Welcome to the forums. We will help you after you write your first draft. It's not "help" if we simply do an assignment for you. For you to learn, you have to try to do things yourself. Remember that you will need to

1) I don't know if yours is technically incorrect, (except for "it it", which i assume is a typo) but certainly "It never works when you need it to" would be much more common. 2) okay except for capitalization 3) (based on

Now that my wife has proofread my text, here are her corrections: M y name... (I missed the capitalization). ...That's the first year for me. (I missed the end period). Also, she suggests placing two spaces between sentences, rather than one

Dear friends, Does anybody know why the word "I" should be written with capital letter? However, my tounge language does the contrary. Instead of "I" in capital letter, we write "You" in capital letter. Please help

Hi, I have some questions. I know the /a man who took this picture. - Only one person took the picture, so use "the." S he is the /a teacher that I like the best. - There is only one "best-liked teacher," so use

Capitalization and punctuation are important. A sentence that uses the right words but not the right punctuation or capitalization is not correct. If we are not friends now, we can't be when I get there.

Girlfriends just love proper capitalization and punctuation! But spending a lot of money on them doesn't hurt! CJ Your quip about money made me thing of this old joke: Girls like attention (=time you spend on

Girlfriends just love proper capitalization and punctuation! But spending a lot of money on them doesn't hurt! CJ

Girlfriends just love proper capitalization and punctuation!

The word "I" is always capitalised. Sentences begin with a capital letter and end with a period (or question mark or exclamation mark). Some of the commas I've suggested are not mandatory. I just feel they help make the