By Commas, Hyphenation

Some tips: You have commas sprinkled all over where none belong. Don't use a & in business writing - spell words out. What is "body corporate management"? It seems like the wrong word choice, and if it's not, it's jargon that the lay person won't understand. "one tightly wrapped, neat...

Hi Emilia,I am glad to hear that my suggestions have been useful! Good luck Emilia wrote: ...broadening the international point-of-view. Should be "point of view" without hyphenation ... the multifaceted experience of living and studying at a large campus university. Should be "university...

Sorry to be so long, but I have been looking for a good comprehensive internet source on dashes; all the information seems to be in bits and pieces, and some of it is quite contradictory. Here is a good excerpt, however, from the Get it Write website: 'A number of you have written to ask us to...