Hi, 1. Concerning the position of the date: yes, it is something to discuss about, I guess (right or left, but definitely between the addresses blocks). I will try the right, then. 2. Concerning the function of my letter: it is a cover

Hi Clive! Thank you for your time and feedback. I really appreciated you pointing out the vagueness and imprecision of my sentences. I know that it sounds very weird, but it is true. That was the kind of feedback I was looking for as long with the

Hi, Here are a few edits and suggestions. Clive Air Asia Manager Human Resource s LCC Terminal Jalan KLIA S3, Southern Support Zone, Kuala Lumpur International Airport, 64000 Sepang Selangor Darul Ehsan,

Hi, OK, here are some edits and suggestions. Clive I would like to apply the job in credit analyst ,could you please help me about this I assume the following is your own address. Put it, and the date, in the top right

Hello Mister Micawber I am in the process of emailing professors regarding my phd appliction and to work with them. I would appreciate if you could review the following letter, Dear,   I am a recent graduate student from University of

Thank you Clive. I'll post the letter here. Dear Sir or Madam, I am very interested in the Systems Analyst (Job ID ____) position advertised at HotJobs.com. I’m 23 years old, obtained my master’s degree from the University_name two years ago.

Hello there! Can anyone help me to improve this covering letter which I will need for an internship? Thanks a lot! To whom it may concern, Please accept this letter along with my Resume in consideration for a internship position within your

Hi, OK. It just seemed to me that some of the detail in your letter (eg south of France) belongs better in your resume. I'll just suggest some edits. Dear Mr Re: User Interface and Concept Designer position I am very interested in the above

Before I stared to write my cover letter, I found this website and learned a lot from good posts in this forum. Thanks for these guys who posted them. I would be more happy if any help to correct my Cover letter. Thank you! -- Subject: apply for

Hi everybody, here is my cover letter in its latest release!! This is for an investment bank in the UAE... Who could have a look at it, in particular to improve the formal aspect of the letter? Thank you!! Sharleen Dear Sir or Madam, I am