Both versions are correct (except for the extra space before the comma), but the first is clearer.

Hi, Which sentence is grammatically correct? Someone suggests that itis compulsory to write a comma after "for example", is it true? Sentence1: I have a lot of achievements , for example 90 points in exam A,

Moreover,God's inpired Word, the Holy Bible,also sacred. Is this correct? Is it better if I use "is" to replace the second comma? Thanks! Just recovered my password..^^

Forward should be forwarded to match processed (both in the past) and the comma is not needed. Your application has been processed and forwarded to the committee for review.

I agree with Amy - none seem incorrect to me, though I would probably combine "will not" to make "won't." It's true the comma isn't needed, but that the difference between what the rulebook says is correct

Hello, Mariott, 1. I hope this will make you happy and will not be forgotten.- correct; no comma before and when the subject of the second clause is ellipted, as shown by the materials in the Survey of English Usage. 2. I hope this will make

Hi and welcome to the forums. You need the comma.

In the following sentence , do I need to place a comma after the introductory participial phrase? Walking in the street, the boy spotted one of his friends.  I have read a grammar book, which mentions that you only need to separate the

Use commas when the adjectives are of equal weight (modify the noun equally). If you can simply reverse the order of the adjectives, then you probably need a comma In the first phrase, I think "small" modifies "circular" more

1 A dog's brain is disproportionately small (compared) to the size of head. Among mammals, a dog's brain is disproportionately small for his head. 2 She knows him so well as to be able to write a message in his place and people would