The story “Tears of Autumn” by Yoshiko Uchida is a great story, which the settings affect the story by many ways. This story is mostly about a young woman gone to America from Japan for freedom and marriage. The settings affect the story a lot as

The story “Tears of Autumn” by Yoshiko Uchida is a great story, which the settings affect the story by many ways. This story is mostly about a young woman gone to America from Japan for freedom and marriage. The settings affect the story a lot as

Hi, Here are some edits. In an essay, avoid contractions, like 'don't'. Say 'do not'. Please ask if you don't understand the reason for any of these changes. Best wishes, Clive Topics: Does

Assuming these are spoken English, most of them are fine. The only sentence that sounds more like written English is Party streamers are widely used in Carnival parties. It sounds like it's from an essay on Carnival parties rather than a

OK, here are a few specific things I see that may be problems in the first few paragraphs. 1st paragraph - Is going to movies a social standard? Or is it an activity? Your first sentence is 3 lines long. It is difficult to read and needs to be

. I have underlined some problem areas: Dance is my favorite sport Ever since I was a little girl dance has always been my favorite sport. When I was three, I would put glitter on my face and run around the house twirling. Dance is and has

Hi Julielai I am trying to make this essay more persausive can you help with this. My Teacher says it is more imformitive and it shouldn't be. I am not sure what shes asking for. Heart disease is the number one cause of death among men and

Hello Ipkqi, and welcome to English forums. I have deleted unnecessary verbiage and underlined other problem areas: When it comes to talk about cooperation, most people seem to tend to choose partners who have the same views with them . Because

I wonder why 'did not' cannot be used as it is of the same meaning as 'didn't'? There is no difference in meaning. But whenever a contraction exists, always use the contraction if you want to sound more natural. The exception is in writing.

Most contractions are just used to represent the way we speak, so use them only for casual writing. When you are writing a business letter or an essay for class, use the full form ( do not, I will, etc). There are some contractions, however, that