awards & Legal practice

2003 â 2007 LLB College of Management (Avg. 86, Commercial Law Avg. 90)

â¢ 2007 Adi Azar Memorial Award (ibid), for best article - Intellectual Property (Analyses the issue of file sharing in the music industry)
â¢ 2004 â 2005 Reviewer in "Zman Emet" online law journal, College of Management
â¢ 2006 Participated in the 2006 College Mock Trial (Grade: 95)
â¢ 2004 Legal Aid Clinic (Grade: 92)

* Professional Employment

2007-8 Ministry of Communications legal division

â¢ Mainly practiced in the area of Communication law, Administrative law, Antitrust, Tender laws, Contracts law, Company laws and Treaties.
â¢ My work involved writing complex Legal reviews involving comprehensive comparative research, and dealing with ministry pleading and judicial Papers, I routinely worked with major firms and legal departments.
â¢ Some of the legal teams and issues I joined during my internship: Number portability, Wimax frequency allocation policy, VOD communication law amendment, the transfer of the Bezeq controlling shareholdership, "Teva Hadvarim" royalties conflict, the regulations reducing consumers commitment in the cellular sector from 36 months to 18 months, policy as regards contents providers, cellular radiation and various legal aspects raised in the Grunau committee.

2006-7 College of Management, Research assistant to Dr. Nili Karako,
First year student tutor, in English

* Community Work

2003 â 2005 Various community activity: Perach Tutor, "Acharay" math matriculation tutorship, "Eshel" â Joint Coordinator
2002 92nd Street Y, Manhattan, Camp Counselor, Jewish Agency US Summer Camps Project (2 Months)

* Technical skills, legal research skills

â¢ Full command of MS-Office: Word, PowerPoint and Excel.
â¢ Comfortable with legal data retrieval technology, Lexis and international legal databases as well as local databases, "Takdin", "Dinim Vaod", "Nevo", etc.

* Army Service

1999 â 2002 Combat soldier and non-commissioned officer, Nachal Brigade.

* Language skills, Hobbies

â¢ Hebrew â mother tongue * Hobbies: Writing, Swimming, Running, Chess, Hiking, Piano-playing
â¢ English â good verbal and literary skills

* Recommenders: .. (* Recommenders contact details are in my Hebrew CV)

Should I mention example production in my motivation letter?

BMX — Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:02:20 GMT

Hello everyone,

First of all, thank you to all the people who are supporting this website and the posts of the Forum Gurus, who helped me to understand the essentials of writing a letter of motivation.

I'm based in EU and I'm applying for a job as a multimedia developer. It is required to provide one example of my multimedia production. I plan to submit a flash movie which I have developed recently.

My questions are:

1. Should I mention this example in my motivation letter supplying more details about it or to attach the file with no extra explanations? Just to note that the application is online (no paper copies of the CV and LoM).

2. Should I put my name, address and telephone number at the top right corner of the LoM?

Looking forward to your replies.

P.S.: Once I have a draft of my Motivation letter I will post it here.

CV writing

Anonymous — Tue, 08 Jan 2008 15:37:14 GMT

Hi,

I need help with my c.v. Can anyone tell me if I have some mistakes, and any suggestion will be appreciate.

Tanks!

GENERAL INFORMATION

Address: ***, ****-*****

*****, ** (Canada), *** ***

Telephone: (***) ***-****

E-mail address: ****.*****.*@*******.ca

Date of birth: ****** **, ****

First language: French

Second language: English

Programming languages: Matlab, C/C++ and Maple

EDUCATION

Â· Bachelor of Science in physics with a theoretical physics concentration, planning to graduate in April 2008 (***** ****, 2005 - present).

Â· College diploma in natural sciences (CÃGEP ******, 2003 - 2005).

Â· High school diploma (Polyvalente *********, 2000 - 2003).

AWARDS, SCHOLARSHIPS AND RESEARCH GRANTS

Ã Excellence and perseverance scholarship of the department of physics (***** ****, fall 2005 and winter 2006).

Ã Academic excellence admission scholarship of the faculty of science and engineering (***** ****, 2005).

Ã High school academic excellence award (Polyvalente *********, 2003).

RESEARCH EXPERIENCE

Â· USRA internship at **** (supervisor: ********, summer 2007).

Program data acquisition applications and numerical simulations for the **** control room.

1) Wrote Matlab applications to measure the ion beam energy, to tune the linear accelerator and to update databases.

2) Modeled the temperature distribution of a Tantalum target hit by a proton beam with non-linear partial differential equations.

3) Programmed numerical simulations that display the ion beam envelopes evolution through the beam lines.

4) Attended ****** meetings, presented research results to an audience and wrote papers at the supervisorâs request.

Â· Part-time research work at ******* ***** in physics (supervisor: Prof. ********, fall 2006).

Continue the summer 2006 project: minimized functions with a great number of independent variables with a Monte Carlo algorithm.

Â· NSERC USRA internship at ******* ***** in physics (supervisor: Prof. ********, summer 2006).

Explore the possibilities of an adaptive optics technology using a liquid mirror made of ferrofluid with various configurations of copper wires transporting direct current.

1) Programmed Matlab numerical simulations of the ferrofluid surface over the magnetic field generated by the direct current in the wires.

2) Minimized functions with a Monte Carlo method to find the optimal configuration of copper wires and the best currents needed to produce a mirror capable of generating the various Seildels and Zernikes that correct a given wavefront.

3) Conceived and constructed an experimental set up to verify the accuracy of the simulations.

4) Participated to weekly meetings of ******* liquid mirrors research group and wrote a summer report.

<Edited: I tried to fix some formatting issues in the post but I'm not sure if I was successful.>

PleasePlease proofread my report

Anonymous — Mon, 10 Dec 2007 03:49:29 GMT

Hey, sorry to repost, but the other came out really difficult to read so i have delete tables etc. Could someone please proof-read my work. I am dyslexia and find proof-checking my work near impossible. It is long but will probably only be stupid mistakes.

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Introduction

Due to social and media pressures the ideal body shape is becoming thinner and this contributes to eating disorders in both males and females Harrison & Cantor (1997).

Anorexia nervosa is defined by the DSM-IV (American Psychiatric Association, 1994) as being 15% under recommended weight for height, age and gender. The patient also has to have a distorted body view and a drive to become thin.

Gordon, (2000) states the ratio of females suffering from an eating disorder compared to males at 9-1. He recognises a gender difference in eating disorders but urges people to acknowledge the existence of the male sufferers. He describes a male patient had visiting a doctor, who had replied to the patients anorexia as âa problem that only happens to girlsâ. He claims that being labelled as suffering with a âfemaleâ disorder can lead to the male feeling ashamed and emasculated and therefore more hesitant to get help, and for this reason some believe that male anorexia is largely unreported. Gordon claims this feeling of shame is enhanced when even female anorexics are judgemental at group therapy.

This negative attitude towards male anorexia causes health risks. It may result in professionals and the males themselves not recognising their early symptoms and therefore may develop chronic anorexia nervosa before they are diagnosed. (Margo, 1987, cited in BMA publication 2000)

Whitney et al (2005) studies individual experiences of people who carers of anorexic people. The femalesâ reports were more emotional than the males who appeared to be less attached with a less sympathetic viewpoint, suggesting males have a more negative attitude towards anorexia nervosa than females do.

Support that males have unhealthy eating patterns in addition to females comes from Forman-Hoffman (2004) who conducted a study involving 9,118 adolescents, 7.3% of females and 3.1% of males reported unhealthy eating patterns over the previous week.

However, theory correlates with the attitudes as many eating disorder theories are specific to women. For example some psychoanalysists argue that anorexia nervosa is developed during whilst females experience separation anxiety from their mothers. (Darvell, BMA, 2000)

Literature on male anorexia nervosa is limited and there does not appear to be any prior research into the difference between attitudes towards male anorexia nervosa and gender. Furthermore, there appears to be a fair amount of ignorance when it comes to male anorexia nervosa, present in medical professionals as well as psychological theories not even accepting its existence might be suggesting that additional education about male anorexia needs to be put into place.

To clarify an attitude is a negative, positive or neural feeling towards an âattitude objectâ, which does not have to be a physical object; it could be an event for example. Attitudes are formed by affective and cognitive responses and behavioural intentions. The following study only examines explicit attitudes, which are attitudes which are self-reported, which can be easily measured on a likert scale.

The aim of this study is to investigate the different attitudes towards male anorexia nervosa between males and females by use of a questionnaire will remain reliable over time.

The hypothesis for this study is gender will affect attitudes towards males suffering from anorexia nervosa.

Method

50 male and 50 female students were selected by opportunity sampling to be participants for the study. Each participant was asked to fill out two questionnaires a week apart. The males were either part of a university football club or an engineering society, while the females were psychology students.

A 5-point likert scale was used.. The questionnaire used 18 affective, 18 behavioural and 14 cognitive. 25 of the questions were testing for a negative attitude, and 25 for a positive attitude.

The first questionnaire conducted had 50 questions but after the analysis had been carried out questions were removed from the questionnaire. Below is a table showing the removed items and why they were removed.

The overall design was a survey. The independent variables (IVs) of this study were gender of the participant and which questionnaire was completed. Gender is a between subjects IV, which has two levels; male and female. Which questionnaire completed is within subject IV, as each participant completed both questionnaires. This IV has two levels, the first questionnaire and the second questionnaire. The dependent variable (DV) is the scores on the questionnaire. The predictor variable (PV) in this study was the scores of the first questionnaire, while the criterion variable (CV) in this study was the scores of the second questionnaire.

The participantsâ details were anonymous and were only identified by their mothersâ maiden name and consent was gained from all participants involved who were briefed beforehand and understood that they could withdraw at any time.

First a questionnaire was constructed by brainstorming statements indicated positive and negative attitudes towards male anorexia nervosa and a mixture of affective, behavioural and cognitive, (18,18,14 respectively) with 25 negative attitude questions and 25 positive attitude was deliberately used. Then the questionnaire was typed up with a 5-point likert scale, with the options of â1. Strongly Disagreeâ, â2. Disagreeâ, â3. Neither Agree Nor Disagreeâ â4. Agreeâ â5. Strongly Agreeâ beneath each question. A brief and a form of keeping the participants details anonymous by using their motherâs maiden name, was also constructed and then potential participants were approached and asked to partake in the study. Once 50 male students and 50 female students had completed the questionnaire the results were coded into numbers as shown above. Then the negative attitude questions were recoded so that 5=1, 4=2, 3=3, 2=4 and 1=5, and then the questionnaires were both qualitatively and quantitatively analysed.

Qualitative analysis was done by looking at the questionnairesâ results and seeing if there was any reason why any particular question shouldnât be there. For example, if most people selected âneither agree nor disagreeâ then the question clearly did not serve its purpose. Quantitative analysis involved looking at the mean, and deleting any items which lay considerably outside 2.5-3.5 margins. Any items with a significantly larger standard deviation or lower correlation figures were also deleted. Then with the questions deleted new quantitative analysis was conducted to check that the results were significant. Then the questionnaire was handed out to the same participants to complete. The second set of data was then reanalysed and a t-test was carried out to compare the totals of each participant for either questionnaire to check the questionnaire was reliable over time, and Leveneâs test was perform to check for a homogeneity of variance. None of the participants where told we were comparing male and female attitudes until after the questionnaires were completed at which point they could disagree for their data to be used.

Results

The item means statistics are as would be expected when testing two opposing attitudes on a 5-point likert scale. From table 2 it is clear that all the means and standard deviations are similar. With the standard deviation being around 1. The item means are as they should be, with the mean around 3, (M = 3.137) with a few deviations, (Range = 1.290, Variance = 0.124,) no items having a mean of much less than 2.5, (Min = 2.470), or much higher than three point five, (Max = 3.760). The item variance is fairly low (M=1.011) and deviates little (Range = 0.634, Variance = 0.33)

These show similar results to those found in the 1^st questionnaire. Standard deviation are around 1. Means are around 3, (M = 3.128) with a few deviations, (Range = 1.320, Variance = 0.136,) These very similar results would suggest that the questionnaire had consistency over time; however this is tested for and discussed further later.

Reliability analysis of 1^st and 2^nd questionnaires

A reliability analysis of the items of the first questionnaire was performed to explore to what extent the scale was internally consistent. The results showed strong internal consistency in both questionnaires (Cronbach's Alpha = 0.891). The result suggest that the scale is not unidimensional (Inter-Item Correlation = 0.289) Similar findings were found with the reliability analysis of the second questionnaire, there was a similar strong internal consistency (Cronbrachâs Alpha = 0.882) and the scale still appeared to be multidimensional (Inter-Item Correlation = 0.270)

Test-Retest Reliability

The results above show that both tests are internally consistent but to discover if the test was consistent over time a test-retest correlational analysis was conducted, scores from the same individuals, on the same items on both questionnaires should be similar to indicate reliability over time. Each participantsâ total score was calculated for questionnaire one and questionnaire two and then the relationship between the two variables was examined. A significant strong correlation between scores on the two questionnaires was found (R = 0.949, p = 0.001). These results indicate that the test was reliable over time. The strong correlation between the two tests is illustrated below in a scatter-graph.

The hypothesis for this study was 1-tailed. The females scored a mean of 70.04 while males scored a mean of 55.06. An independent t-test was conducted to explore the influence gender had on attitudes towards male anorexia. A Leveneâs test of homogeneity of variance was carried out and found to be non-significant (p = 0.183) and therefore it can be assumed that there are no significant differences between variances. Gender was shown to have a significant effect on attitudes towards male anorexia, (df = 98, t = 8.045, p = 0.001).

Discussion

To summarize the results, internal consistency and consistency over time were present in the questionnaires; homogeneity of variance was assumed an independent t-test yielded significant results indicating that there is a difference between male and female attitudes towards male anorexia with males holding the negative viewpoint, while the average female has a more positive attitude towards male anorexics. This is supports the hypothesis that gender affects attitudes towards male anorexic.

Although these findings are highly significant it would be beneficial to conduct research where the scale was unidimensional as opposed to multidimensional.

These results support that Gordonâs viewpoint (2000) was correct that males suffering with anorexia nervosa are stigmatised, however Gordon also expected females to have negative attitudes towards anorexic males which this study does not find supportive evidence for. To ensure that it is not just female anorexics that stigmatise male anorexics a study could be conducted to investigate the difference between female who are suffering with anorexia nervosa and females who are not.

Negative attitudes towards male anorexia may be due to males being undereducated about anorexia as the condition is mainly associated with females. These results could be the consequence of a lack of media coverage. Female bias in academic publications about male anorexia may also contribute (Darvell, 2000). According to Margo, (1987) this will indirectly cause anorexic males health to become worse.

All the participants where students, with no mature students included, which served as a control, however further research to see if the results can be generalised would be worthwhile.

All the participants completed the questionnaires in similar conditions and the use of a questionnaire meant all the questions were standardised. Opportunity sampling was a suitable method for this study due to limitations on time, and the results were highly significant, but if a random sampling method was used for similar research in the future it would reduce possible criticisms. Because none of the participants where told we were comparing male and female attitudes until after the questionnaires were completed, the likelihood of demand characteristics was minimised.

To conclude, the results show a significant difference between male and female attitudes towards anorexia. Males showed a more negative attitude. The questionnaires internal consistency and reliability over time, along with homogeneity of variance of the results can all be assumed. The negative attitudes theorists suggest could be affecting the sufferersâ physical and mental health (Margo, 1980; Gordon, 2000) so it is a vitally important area of study to as evidence will in itself raise awareness and encourage other means of doing so

Please proof read my report

Anonymous — Mon, 10 Dec 2007 03:40:06 GMT

I am dyslexic and find proof-reading really hard. Please proof-read my work. I know that its kind of long, but its all in 3rd person and under the right headings etc. its only the prose and silly spelling mistakes I am conserned with which would be obvious to others. Thankyou so much. Obviously the stats arent relevent at all but thought that it might be really annoying reading something so out of context.

Introduction

Due to social and media pressures the ideal body shape is becoming thinner and this contributes to eating disorders in both males and females Harrison & Cantor (1997).

The aim of this study is to investigate the different attitudes towards male anorexia nervosa between males and females by use of a questionnaire will remain reliable over time.

The hypothesis for this study is gender will affect attitudes towards males suffering from anorexia nervosa.

Method

A 5-point likert scale was used.. The questionnaire used 18 affective, 18 behavioural and 14 cognitive. 25 of the questions were testing for a negative attitude, and 25 for a positive attitude.

Item Number deleted

Item Question

Exclusion Method

I would not find it odd if a straight male told me he longed to have the body shape of another male.

I believe any man with an eating disorder is not a âreal manâ.

3,4

It would not affect me if I heard a close male friend had dealt with anorexia alone

If a male told me he desired to be a underweight body size it would be fine with me.

1,3

I would be more worried about a female who was not eating than I would a male.

1,3

I would feel more uncomfortable discussing a maleâs body shape with himself than I would a femaleâs body shape with herself.

I would be equally worried about a male who wasnât eating just as much as I would a female.

1,3

I would feel unsympathetic to a male with anorexia.

1,3

The gender of a person would not affect how much I would intervene if they were suffering with anorexia.

I believe males who suffer from anorexia are effeminate.

I believe all males with anorexia are attention seeking.

I would actively try to discourage a male friend that I was worried was anorexic.

I would be equally likely to assume a male had an eating disorder than a female.

1,3

I would be just as likely call a female friend âfatâ as I would a male friend.

1,3

I would try to be supportive to any friend or family member with anorexia.

I would reassure a female friend that she is not overweight just as much as I would a male.

I would feel ill at ease if a male told me he desired to be a worryingly underweight weight.

1,3

I believe only homosexual males suffer from anorexia.

I would not be supportive to any friend or family member with anorexia.

1,3

I believe it is unlikely that a male that suffers with anorexia would be good at football.

1,3

I would spend as much time with a clinically underweight male as I would with a male of normal weight.

I would feel upset if I felt a close male friend or family member had suffered from anorexia alone.

I believe anorexic males should be treated differently than anorexic females.

I would reassure an insecure average/ underweight male that he is not overweight as much as I would a female.

2,3

I do not believe male anorexic is related to testosterone levels.

I would be more likely to call a male friend âfatâ in a jokey manner.

I would be faster to assume an underweight female has an eating disorder than I would a male.

1,2,3

I believe anorexic males should be treated the same as anorexic females.

It is just as normal for a male to suffer with anorexia as it is a female.

I believe it is weirder for a male to suffer from anorexia than it is for a female.

1, 3

Table 1 â A table showing the deleted items and reason for exclusion, 1 = Excluded due to mean, 2=Excluded due to standard deviation 3=Excluded due to item total correlation, 4= Other reasons, mainly qualitative (ie: Participants commented question was unclear or did not appear attitudes towards anorexia well)

Results

Descriptive Statistics from 1^st Questionnaire after items removed

Item

Mean

Std. Deviation

item4

3.57

1.07

item6

3.76

1.00

item8

3.35

0.98

item14

3.41

1.03

item21

3.33

1.00

item22

3.25

0.86

item27

3.15

1.09

item28

3.45

1.13

item30

2.95

1.11

item31

2.92

0.99

item32

3.03

1.13

item33

3.43

1.07

item36

2.96

1.03

item41

2.47

0.94

item42

3.38

0.81

item43

2.65

0.99

item44

3.39

1.03

item46

2.73

0.96

item47

2.97

1.01

item48

2.59

0.81

Table 2 â A table showing the descriptive statistics for each item of the first questionnaires after items removed (to 2dp.)

Mean

Minimum

Maximum

Range

Maximum / Minimum

Variance

N of Items

Item Means

3.137

2.470

3.760

1.290

1.522

.124

Item Variances

1.011

.648

1.282

.634

1.977

.033

Table 3 â A table summarising the descriptive statistics for 1^st questionnaire.

Descriptive Statistics from the 2^nd Questionnaire

Item

Mean

Std. Deviation

t2item4

3.60

1.082

t2item6

3.75

1.029

t2item8

3.36

1.020

t2item14

3.40

1.110

t2item21

3.33

1.045

t2item22

3.22

0.894

t2item27

3.20

1.110

t2item28

3.46

1.141

t2item30

2.96

1.127

t2item31

2.91

1.036

t2item32

3.00

1.181

t2item33

3.43

1.057

t2item36

2.94

1.127

t2item41

2.43

0.987

t2item42

3.38

0.862

t2item43

2.61

1.043

t2item44

3.38

1.033

t2item46

2.68

1.062

t2item47

2.97

1.029

t2item48

2.54

0.904

Table 4 â A table showing the descriptive statistics obtained by the 2^nd questionnaire (to 2dp.)

Summary Item Statistics

Mean

Minimum

Maximum

Range

Maximum / Minimum

Variance

N of Items

Item Means

3.128

2.430

3.750

1.320

1.543

.136

Item Variances

1.096

.743

1.394

.651

1.876

.029

Inter-Item Correlations

.270

-.164

.750

.914

-4.576

.028

Table 5 â A table summarising the descriptive statistics for 2^nd questionnaire

Reliability analysis of 1^st and 2^nd questionnaires

Test-Retest Reliability

Criterion Statistics

Gender

Mean

Std. Deviation

Std. Error Mean

TOTAL2

55.06

10.25

1.45

70.04

7.34

1.04

Discussion

Although these findings are highly significant it would be beneficial to conduct research where the scale was unidimensional as opposed to multidimensional.

All the participants where students, with no mature students included, which served as a control, however further research to see if the results can be generalised would be worthwhile.

CV for master course, pls check it

Ohyeah — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 07:21:10 GMT

I'm writing a CV to apply for a Management master course in Europe. Could you please have a look at my CV and give me some suggestion?
Your support is highly appreciated.
Pls find below my CV:
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[Name]
Birthday: 26th, October 1983
Address: [.....] Ho Chi Minh city, Vietnam
Phone: (+84) (8) [....]
Mobile: (+84) (0) [....]
E-mail: [....]@gmail.com
            [....]@yahoo.com

   1. Educational background:

    * July 2006: Graduated as a Mechatronics engineer and was one of the four highest thesis score students in class, 16/20, graded by Prof. DG, Professor of Automatic Control at INPG.

    * 2001: Entered the University of Technology with a high grade of 26.5 / 30.

    Joined PFIEV (Le Programme de Formation dâIngÃ©nieurs dâExcellence au Vietnam) and majored in Mechatronics.

    * 1998-2001: Studied at LE HONG PHONG senior high school.

   2. Skills:

    * English: IELTS: 6.5.

    * French: DELF: A1, A2 and A3.

    * Computer knowledge:
          o Programming: good at TC++, Matlab, VB.
          o Web: Adobe Flash, Adobe Dreameaver.
          o CAD & CAE:   good at AutoCAD, Mechanical Desktop, ProEngineer, MSC VisualNastran.
          o Office: advanced in Microsoft Access, Microsoft Excel and VBA in Office.
    * Communication (passed Staff communication training): Understand main types of people and proper ways to efficiently cooperate. Know how to communicate with external and internal customers.

    * Management (passed 2 management trainings):
          o 2 days by Officience General Director: share his management experience after several years working for Equant.
          o 3 days trained by DALETT (http://www.dalett.com).

   3. Working history:

    * Offy company: an outsourcing company for OBS - Orange Business Services:
          o       Sep 2006:
                + Started to work as a Data Analyst.
                + Responsibilty: analyze, process and feed data for Web[XYZ] back-end. Web[XYZ] is a website that provides automatically prices for network connection worldwide.
                + Optimization: using macros and programming to make it more productive, more time saving and accurate. Reduce processing and reporting time from 2 days to half of a day.
          o       April 2007:
                + Appointed to be Project Manager for [ABC] team in Vietnam, the biggest team in the company at that time, after 6 months joining the company.
                + The main role of [ABC] is Supply chain management in network connectivity orders. The team is to ensure satisfying customersâ needs (services, lead time to connect), checking billing and providing optimal solutions to OBS.
                + The team is growing up in number, and now has 9 members.

    * Freelance job:
          o HM Biotechnologies, Inc in USA:
                + Starting end of 2006, work for HM Biotechnologies, Inc as a web designer.
                + Now: dedicated to customer relationship and having a staff for website maintenance.
          o Anh Sang Ltd, family company: specializes in alcohol cookers and tablets.
                + 2002: in charged of product research and development, designed first type of alcohol cooker.
                + 2006: play role of maintenance engineer as upgrade electronic circuits for welding machines and data management in develop an Access application to facilitate order management.

   4. Interests:

    * Traveling, drawing, designing.
    * Communicating in foreign languages.
    * Working in a global environment.
    * Having opportunities to improve myself.
    * Having great interest in nature.

Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Clive — Sat, 18 Aug 2007 01:09:17 GMT

Hi,

As you mentioned I wrote the summary and work experince in point form and made them shorter.

Would you kindly give me your feedback about the revised edition below:

It's usual to begin with a short 'OBJECTIVE section eg

OBJECTIVE

To obtain a position as a family doctor in a rural area.

Summary

Just put stuff that you really think will help you to get the reader's attention, and make him/her say 'Gee, I should interview this person'.

Put your points on separate lines,e g

- Highly motivated and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner

- graduated from a medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories

- Appreciate the importance of âevidence based medicineâ, executed surveys to collect needed data for this

Committed to humanitarian activities with a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent

etc, etc. Don't put everything, choose the highlights. Focus on what you are/what you can do, not on what you did

Work Experience
*** Health Clinic, place (2006 - 2007) Put dates in left margin
General Practitioner (GP)
Again, point form !!! Put your basic duties plus the important stuff. Not any trivia.

- served in the above health clinic as a GP, handling primary health care issues, emergency settings, psychiatric cases, executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, drug prescription, requesting x rays and labs, referring to higher medical centers and specialties.

- Implemented problem-oriented researches to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management, resulted in executing preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, and headache overall by 27 percent.

- Worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, responsible for monitoring their work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.

Post again, if you like

Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Anonymous — Fri, 17 Aug 2007 18:44:52 GMT

Hi Clive
Thank you very much for your invaluable remarks.
As you mentioned I wrote the summary and work experince in point form and made them shorter.

Would you kindly give me your feedback about the revised edition below:

Ictually mos of my knowledge of writing a cv comes from the net. I have aslo read a couple of sample cv's in oxfored commercial correspondence book.

Best Regards,

Summary

A highly motivated and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner, graduated from a medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories, worked as a GP for 16^th month compulsory national service in an *** health clinic. Appreciates the importance of âevidence based medicineâ, executed surveys to collect needed data for this propose during my carrier. Committed to humanitarian activities with a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent, *** earthquake (Date). Three months internship and clerkship in a rural health clinic gave me insight into health care system in a rural area while implemented a survey to find out the reasons registered patients failed to follow up their routine visits, with a consequent 23 percent increase in the number of routine visits. Enthusiastic to conduct researches and bring more efficient treatments to practice. Determined to connect my learned medical knowledge to perpetual stream of medical updates through reading medical journals, while being critical to their content from methodology perspective. Playing Basketball has taught me the value of teamwork.

Wok Experience
*** Health Clinic, place (2006 - 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)

For after-graduation compulsory National Service, served in the above health clinic as a GP, handling primary health care issues, emergency settings, psychiatric cases, executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, drug prescription, requesting x rays and labs, referring to higher medical centers and specialties. Implemented problem-oriented researches to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management, resulted in executing preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, and headache overall by 27 percent. Worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, responsible for monitoring their work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education ( 2007)
Permanent Medical Practice Certificate n.***

Medical Council (December, 2005)
Medical Council no. ***

Ministry of Health and Medical Education ( 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no

Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Clive — Fri, 17 Aug 2007 16:34:01 GMT

Hi,

Yes, I agree that my summary is too long, Shall I eliminate it and instead write a cover letter? I would just make it shorter and in point form. Think of it as a chance to highlight your strengths.

Is this summary suitable to be a cover letter? You could use parts of it, but focus on the purpose of a cover letter.

Say what job/kind of job you want

Introduce yourself and your skills briefly, in terms of why people should choose you for this job.

Ask for an interview or whatever action you want the agency to take

Do I need a cover letter for a recruiting agency after all? I don't know. I think it's probably a good idea.

What about the rest of CV? I've added a few comments.

There are also books etc. available that give sample CV's for professional people. Have you had a chance to look at such things? You should.

Best wishes, Clive

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. *** Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

s.x@gmal.com

SUMMARY

A highly motivated, determined, and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner (GP) with practical work experience in conducting evidence based medicine during my 16th month compulsory national service, when I was working as a GP in a health clinic handling most aspects of a GP responsibilities. My appreciation for importance of â evidence based medicineâ has led me to propose surveys and researches to gather appropriate data concerning most daily encountered medical problems. My commitment to humanitarian activities and my professional obligations led to a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent during the very first days of catastrophic *** earthquake ( date), when I experienced working with the least equipment and facilities during a natural disaster of massive number of casualties and lots of emergencies. I spent two month of my internship and one month of my clerkship in a rural health clinic where I became familiar with the the country health system and policies in rural area while under supervision I was responsible for daily patient care and visits, handling and updating patients records, doing patients follow-ups, vaccination, pregnancy and pediatric routine cares, birth control, consultation, monitoring community health and addressing any health problem in the community. I proposed a survey during this invaluable experience of my internship to find out the results of failure of patient for following up their routing visits especially for pregnant women and juvenileâs which resulted in 23 percent increase in their attendance. The rest of my internship was in a large medical center in *** city during which we were trained for conducting a wide array of medical skills in all medical disciplines. I understand the value of research in medicine and have always been keen to conduct practical researches to solve some problems of community or bring new treatment to practice, which could be noticed from my research background. I have always been eager to connect my current knowledge to perpetual stream of new medical breakthroughs and practices through reading reputable medical journals, however my research background makes me to be critical to new article and research papers form content and methodology perspective. Playing Basketball has taught me the value of teamwork and to be more proficient in indispensable art of time management. I studied medicine in and graduated from a medical school listed in both WHO and IMED directory of medical schools.

WORK EXPERIENCE

*** Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)
As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts. Put it all in point form. Don't tell it like a story. eg

- responsible for this

- did that

- supervised these staff

- performed this kind of surgery

- etc. etc.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683
.
Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617

EDUCATION

Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country (23 September 1997 - August, 2005)
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 â June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 â June, 1995)
High School Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

Very often, people with advanced degrees omit info about lesser things like High School.

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

SKILLS

Language
IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (2006 - present)

Clinical

Experienced in: Evidence-Based Clinical Practice, IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube insertion (NGT).
Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus. Familiar with: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage.

Sports

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Name of University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

Name of Youth Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

VOLUNTEER WORK

*** Earthquake, Town, City, Country.
Name of Red Crescent Organization (200-)
Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken name of town, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services.

HONORS and AWARDS

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 200-)
Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (September, 200-)
Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among *** University All branches Nationwide.

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Playing Basketball from very young age has taught me to appreciate team work and self-sacrifice and be well versed in time management. Other interests: Reading., Table Tennis, Foreign Languages, world history and civilizations, Internet, Climbing, Hiking, Music, Computer.

Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Anonymous — Wed, 15 Aug 2007 17:05:32 GMT

I was recently requested by a recruitment agency to provide them with my CV, so they will be able to find me a job. I have prepared this CV for that propose.
I highly appreciate if you review my CV and tell me about every kind of errors that I have made from the content to style, even punctuation, address, grammar, vocabulary, use of capital letters and articles, and every kind suggestion, or whatever you think about it.
Many thanks again for your invaluable feedbacks and assistance.

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. *** Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

s.x@gmal.com

SUMMARY

WORK EXPERIENCE

*** Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)
As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683

Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617

EDUCATION

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 â June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 â June, 1995)
High School Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

SKILLS

Clinical

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

Computer

Sports

VOLUNTEER WORK

HONORS and AWARDS

PERSONAL INTERESTS