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Re: Essay:Agree/disagree? Television has detroyed communication among friends and family.

Highlighted a few things for you to fix. Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has detroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. While some people have stated that television has destroyed...

Essay:Agree/disagree? Television has detroyed communication among friends and family.

It's been quite sometime I've not write any essay. I have been really busy about getting into college and working as an F+B attendant. It seems like my writing skill get rush away after this couple months of not-writing-at-all; and it need to be brushed up a little(well, maybe whole...

Can someone look over my essay ? thank you so much

Internet is recently one of the fast, convenient ways for people to communicate with other people around the world. Especially with social networking sites, people are now able to create their own world online. They can do all the things they want to do even things they cant do them in their...

Help proofreading "A Doll's House"

I have finished writing an essay, which is due tomorrow. As an ESL student, I have the feeling that I have a lot of grammatical mistakes. Is there any sentence where you wonder what the heck I am trying to say? Hope anyone can help! The Woman Within the Doll The Baltimore Sun...

Re: Its me again! I told you I was on a mission to find a scholarship!

I have underlined some problem areas and struck out portions that should be deleted; these latter may call for revision of the remaining text. An essay is not a conversation; it is a formal, carefully-written presentation of ideas:I don’t believe people should not serve 2 years in the military....

Re: Please, correct my review of the film

With these changes, I think your essay is now competent:I've seen this movie twice and it astonishes me a lot. Each character fits into themselves a bit of truth . There are many films with the same scenario, but this director amazes his audience with absolutely new explanations of events...

Re: And strong were they.

Yes, and both are rather literary or poetic-- not to be used in an argumentative essay or in casual conversation with close acquaintances unless you are smiling broadly to share the joke.

Re: Same goes for South East Asia.

Terryxpress wrote:"I can understand the reason why South Asia is so-called, because it is the southern part of the Asian continent." (South Asia is part of the Asian continent, so it can't lie south of it (Asia) - it can (obviously) lie south of North Asia! (lol) "The same goes for South-East...

Re: Same goes for South East Asia.

"I can understand the reason why South Asia is so-called, because it is the southern part of the Asian continent." (South Asia is part of the Asian continent, so it can't lie south of it (Asia) - it can (obviously) lie south of North Asia! (lol) "The same goes for South-East Asia." (though...

Could you help me to proof this essay?

Analyse the formality of the article in SCMP It is indispensable for us to use an appropriate style when writing. There is no doubt that formal style should be practiced for newspaper as objectivity and impersonality are important. South China Morning Post is one of the most prevalent...