i've just taken a mock TOEFL exam. here is my speaking response and i hope someone here will read it and tell me my mistakes (or correct words , grammar..)Thanks in advance. (bold words are sentences that i think they may have a problem)

Is as well as considered a parenthical phrase? Should it be set off with commas? Thanks! My non-linguistic view thinks not. I may be wrong but one of the "as well as" usages has a prepositional property which is typically

Hi all!!! I am going to apply to a university and they want me to write an essay. It should be between 2000 and 3000 words and caver the following aspects: My motivation for the MSc-programme that I chose. Why I wish to conduct this programme

The Tale of Walt Disney (DRAFT) Once upon a time in a faraway land, where all things are beautiful, all creatures big and small, there lies a young boy born to be one of the successful legends of world class entertainment of all time. His name was

Ooh, what's wrong, right clothes for inhibitions? / You couldn't afford the price of admission. Now the girl in this scene is wearing black body-fitting clothes. So is the guy telling her the clothes are not just for looking and she

One big Thank you for your help, D! But some things left out foggy to me. Ooh, what's wrong, right clothes for inhibitions? / You couldn't afford the price of admission. Now the girl in this scene is wearing black body-fitting clothes. So

I have taken your points into consideration. Hope these 2 options do not come off as arrogant this time round. First and foremost – I have to proclaim my love for pastry and desert. There is nothing like gorging myself with a bowl of Mango

I have taken your points into consideration. Hope the 2 options do not come off as arrogant this time round. First and foremost – I have to proclaim my love for pastry and desert. There is nothing like gorging myself with a bowl of Mango

Hi, I would like to improve on my letter. This letter is to a pastry shop owner, who isn't pleased with the comments on the my blog. I'm trying to resolve this dispute, as best as i can. Where can I improve? How do I sound convincing,

Hi, I would like to improve on my letter. This letter is to a pastry shop owner, who isn't pleased with the comments on the my blog. I'm trying to resolve this dispute, as best as i can. Where can I improve? How do I sound convincing,