In Capital letters^x, Letter of motivation^x, Universities^x

I am part of an online editing and proofreading service. For more info on this service, please see my profile. Here is my revision of your first two paragraphs (which I would combine into one) I am a 4th Semester business administration student at *** in Germany. I am writing to apply for the...

Hi all, I'm another person that needs help with a Letter of Motivation... It would be great if you had a look at it. I would be very thankful for any comment on the structure, grammar..., also I'm interested in the expression you would have of me after reading the lom. The institution I...