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Pleasee help me with my grammar Studying Abroad If you are an American college student, you should consider studying abroad. Many American college students have a problem record on ethnocentrism, personal grow and indifference of the rest of

Hello! I'm writing a letter of motivation to our local office for international relations. So I have to convince them to accept me and to arrange an exchange with an American university. This is a very raw version but I would appreciate it if

This is my statement to apply an exchange student program... please make some corrections for me.. During the summer vacation, I went to Thailand as a volunteer. The main works were teaching English to elementary school students and

Living without literacy Life without the ability to read in American society is a daunting idea to the literates. When I came to America in the winter of 1993, I didn't had profound knowledge of English language. I was able to decipher all

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It seems to me entirely reasonable that if students of English from Tierra del Fuego meet students of English from Japan that when they meet each group will expect the other group to speak the same language. Many of such students are

Below is an edited copy of a letter I recieved while trying to get into grad school. I had a cummulative gpa of 2.51 in undergrad due to a change of major. The requirements to get into the school require me to have a 2.75 for the last 22 classes I

Eleanor Roosevelt was born on October 11, 1884, in New York City. She was the first of six children born by Anna Hall and Elliot Roosevelt . (This sentence implies that Elliot also gave birth. This is very unlikely.) She was the oldest of Anna

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