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Are you writing the whole piece with 'I' as the subject, or are you merely including a lot of 'I think', 'in my opinion', etc? If it is the latter case, the easiest route is simply to delete those comment phrases. Much stronger writing is produced by saying Roses are bad for your health...

Excuse our good humor on a party night Rob. We’re handling this between snacks and sparkling wine. The weather’s picked up and we’re enjoying the evening (but on the job too). To be of some use to you, I guess we should take the markers criteria one by one and see if you’ve measured up. OK,...

Interesting. May I make a note of our guidelines? English essay Comparison essay Preferred format: Thesis statement, forecast, definition paragraph, example paragraph, definition paragraph, example paragraph, etc. to conclusion. Granted, Aileen, Rob has made faith statements and indicated that...

Rob, I remember adding to another essay thread just like this. May I copy the first paragraph from that essay for you. This is possibly how a better classification essay could begin (I don’t mean to be rude). “A hero is a person noted or admired for nobility, courage, and outstanding...

Hey everyone! First-timer to this forum. Was wondering if anyone can help me out? I recently wrote an essay for my Critical Writing class (English 102) at college. Unfortunately, it didn't do too well. My instructor said that it was too vague and didn't have very good examples. He likes the...