By Commas, Motivation letters

Mimoi2 wrote:Does anyone have any suggestions for this motivation letter? Anything would be really appreciated! Name Address1 Address2 Phone Date To Whom It May Concern: I would put a comma after the Concern rather than the semi-colon. With this letter I would like to express...

make the most of the time I will spend there. I hope you will consider my application and can regard me as a well motivated candidate to this program. Yours faithfully,

Hello,I was looking around on Internet for help on writing a motivation letter for applying to a Master's degree and found this very worthy site.I would be really grateful if someone had time to take a look at mine. I do understand that I am the one to write the letter but I would appreciate...

Thank you for your comments. I really get myself in trouble when deciding where to put commas because in portuguese we have different reasons to use them. And it also seem that i missed that preposition class... I will review it and post it again, ok? Daiane

Problems highlighted for you in blue. Comments in yellow. I am writing to apply for *** PhD. Program on Marketing field of concentration (this makes little sense to me - are you sure it is correct?) next September. I got a master degree at *** Business School from University *** , one of the...

Looks good, just a few little grammatical changes and tidying up a few stray commas- parameters in the Indian Ocean I was appointed Junior Research Fellow Module was modified to get a better representation To achieve that I developed a new smoothing technique named the one pass desmoother...

Hi everyone! I'm applying for a master programme at a german university and of course I have to write a motivation letter. The whole programme will be held in English. And because I'm not a native speaker I'd greatly appreciate your constructive criticism for the revision. The deadline is...

Hello all wonderful members! I am lucky because I found this community by chance, it seems to be a great place! I am writing a motivation letter for an organization offering a full-year scholarship at an U.S. top unversity. (The application also includes a resume a study plan and two...

(I forgot to log in again, sorry-- MM) Thank you, Yohanna, but you didn't find all of the spelling mistakes. Colon, not exclamation mark, after Madam from August, not form August Always two spaces after the period at the end of a sentence the capital, not a capital Faculty of Social...

To whom, not For whom Colon, not comma after concern for the patent, not for patent spell out small numbers: three in a good, not within good to European, not at European no hyphen: North American no capitals: the construction site gained in not gained into the no comma after...