I have indicated the few outright corrections I could find in bold. Because you have chosen to present your information in sentence fragments, it is very difficult to analyze or make consistent any grammar present. If you continue to get

Hi, Hi, Hope you are well. I am ready to look for a new job. Please see my update CV attached file. If you have any question regarding my CV please do not hesitate to contact to me. Also I have visit your l web side today. I have

Your resume The summary section is a rather odd mix of different types of information. It's a waste of space to summarise information that is found elsewhere in the CV, just write a brief paragraph on your aims and personal qualities etc, and

Hi, attracting attention is of course your main aim but you should do this without backfiring:-) There are many diverse ways how to attract attention. In my opinion, you had chosen not the best one but of course this is only my opinion. They don't

Hi Clive, thank you so much ! I wrote another version along your proposal but I still left inside the information on my experience cause this is the only way to show what I have done. They don't want to have a CV. I marked the word in orange

I am French, leaving in the US and need to prepare a CV and a letter of motivation for a position in the UK. In reading many posts on this (neat) forum, I noticed that there are many differences in the format of CVs for each country and I would

Go through and check your spellings as you have quite a few errors that are probably typos, for example, 'form' instead of 'from'. The CV is a bit 'blah' just not very interesting - there is nothing here to make you stand out. Instead of just

Dear all, Haven't been here for ages but still remember the help of the forum (esp. Mountainhiker) for my motivation letter 2 years ago. I have been admitted to the desired university, and I need the forum's help again. Now I'm applying for

Erkoet wrote: Dear All, I am applying for a vacancy in another country, I worked for 3 months in that country before, now I want to move back there and start my future there, i just want to achieve the goal of getting my idea over, i revised my

Hello, I found ideal company in Munich and I really want to get my intership there. However, I am not sure the following paragraph (an email to hiring manager) makes sense or not. I need a fresh look of expert on it. Please check