Hi, You need to divide this into a number of shorter sentences, each starting with a capital letter and ending with a period. Plase do that, and then repost it so that we can offer you more comments. Best wishes, Clive

With a capital letter. How should I start my paragraph about myself?

Hello a) It is a particular festival so ' It's the Lantern Festival' ... and .. ' children of all races '.  You are correct with the capital letters. b) If it's a general custom every year ' They give mooncakes to each

Hi Anon W hat things to should be kept in mind to write an effect ive paragraph? The most fundamental things to keep in mind are correct spelling, punctuation and capitalization. Basically, the first sentence should introduce the general topic

Hi Rowaa, I think your essay needs to be broken into paragraphs. Make sure you use proper punctuation. A sentence ends with a period/full stop (.) not .. or ..., and the new sentence starts with a capital letter. Although most

Hi, why ther is no replies Probably because you have a lot of mistakes, and so far nobody feels like spending their time to correct it all. I will correct the first paragraph. My colleagues were talking about going swimming

Welcome to the forum! What is the theme of your essay? Usually the first paragraph introduces the essay, and what you are going to talk about. It seems like a reporter's story about Mike's lecture. Is that correct? Or is it your personal

How is the exercise structured? Are you given the paper, told to mark it up, and then hand it back? Or do you do face-to-face discussions? The way may daughters' classes have done it is to spend a few minutes reading it, then they meet. You

Hi siva, A paragraph contains sentences that are connected in meaning. Each sentence should start with a capital letter, and each should end with a period, which goes immediately after the last word. Don't leave a space. This sounds

Hello, I work for an online editing and proofreading site which handles a fair number of personal statements and motivation letters for postgraduate students. Please see my profile for more info. I won't do your whole letter here, but I will