By Curriculum vitae, Personal statements

.I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions): Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding...

Dear Sir / Madam I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding in order to improve my intellectual capacity by mastering on European Studies and create higher utility for Turkish Cypriot society by making new linkages, learning new languages and being aware of...

hi, i'm a french student and i'd like to be an assistant next year in the USA i have 2 essays to write for my application and i really don't know where to begin maybe some of you are more used to this kind of exercise and can help me to understand what the inspector wants. Personal Statement:...

Hi, I've moved your post into the letters section. We won't write your letter for you but we will help. You can find lots of advice here about motivation letters and this is a good place to start, see Post:111482. I would try to write your CV in a way that isn't just lots of lists. Of course,...

That's an understatement. Very thin. Your objective is too vague. what sort of industry do you want to work in - what sort of career goals do you have? Just 'a job in an English company' doesn't exactly tell anyone anything, does it. Valuable knowledge of what? what type of environment? Are you...

Hi, Here are a few more brief comments by section. These are based on my experience with resumes in N. America. OBJECTIVE You need an OBJECTIVE section at the start. If IBM receives your resume, they have many job openings. Say briefly what kind of job you are applying for.PERSONAL STATEMENT I...

Brevity can be good but this is just a collection of lists at the moment. You need to make some areas more complete. PERSONAL STATEMENT I am a self-motivated and knowledge-hungry IT-Specialist with more than five years’ experience in the technical department of an Internet Service Provider. I...

Hello! I wrote my CV in English, but since my mothertongue is German, I fear my CV is far from being perfect. So please who can give me a hand and check out if there are some mistakes? Thanks beforehand! Max Mustermann 69 East End · West Town · London A1 2BC Mobile: (0123) 4567890...

I take it you are just about to leave school? It is not usual (or even advisable) to include a photo with your CV in England. You need to include more detail - which subjects have you taken exams in, even if you haven't got the results yet. Other information: What are your computer skills...

Hi Andre, This needs a lot of work. It is usual to lay out a CV in a more formal manner rather than as a letter. A good format is Your details: Name, address, contact details, date of birth. (Drop all the stuff about your family, utterly irrelevant and including it in CV makes you lsound...