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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Countable nouns tag:Commas' matching tags 'Countable nouns' and 'Commas'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aCountable+nouns+tag%3aCommas&amp;tag=Countable+nouns,Commas&amp;orTags=0</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Countable nouns tag:Commas' matching tags 'Countable nouns' and 'Commas'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Debug Build: 3110.25895)</generator><item><title>Re: Food / foods</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/FoodFoods/2/ggqlc/Post.htm#535417</link><pubDate>Tue, 01 Jul 2008 21:36:43 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:535417</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><description>Hi,&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#0000bf;"&gt;I&amp;nbsp;read the following sentences in a book. I don&amp;#39;t understand why the first sentence use &amp;#39;food&amp;#39; instead of &amp;#39;foods&amp;#39; . The second sentence shows that food is a countable noun.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;span&gt;&amp;#39;Food&amp;#39; can be both countable and non-countable, and we often don&amp;#39;t much care about making a distinction or speaking consistently.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#0000bf;"&gt;Also as a side question, why there is no comma before &amp;#39;and&amp;#39;, in #1sentence, even though it is acting as a conjunction between two indpendent clauses.?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;span style="COLOR:#111111;"&gt;Until I read posts here by some other students of English&amp;nbsp;who mentioned this so-called &amp;#39;rule&amp;#39;, I had never heard of it. You&amp;#39;ll read lots of sentences that do not use a comma before &amp;#39;and&amp;#39;. I&amp;#39;d say that some factors that influence comma use are the length of the sentence and the complexity of its structure.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#0000bf;"&gt;1. Go to a mall food court &lt;span style="TEXT-DECORATION:underline;"&gt;and &lt;/span&gt;make a list of &lt;strong&gt;food&lt;/strong&gt; that is good for your health.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;2. They try to avoid &lt;strong&gt;foods&lt;/strong&gt; that are high in fat or sugar.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#111111;"&gt;Best wishes, Clive&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;</description></item><item><title>Food / foods</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/FoodFoods/ggqkx/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 01 Jul 2008 21:24:30 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:535412</guid><dc:creator>Musicgold</dc:creator><description>Hi,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I read the following sentences in a book. I don&amp;#39;t understand why the first setence use &amp;#39;food&amp;#39; instead of &amp;#39;foods&amp;#39; . The second sentence shows that food is a countable noun. &lt;br /&gt;Also as a side question, why there is no comma before &amp;#39;and&amp;#39;, in #1sentence, even though it is acting as a conjunction between two indpendent clauses.?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#0000ff;"&gt;1. Go to a mall food court &lt;span style="text-decoration:underline;"&gt;and &lt;/span&gt;make a list of &lt;strong&gt;food&lt;/strong&gt; that is good for your health.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;2. They try to avoid &lt;strong&gt;foods&lt;/strong&gt; that are high in fat or sugar.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#111111;"&gt;Thanks,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;MG.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Paragraph Suggestions</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ParagraphSuggestions/ggrpg/post.htm#530865</link><pubDate>Sun, 22 Jun 2008 08:10:14 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:530865</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><description>.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;p&gt;Its versatility assists me adeptly in studies.-- &lt;strong&gt;The computer assists, not the versatility; &amp;#39;adept&amp;#39; is for people.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;And wrought mean shaped, so why its wrong here ? -&lt;strong&gt;- It is the wrong tense.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;connected is wrong word? -- &lt;strong&gt;The verb should be passive in aspect.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;wavy mean twisted cables , thats not sutibale as well? -- &lt;strong&gt;&amp;#39;Wavy&amp;#39; is for hair; it is a pleasant image, unlike &amp;#39;twisted&amp;#39;.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;central is lined because i used capital C? -- &lt;strong&gt;&amp;#39;Unit&amp;#39; is a singular countable noun, and the sentence is a comma splice (you need a conjunction).&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt; &lt;em&gt;&lt;span style="text-decoration:underline;"&gt;shelf of the table&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp; please do explain why its wrong as well. -- &lt;/em&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Tables don&amp;#39;t normally have shelves; desks may&lt;em&gt;.&lt;/em&gt;&amp;nbsp; Also, objects would have to go on a shelf, not at it.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: tense-hadn't</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/TenseHadnt/zdwkv/post.htm#434830</link><pubDate>Thu, 25 Oct 2007 19:50:35 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:434830</guid><dc:creator>Yankee</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Newguest wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;p&gt;HI&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:18"&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;b&gt;HI !&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;IS IT REALLY A BIG MISTAKE TO PUT A COMMA AFTER "ALI?" &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;It is a little mistake.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;WHY CAN'T WE SAY "A BAD LUCK" &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;The word 'luck' is uncountable.&amp;nbsp; You cannot use 'a' with an uncountable noun.&amp;nbsp; You can say something such as 'a bit of bad luck' or 'some bad luck', however.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I WROTE "TODAY" AT THE END OF THE SENTENCE CAUSE, BUT MAYBE I'M WRONG, HE'S STILL ALIVE, THAT'S WHY I WROTE "HE WOULD SUFFER"&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I KNOW THERE IS SOMETHING LIKE MIXED CONDITIONALS. I WROTE "HE HADN'T BEEN A BOXER" BECAUSE HE'S NOT ONE ANY MORE, &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;That doesn't change the fact that you have begun a Type III conditional&lt;/font&gt;. &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;The unchangeable fact is that he was a boxer and therefore the condition ("wasn't/hadn't been a boxer") is impossible to fulfil -- whether or not he is still a boxer is basically irrelevant.&lt;/font&gt; AND "HE WOULD SUFFER" CAUSE HE'S STILL ALIVE. &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;As I see it, the problem with "would suffer" in your sentence is that, even with the word 'today' added, it could be interpretted as a reference to only now and the future.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;THANKS&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/p&gt;By the way, typing in all CAPITAL letters is known as "shouting" and is often seen as UNFRIENDLY. &lt;img src="/emoticons/emotion-5.gif" alt="Wink [;)]" /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Writing (1)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Writing1/dhcqp/post.htm#285819</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Oct 2006 11:25:54 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:285819</guid><dc:creator>nona the brit</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Ok, but it won't fix all the errors in this piece of writing.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The &lt;U&gt;April's&lt;/U&gt; socio-economic growth has &lt;U&gt;remained&lt;/U&gt; the same as that of the first 3 months. &lt;U&gt;Industrial production&lt;/U&gt; had fairly high production and step by step resumed &lt;U&gt;the&amp;nbsp;previous growth pace&lt;/U&gt;.However, many&amp;nbsp;problems haven't been overcome: &lt;U&gt;The basic construction investment capital&lt;/U&gt;,especially the &lt;U&gt;state credit capital&lt;/U&gt;,&amp;nbsp;has been low, the investment demand stimulation measures haven't been done strongly &lt;U&gt;so&lt;/U&gt; the &lt;U&gt;efficiency&lt;/U&gt; has been &lt;U&gt;limited&lt;/U&gt;,&amp;nbsp;the consumption prices and services have decreased&amp;nbsp; and will be to decrease in &lt;U&gt;next few&amp;nbsp;month&lt;/U&gt;.&amp;nbsp;It &lt;U&gt;was the remark&lt;/U&gt; of the &lt;U&gt;Planning and Investment minister&lt;/U&gt; at this meeting.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;1/Is it obligatory to write &lt;B&gt;the&lt;/B&gt; before&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;targets,industrial production &lt;/B&gt;and&lt;B&gt; next few&amp;nbsp;few months&lt;/B&gt;?Why? &lt;EM&gt;I can't find 'targets'. No 'the' before industrial production as it is just industry in general. 'The' next few months as they are specific months.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;2/&lt;B&gt;April's&lt;/B&gt; socio-economic growth (1)= &lt;B&gt;April&lt;/B&gt; socio-economic growth (2)&amp;nbsp;?If not, what is wrong? Why? &lt;EM&gt;April's - the growth belongs to April. See my previous comment about the 'the'.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;3/the&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;previous&lt;/B&gt; growth pace (3) =the&amp;nbsp;growth pace &lt;B&gt;before&lt;/B&gt; (4)= the&amp;nbsp;growth pace &lt;B&gt;earlier&lt;/B&gt;? (5)If not, what is wrong? Why? &lt;EM&gt;The previous rate of growth is better. Pace just doesn't really work with growth. &lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;4/Do you write &lt;B&gt;efficiency&lt;/B&gt; or &lt;B&gt;effectiveness&lt;/B&gt; here? Why?What is the difference in meaning btw them? &lt;EM&gt;See my previous comment.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;5/Do&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;remained&lt;/B&gt; and&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;preserved&lt;/B&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;have the same meaning and are they interchangeable?If not, what is the difference in meaning btw them? &lt;EM&gt;No they are not interchangeable here. &lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;6/Do you write &lt;B&gt;Planning and Investment minister&lt;/B&gt; or &lt;B&gt;Plan and Investment minister&lt;/B&gt; ? Why? &lt;EM&gt;Planning and Investment Minister. He/she is in charge of planning, not plans.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;7/In &lt;B&gt;state credit capital&lt;/B&gt;, is &lt;B&gt;state&lt;/B&gt; an uncountable noun? &lt;EM&gt;depends. Are you talking of the credit capital available in the state (non-count) or something called 'State Credit Capital' (count)&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;8/Do you write&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;it was the remark&lt;/B&gt;&amp;nbsp;or &lt;B&gt;it were the remarks&lt;/B&gt; here? &lt;EM&gt;This whole sentence doesn't make sense. Do you mean that the whole of the paragraph is his remarks? Then 'Those were the remarks of.... It would be better to state this at the beginning though 'At the meeting, the minister remarked that......&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;9/ Is &lt;B&gt;limited&lt;/B&gt; an adjectif or a verb used in the passive? &lt;EM&gt;AJECTIVE adjecect&lt;STRONG&gt;IVE &lt;/STRONG&gt;adject&lt;STRONG&gt;IVE &lt;/STRONG&gt;adject&lt;STRONG&gt;IVE.&lt;/STRONG&gt; You always misspell this - it's a bad habit you need to break. However, not sure which it is, sorry.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;10/Do you write &lt;B&gt;The basic construction investment capital&lt;/B&gt; or &lt;STRONG&gt;The basic constructional investment capiatal&lt;/STRONG&gt; ? Why?What is the difference btw them? &lt;EM&gt;Basic construction investment capital (no the). The capital is to be used for construction, not used for constructional. If you use constructional then it is saying that the investment capital in someway constructs something directly. Money doesn't construct things. It may pay for materials and labour to construct things, but it isn't out there digging holes and pouring concrete itself.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;12/ Is there comma after &lt;STRONG&gt;so&lt;/STRONG&gt;? &lt;EM&gt;No comma.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Writing (1)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Writing1/dhcxd/post.htm</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Oct 2006 09:41:31 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:285773</guid><dc:creator>Tung Quoc</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Please read:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Government's April meeting: Announcing &lt;U&gt;targets&lt;/U&gt; and &lt;U&gt;capital&lt;/U&gt; for people to decide and supervise.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The &lt;U&gt;April's&lt;/U&gt; socio-economic growth has &lt;U&gt;remained&lt;/U&gt; the same as that of the first 3 months. &lt;U&gt;Industrial production&lt;/U&gt; had fairly high production and step by step resumed &lt;U&gt;the&amp;nbsp;previous growth pace&lt;/U&gt;.However, many&amp;nbsp;problems haven't been overcome: &lt;U&gt;The basic construction investment capital&lt;/U&gt;,especially the &lt;U&gt;state credit capital&lt;/U&gt;,&amp;nbsp;has been low, the investment demand stimulation measures haven't been done strongly &lt;U&gt;so&lt;/U&gt; the &lt;U&gt;efficiency&lt;/U&gt; has been &lt;U&gt;limited&lt;/U&gt;,&amp;nbsp;the consumption prices and services have decreased&amp;nbsp; and will be to decrease in &lt;U&gt;next few&amp;nbsp;month&lt;/U&gt;.&amp;nbsp;It &lt;U&gt;was the remark&lt;/U&gt; of the &lt;U&gt;Planning and Investment minister&lt;/U&gt; at this meeting.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;B&gt;In this context&lt;/B&gt;:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;1/Is it obligatory to write &lt;B&gt;the&lt;/B&gt; before&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;targets,industrial production &lt;/B&gt;and&lt;B&gt; next few&amp;nbsp;few months&lt;/B&gt;?Why?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;2/&lt;B&gt;April's&lt;/B&gt; socio-economic growth (1)= &lt;B&gt;April&lt;/B&gt; socio-economic growth (2)&amp;nbsp;?If not, what is wrong? Why?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;3/the&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;previous&lt;/B&gt; growth pace (3) =the&amp;nbsp;growth pace &lt;B&gt;before&lt;/B&gt; (4)= the&amp;nbsp;growth pace &lt;B&gt;earlier&lt;/B&gt;? (5)If not, what is wrong? Why?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;4/Do you write &lt;B&gt;efficiency&lt;/B&gt; or &lt;B&gt;effectiveness&lt;/B&gt; here? Why?What is the difference in meaning btw them?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;5/Do&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;remained&lt;/B&gt; and&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;preserved&lt;/B&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;have the same meaning and are they interchangeable?If not, what is the difference in meaning btw them?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;6/Do you write &lt;B&gt;Planning and Investment minister&lt;/B&gt; or &lt;B&gt;Plan and Investment minister&lt;/B&gt; ? Why?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;7/In &lt;B&gt;state credit capital&lt;/B&gt;, is &lt;B&gt;state&lt;/B&gt; an uncountable noun?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;8/Do you write&amp;nbsp;&lt;B&gt;it was the remark&lt;/B&gt;&amp;nbsp;or &lt;B&gt;it were the remarks&lt;/B&gt; here? &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;9/ Is &lt;B&gt;limited&lt;/B&gt; an adjectif or a verb used in the passive?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;10/Do you write &lt;B&gt;The basic construction investment capital&lt;/B&gt; or &lt;STRONG&gt;The basic constructional investment capiatal&lt;/STRONG&gt; ? Why?What is the difference btw them?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;12/ Is there comma after &lt;STRONG&gt;so&lt;/STRONG&gt;?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Thanks&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Q&lt;/P&gt;&amp;nbsp;</description></item><item><title>Re: a great variety of</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGreatVarietyOf/cprrv/post.htm#240741</link><pubDate>Wed, 28 Jun 2006 05:56:52 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:240741</guid><dc:creator>milky</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Diamondrg wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;EM&gt;It is clear from the passage that, among writers of nonfiction, there is a great variety of aim one of which&amp;nbsp;is the desire to please.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Taken from a nationwide exam in Turkey.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Do you think there is anything wrong with this sentence? I do. A comma is needed after the word "aim" and I have doubts about the use of "one of which" to refer to a singular countable noun "aim". What do you think? Can the expression "a great variety of" be used with&amp;nbsp;singular countable nouns?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;a href="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:HcuTXRsYaHIJ:query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html%3Fres%3D9C05E1DC133BF930A35752C0A9679C8B63+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=13" target="_blank" title="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:HcuTXRsYaHIJ:query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html%3Fres%3D9C05E1DC133BF930A35752C0A9679C8B63+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=13"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;a href="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:VZoExRuabdsJ:www.nytimes.com/books/01/06/10/reviews/010610.10eugenit.html+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=12" target="_blank" title="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:VZoExRuabdsJ:www.nytimes.com/books/01/06/10/reviews/010610.10eugenit.html+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=12"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/P&gt;


&lt;P&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;For me, "&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;EM&gt;It is clear from the passage that, among writers of nonfiction, there is&amp;nbsp;wide variation&amp;nbsp;in aim - &amp;nbsp;one&amp;nbsp;example being&amp;nbsp;the desire to please."&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: a great variety of</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGreatVarietyOf/cxqmp/post.htm#240667</link><pubDate>Tue, 27 Jun 2006 22:30:55 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:240667</guid><dc:creator>Goodman</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Diamondrg wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Taken from a nationwide exam in Turkey.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Do you think there is anything wrong with this sentence? I do. A comma is needed after the word "aim" and I have doubts about the use of "one of which" to refer to a singular countable noun "aim". What do you think? Can the expression "a great variety of" be used with&amp;nbsp;singular countable nouns?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;a href="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:HcuTXRsYaHIJ:query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html%3Fres%3D9C05E1DC133BF930A35752C0A9679C8B63+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=13" target="_blank" title="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:HcuTXRsYaHIJ:query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html%3Fres%3D9C05E1DC133BF930A35752C0A9679C8B63+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=13"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;a href="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:VZoExRuabdsJ:www.nytimes.com/books/01/06/10/reviews/010610.10eugenit.html+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=12" target="_blank" title="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:VZoExRuabdsJ:www.nytimes.com/books/01/06/10/reviews/010610.10eugenit.html+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=12"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;EM&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;It is clear from the passage that, among writers of nonfiction, &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#006400&gt;there is a great variety of aim one of which&amp;nbsp;is the desire to please.&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp; The green part of the sentence is kind of &amp;nbsp;awkward to me.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;EM&gt;I personally would use a different word to replace "aim" and perhap "variety", depending on the context of the preceding paragraph.&amp;nbsp; e.g. interest, goal, and intents etc...&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;When we use "one of the", don't forget the plural form and in this case is "aims"&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;"A great varity" is considered a singular non-countable&amp;nbsp;noun.&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;</description></item><item><title>a great variety of</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGreatVarietyOf/cxqlm/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 27 Jun 2006 20:55:27 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:240647</guid><dc:creator>Diamondrg</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;EM&gt;It is clear from the passage that, among writers of nonfiction, there is a great variety of aim one of which&amp;nbsp;is the desire to please.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Taken from a nationwide exam in Turkey.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Do you think there is anything wrong with this sentence? I do. A comma is needed after the word "aim" and I have doubts about the use of "one of which" to refer to a singular countable noun "aim". What do you think? Can the expression "a great variety of" be used with&amp;nbsp;singular countable nouns?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;a href="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:HcuTXRsYaHIJ:query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html%3Fres%3D9C05E1DC133BF930A35752C0A9679C8B63+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=13" target="_blank" title="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:HcuTXRsYaHIJ:query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html%3Fres%3D9C05E1DC133BF930A35752C0A9679C8B63+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=13"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;a href="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:VZoExRuabdsJ:www.nytimes.com/books/01/06/10/reviews/010610.10eugenit.html+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=12" target="_blank" title="http://72.14.221.104/search?q=cache:VZoExRuabdsJ:www.nytimes.com/books/01/06/10/reviews/010610.10eugenit.html+%22a+great+variety+of%22+site:nytimes.com&amp;amp;hl=tr&amp;amp;gl=tr&amp;amp;ct=clnk&amp;amp;cd=12"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: two questions on articles</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/TwoQuestionsOnArticles/cxzkh/post.htm#237446</link><pubDate>Sun, 18 Jun 2006 18:15:57 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:237446</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Hi again,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;1. For No. 1, can you put a comma to make the&amp;nbsp;phrase non-restrictive and use it that way, without deleting it?&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt; You could, but it's rather awkward and unnatural.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;It will be good for them, the Christian students.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;2. For No. 2, what if the list contains a mixture of countable and uncountable nouns like this? How would resolve&amp;nbsp;the issue of putting articles in appropriate places in this situation? For uncountable nouns in the list, should I leave out the articles or, if needed, use&amp;nbsp;appropriate expressions of quantity?&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;I am planning to&amp;nbsp;purchase furniture, a ???desk,&amp;nbsp;costly jewelry, a ????grammar check software and some junk.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;If it's a mixed list, I would include 'a' or 'some' with each item.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Please note that software is not a count noun.&amp;nbsp;Common&amp;nbsp;phrases include 'a piece of software' and 'a software package'.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;If you want to buy some junk, I have some that I can sell you. (ha-ha)&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Best wishes again, Clive&lt;/P&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>