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Could you check my letter?

Anonymous — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 13:15:22 GMT

Hi! I have writen a cover letter about an internship through a grant program, could you please check if the grammar, use of vocabulary,etc. is correct? I'll welcome any comments.
Thank you !

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in obtaining a practical internship at (company name) through the ARGO grant program.

ARGO is a mobility project funded by the Spanish Ministry of Education and Science within the framework of the European program Leonardo da Vinci. Its aim is to promote practical internships in European companies within Spanish University graduates. ARGO grants include financial help for the intern and an insurance policy during the stay which will not suppose any additional cost for your company.

I recently graduated from the -- University with a degree in -- and I have gained some work experience in both a --and a --. As you can see from my enclosed CV, I can communicate appropriately in English. I was awarded grade C in the Certificate in Advanced English and I attended a course in English language in --My reason for applying is that I would like to use and develop the skills and knowledge I have gained to a six month internship at (company name). I feel that it would be a very interesting experience and that I would enjoy the opportunity to broaden my cultural awareness by living at a foreign country. I have found some general information about your company and was impressed by your absolute commitment to training and development. For this reason I consider your company to be the right place for me.

I am sure my interest in learning new skills as well as the benefits that the ARGO program offers to your company could be an excellent opportunity.

Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any further information.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Please check my EMAIL Request ("Covering Letter")

Serkan44 — Tue, 16 Oct 2007 17:20:38 GMT

Hello Guys my name is Serkan, i would be very happy if you could check my email Request for an internship...grammar and vocabulary....thank you so much in advance!!!!

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Subject: Applying for an Internship, Summer 2008

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to express my interest and motivation in completing an internship in your company for 10 weeks in summer 2008 (The exact period will be given in Jaunary/February).
I have heard of your firm while looking up at the list of the AHK Dubai.

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My name is ---------, I am a dynamic and ambitious 22 year old guy. I am presently studying Mechanical Engineering at the University of Applied Sciences ---------. I expect to receive a bachelorâs degree in summer 2009.

In Summer 2008 i will finish 2years of my study and i will have the practical work experience of a sixteen week internship in several areas including the basics of metal processing, heat treatment of steel, joining technology, shape cutting, non-cutting shaping and metal casting.

After that I have to complete a ten week internship at a stretch to apply what I am learning at the university in order to fulfill the requirements for my degree. And that is the reason why I am contacting you.

Besides speaking English fluently, I am native speaker of German and Turkish and I have little knowledge of French.
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For further information (cv and covering letter), please feel free to contact me at anytime. I greatly appreciate your interest and am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Thanking you for your attention,

Yours truly,

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Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Anonymous — Wed, 15 Aug 2007 17:05:32 GMT

I was recently requested by a recruitment agency to provide them with my CV, so they will be able to find me a job. I have prepared this CV for that propose.
I highly appreciate if you review my CV and tell me about every kind of errors that I have made from the content to style, even punctuation, address, grammar, vocabulary, use of capital letters and articles, and every kind suggestion, or whatever you think about it.
Many thanks again for your invaluable feedbacks and assistance.

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. *** Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

s.x@gmal.com

SUMMARY

A highly motivated, determined, and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner (GP) with practical work experience in conducting evidence based medicine during my 16th month compulsory national service, when I was working as a GP in a health clinic handling most aspects of a GP responsibilities. My appreciation for importance of â evidence based medicineâ has led me to propose surveys and researches to gather appropriate data concerning most daily encountered medical problems. My commitment to humanitarian activities and my professional obligations led to a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent during the very first days of catastrophic *** earthquake ( date), when I experienced working with the least equipment and facilities during a natural disaster of massive number of casualties and lots of emergencies. I spent two month of my internship and one month of my clerkship in a rural health clinic where I became familiar with the the country health system and policies in rural area while under supervision I was responsible for daily patient care and visits, handling and updating patients records, doing patients follow-ups, vaccination, pregnancy and pediatric routine cares, birth control, consultation, monitoring community health and addressing any health problem in the community. I proposed a survey during this invaluable experience of my internship to find out the results of failure of patient for following up their routing visits especially for pregnant women and juvenileâs which resulted in 23 percent increase in their attendance. The rest of my internship was in a large medical center in *** city during which we were trained for conducting a wide array of medical skills in all medical disciplines. I understand the value of research in medicine and have always been keen to conduct practical researches to solve some problems of community or bring new treatment to practice, which could be noticed from my research background. I have always been eager to connect my current knowledge to perpetual stream of new medical breakthroughs and practices through reading reputable medical journals, however my research background makes me to be critical to new article and research papers form content and methodology perspective. Playing Basketball has taught me the value of teamwork and to be more proficient in indispensable art of time management. I studied medicine in and graduated from a medical school listed in both WHO and IMED directory of medical schools.

WORK EXPERIENCE

*** Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)
As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683

Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617

EDUCATION

Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country (23 September 1997 - August, 2005)
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 â June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 â June, 1995)
High School Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

SKILLS

Language
IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (2006 - present)

Clinical

Experienced in: Evidence-Based Clinical Practice, IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube insertion (NGT).
Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus. Familiar with: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage.

Sports

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Name of University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

Name of Youth Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

VOLUNTEER WORK

*** Earthquake, Town, City, Country.
Name of Red Crescent Organization (200-)
Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken name of town, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services.

HONORS and AWARDS

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 200-)
Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (September, 200-)
Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among *** University All branches Nationwide.

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Playing Basketball from very young age has taught me to appreciate team work and self-sacrifice and be well versed in time management. Other interests: Reading., Table Tennis, Foreign Languages, world history and civilizations, Internet, Climbing, Hiking, Music, Computer.

Re: Resume

Santrac — Wed, 30 May 2007 02:54:55 GMT

Hello,

As Kathrin said this is more of a cover letter format than a real Resume format. If you still need a good Resume your first step should be concentrating on the actual advert or job post from the company you want to apply for. Please, read and highlight carefully all requirements and make sure that you have collected all relevant data from your employment and educational history.

Since you did not have any pauses in between two job positions in the past, you can easily start writing your Resume using Chronological format. This format unmistakably shows your work record and professional development and it starts from the most recent experience going chronologically backwards through a succession of previous experience.

Looking at your career you should definitely begin with your Personal Information writing your name, surname, address, telephone number and email. These are basic contacts details nowadays, but if you think that there are other ways that the employer can actually contact you write that information, too.

Beside Personal Information any Resume usually contains three basic headings:
-         Objective,
-         Working Experience
-         Educational Background

But remember, writing a resume and being relevant to the job position that you are applying for is being accurate in all parameters needed for that job position. That is why, if there are any, you should list all your awards, publications, community/voluntary service, special achievements, certifications or anything else that is again relevant to the job position you are applying for.

Objective is simply there to describe general aim on the type of the industry or company that you would like to work in. On the other hand it should explain how an employer would benefit from hiring you and it has to show why you are qualified for particular position.

List all your Working Experience staring from the most recent one. And at the end list your relevant Educational Background in brief with the name of your college/school, city where is the college/school, year of your graduation, degree and field of study again starting from the last one.

Before you start writing your resume I would like to give you some practical advices:
- Be clear in your vocabulary,
- Be optimistic showing incentive,
- Avoid grammar errors and low quality paper,
- When you are printing your Resume, always use the best quality paper. It can be from 50gsm up to 100gsm. Do not use glossy paper! Use only mat paper. Keep your printed version away from damages.

Here you can find more free stuff about Resume writing.

Hope this was of help to you!

Good luck!

Rade Santrac
Resume and CV Writer

Re: how to make a perfect resume

Santrac — Thu, 13 Jul 2006 17:15:04 GMT

Dear Chaobo,

To start with first you have to go trough the advert for a job position you want to apply for. Than pick up their key requirements and see if you can meet them. If you think that you can apply, then you are able to start preparing yourself to write a Resume.

I will give you a couple of basic advices. First you need to know that the purpose of your Resume is not to get you a job; it is there to get you an interview with a hiring manager.

When a hiring manager takes your Resume and starts reading it, you have 15-20 second to attract his/her attention. So, the most important part of any Resume is Objective or Summary Heading. In order to achieve that try to write the most interesting and persuasive facts about you. Writing an excellent opening statement of this kind is gathering experience and skills into phrases that demonstrate your qualifications for the new job position.

After that try to list all your relevant past experience making âEmploymentâ heading in chronological order, starting from the recent one. When I mentioned relevant it means to concentrate on bringing benefit to the employer throughout concise, results-oriented and measurable statements.

Then list all relevant education in brief with the name of your college/school, city where is the college/school, year of your graduation, degree and field of study.

If you can try to indicate as well some awards, publications, community/voluntary service, special achievements, certifications or anything else that is relevant to the job position you are applying for.

A couple of advises at the end:
- Be clear in your vocabulary,
- Be optimistic showing incentive,
- Avoid grammar errors and low quality paper,
- When you are printing your Resume, always use the best quality paper. It can be from 50gsm up to 100gsm. Do not use glossy paper! Use only mat paper. Keep your printed version away from damages.

Register with Resume builder and learn more from free eBook that you can find once you register for free account at http://www.getresume.com

Hope this was of help to you!

Good luck!

Rade Santrac
Resume and CV Writer