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Sport “I am happy to say, into amateur sport, which is the best and soundest thing in England”. This is what an inspired Scottish-born writer of detective fiction named Arthur Conan Doyle wrote in “The Return of Sherlock Homes”. No matter whether it is an amateur or professional sport,...

I need help editing my essay. ANy help will be great. I think it gets too boring and i'm looking to make it more interesting. thanks here it goes: Stick in one hand and pebbles in my pocket, I was climbing the backyard mango tree on a sunny afternoon. For two hours I had been trying to break a...

Hello, I wrote this essay for my early action school(MIT) where I was deferred . I want to edit it a lot more because I don't think its that great yet. Although writing is my weakness, I really want to make this essay stand out. Any help with editing/formatting and writing style will be awesome....

Just the glaring errors. all sizes *crawling to seek shelter. My rubber gumboots were half-filled with water and I could hear the dripping sound as more water accumulated in *them (what are them???). Note: btw, what does the rain have to do with your goal in life? _________ After I reached...

Hey everyone, I need someone to proof read my essay. I've been continuously revising it and i have to hand in the final draft today Any suggestions or editing will be...

Hi, Here are my comments. I hope they are of value. Good luck. MountainHiker “British Airways flight 332 departing from Gate 6 is now boarding, first class passengers please come forward with your boarding passes,” called out the air stewardess on my last day. At that moment, since I was...

First of all, thank you for attempting to read my essay. This is for my college application, so be as harsh as possible :D Thanks. Also, I think my ending is a little weak, can anyone help me on this? Thanks again. “British Airways flight 332 departing...