. Always leave one space after a comma, colon, semicolon or full stop. My friends often go to the gymnasium to work out, but I think differently from them. I go to work by bicycle every day , I take my daughter for a walk after supper , I do

Hello: I work for an online proofreading and editing service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't revise your whole essay here, but I will show you the changes I would make in your first two paragraphs (which I have combined into

Hello, I have a quick question. I wrote an essay on Thursday, and I'm not sure if I punctuated a sentence correctly: Some repent for a lifetime; others, an eternity. Was a colon or a semicolon appropriate? I know colons are used with

I work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't go through the whole letter here, but I will show you how I would revise the first paragraph. Dear __ __: Although I am grateful for the

Hi, Couldnt you say time is short; however, we can still get the job done ??? but i'm no expert, actually im a twelve year old boy typing up an essay... Yes, that's OK, although you need to start with a capital 'T'. Do you think

Couldnt you say time is short; however, we can still get the job done ??? but i'm no expert, actually im a twelve year old boy typing up an essay...

HI Doll, Describe one event from your country's history, and explain why it was important. Provide clear explanations and details in supoort of your answer. (This is supposed to be a descriptive essay.) The Gallipoli Campaign still has

Hi Collegebound, Welcome to the forums. Overall, you have a good essay. Stop worrying about your paragraphs. However, I 'm not sure what the topic was that Wisconsin asked for. Where did you put it? As vice president of my Catholic school’s

I got my essay back from the professor recently and I don't understand some of the comments she made. Here is a paragraph and the comment: (the essay is on the book The Bluest Eye) To illustrate, Pecola assigns intrinsic value to light

Is the follwing sentece a run on? Parris’ selfish ways remained intact when John Proctor arrived at court with Marry Warren to accuse Abigail and the rest of the girls of fabricating the witchcraft allegations. If I need any commas, semi