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.I have crossed out inappropriate material and underlined some problem areas. You have trouble with commas and with chatting:In taking upon my Senior Honors Project I have thrown myself over a ledge with the intention to climb back up. Through this year my drive, enthusiasm, and patience have...

Also, you don't need the part in red, in fact it's confusing: The hardest part about making the cookies is obtaining all of the ingredients required to do so without going to more than one store.

Futurehuman11 wrote: The hardest part about making the cookies is attaining all of the ingredients required to do so without going to more than one store.I think you mean 'obtaining'.

The hardest part about making the cookies is attaining all of the ingredients required to do so without going to more than one store.

Anonymous wrote: TEST YOURSELF: Which sentences need commas between coordinate adjectives? Could someone please fill in the answers using RED font.1. In the attic we found old thin paper cutouts we used to play with when we were children. 2. The poster depicted a brown-haired, blue-eyed child...

TEST YOURSELF: Which sentences need commas between coordinate adjectives? Could someone please fill in the answers using RED font.1. In the attic we found old thin paper cutouts we used to play with when we were children. 2. The poster depicted a brown-haired blue-eyed child wearing a red denim...

Let's try with a simpler sentence. Mary makes delicious cookies, chocolate chip being my favorite. If you changed being to is you get this: *Mary makes delicious cookies, chocolate chip is my favorite. This is called a comma splice - Both parts are complete sentences, and you cannot join them...

" Danielle likes to make sugar cookies ; !! she doesn't, however, eat many of them." Sabs, you are besides the point and barking up the wrong tree. Once more in one-word syllables: In your example above, "however" is set of by a semicolon from the previous clause. The reason why it is...

Anonymous wrote: 1.Combine each set of simple sentences below to produce the kind of sentence specified in parentheses. 1) People begin to recycle. They generate much less trash. (Complex.) <No idea, but TIP: Using subordinating conjunctions!> 2) Environmentalists have...

Hi - 2) There would NOT be a possessive s in the expample you cite. A David Bowie song, a Bob Dylan song - the proper noun modifies "song" without the apostrophe if you use "a" or "the." If you wanted to refer to a SPECIFIC song, you would include the apostroph. "Can you sing Bob Dylan's...