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Re: URGENT!!! Would someone check my cover letter for me, please?

Slider — Tue, 04 Dec 2007 03:52:12 GMT

I tried to improve your letter as best as I could. Some sentences I changed completely, some I left the same. If no one else responds to this post, hopefully this will help you. Note: I wasn't sure if you meant major or minor in Finance, so you might want to double check that. Major is primary, minor is secondary.

Good luck!

- Mike

Dear Ms. A,

I was informed by your advertisement on OOO that CCC is now hiring secretary/administration officer position. I would like to express my interest by sending my Curriculum Vitae along with this application letter.

As this moment, I am a new graduate student of AAA University from MMM (VVVi University Campus). My major was Business Management with a minor? in Finance. I received excellent grades in the majority of my classes.

Last year I had one-month internship with BBB working in the Sales Department. I learned some skills which I believe will help me do well in the position above. Some of those skills include translating, communicating, and doing some short financial reporting. Moreover, I not only have the ability to prepare a short oral presentation, but also do well on computer software.

Since XYZ is a company which focuses on new activities (fixed income market) which have the potential for future growth, I would be glad to be on the staff at XYZ.

I believe that I would be a valuable addition to your team, and am looking forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Nguyen, Thu Hien

URGENT!!! Would someone check my cover letter for me, please?

Anonymous — Sun, 25 Nov 2007 09:00:11 GMT

I'm a new graduate student and this is my first time I write a cover latter. So I hope that some kind person here can help me to correct some mistake from is. Thankx.

Nov 25^th, 2007

Dear Ms. A,

I was informed by your advertisement on OOO that CCC is now hiring secretary/administration officer position; therefore I would like to show my interested in its by sending my Curriculum Vitae along with this application letter.

As this moment, I am a new graduate student of AAA University from MMM (VVVi University Campus) and my subject is Business Management with Financial Major. During the period of time, I always have qualified high marks in most of the subjects taken.

Last year I had one-month internship with BBB working in Sales Department. I did learnt some skills which I think it will help me do well in the position above such as translating, communicating and do some short financial report. Moreover, I am not only having ability to prepare a short oral presentation but also do well on computer software.

Since XYZ is a new company, focus on new type of activities (fixed income market) which has potential chance to develop in the future, I saw myself as a candidate who would be so glad to have a chance to be in the staff at XYZ.

I do believe that the chances are equal for all and the purpose of this announcement is finding right people to put in the right place; therefore, I am looking forward to receive your email.

Yours sincerely,

Nguyen, Thu Hien

Re: please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Feebs11 — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 14:39:10 GMT

Quangtrungvtv wrote:
Marius Hancu wrote:

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

Why did you give me some advice?

Are you asking "Why did you not give me some advice?"

Marius has indicated where you made errors. If you check these in a dictionary, you may be able to correct them yourself. If you still cannot find an answer, ask again about the ones that are a problem.

As a matter of the way in which to write a letter to a company in which you do not have a contact, You address it to "Human Relations Department", and with an opening salutation "Dear sir/madam,"ending with Yours faithfullt". This site gives lots of information on how to write letters: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/549/01/

APPLICATION LETTER

Quangtrungvtv — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 05:20:12 GMT

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VKX COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

please help me correct this letter? THanks very much

Re: please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Quangtrungvtv — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 01:44:19 GMT

Marius Hancu wrote:

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

Why did you give me some advice?

Re: please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Marius Hancu — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 11:09:53 GMT

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Quangtrungvtv — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:54:59 GMT

my address:

Tp ÄÃ Náºµng, October 28, 2007

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

Re: I think English forum should have a application and CV letter form

Mister Micawber — Thu, 20 Sep 2007 06:47:13 GMT

Because people are applying for all sorts of different things-- jobs, schools, programs, etc-- having many different requirements. There are plenty of letter templates available on the internet. If you google the phrase, you will get 170,000 English pages for "application letters".

I think English forum should have a application and CV letter form

Quangtrungvtv — Thu, 20 Sep 2007 03:33:12 GMT

In many stuation, a people not native English speaker want to write a application letter , But it is difficult , So why should we have a topic that let every one share application letter for do it perffect?

Re: Hi!

Clive — Sun, 25 Mar 2007 01:18:28 GMT

Hi Inna,

Hi! My name is ina, and I am almost new in this forum. I wrote first in 2004 and I was very surprised and happy to receive so quicly the help I needed. Now I have wtitten already two times for the last three days and I have not received even a simple answer. I do not understand. It's simply that there is too much work and not enough people to do it all. Look at how much text is posted here for editting. It takes a long time to review and correct long texts. Don't forget that we are all unpaid volunteers. In addition, correcting long texts is much less interesting to most people. I saw that there are many ather people who have not received the help thy asked for in this forum, and still others who got more than five replys. Usually, because their post was short and interesting. I really need somebody to read and tell me my mistakes or to give me some ideas so I can improve my letter. This should be a short application letter, because afterwards I have to add two pages of explanation on my motivation. I really hope that there is somebofdy to help and I thank him/her a lot!

I'll try. Please read carefully to find my changes.

Best wishes, Clive

Dear Sirs,

I am exciting to be applying for the Master program â¦.. and at the prospect of joining your academic team. I first heard about this program from a college and friend of mine, â¦â¦, who is now completing it. I became interested and obtained information from your Internet site.

I am very enthusiastic about the opportunity which your program gives to young specialists from different fields to join, learn, and work together for the solution of economic, social and ecological problems. I especially like the international background of this field study, the practical training, the team work, and the great variety of areas in which I can in future apply my combined knowledge of science, technology and resource management.

During my years of study in Bulgaria, USA, and Germany I have shown myself as a motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. I thrive on overcoming challenges. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can.

I am excited by the opportunity to join an academic group where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm.

My CV and my motivation letter, enclosed herewith, contain additional information about me, my experience and interests

Thank you for your attention. I look forward to receiving your positive reply. For further questions, please feel free to contact me at any time.

Yours sincerely,