By Clauses, Yours sincerely

with refernce to your letter dated clause 5 regarding the oil filteration work we already submitted our quotaion dated 25th November 2006, to the Ware House Manager Banglore and The Assistant General Manager (EMD), but we didn't get any reply or workorder form your end. After getting the Work...

Jon, I think your letter reads quite well. One sentence stood out to me because it is the same type of structure that I have difficulty with. I am going to play with it a bit. You might find you don't like my revised letter. If that is the case, at least you are better prepared to tweak...