By Capital letters, Dates

Feebs11 wrote:neither - it is written "c/o ***" Hi Feebs, There are many other expressions of the kind c/o like: D/O - daughter of S/O - father of D.O.B. - date of birth Should these expressions also be written in small letters, but generally these expressions occur in the beginning of...

I was recently requested by a recruitment agency to provide them with my CV, so they will be able to find me a job. I have prepared this CV for that propose. I highly appreciate if you review my CV and tell me about every kind of errors that I have made from the content to style, even...

spelling errors highlighted in this colour other comments/amendments in pink. You are also being rather random in your use of capital letters. It seems very lazy to use the same job description word for word each time. CURICULAM VITATE (personal information removed by...

Hi, you really upset me a lot when you did not have a date with me, because I probably found a lot of enjoyment in this dating. There are quite a lot of things about this sentnece that are odd in meaning and that are unidiomatic. Let me suggest that you say it this way: You really upset me a...

Hi Vincent, i would be grateful if someone can shed some light on the use of "as and when". i have an example here: We will update the information as and when necessary. it seems to me that "as and when" is similar to either "as" or "when". so why say both at the same time? It's really just...

Hi, First, put your address at the top right corner, followed by the date. A little lower and on the left, put the company's name and address. Then say - Dear Sir/Madam, I wish to cancel my Sky Box Digital service immediately. I'm not satisfied with the service or with the...

Hi, I've gone through the first paragraph for you and highlighted problems in the rest. Your main difficulty seems to be the use of singular/plural, verb tenses and knowing when you need a determiner. There are other errors as well though. Once again, NO CAPITAL LETTER AFTER COMMAS! Nicely...

1. Run a spell-check. You seem to have problems with plurals as well, so work on that. 2. Re-write the first paragraph. The first sentence has you tying yourself in knots. Just state that you are writing to apply for the internship. The second sentence needs to take a different emphasis: why...

Hi Kroskris, Welcome to the Forum. My dictionary says that compare followed by to often expresses similarities, and that with often implies a greater degree of formal analysis. That sounds about right to me. However, it goes on to note that in current usage, to and with are often...