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Re: Please help me to review my covering letter!

ferpectedit — Sat, 13 Sep 2008 02:10:40 GMT

Hello:
The letter is too long to revise word-by-word here. You make a lot of small errors, most of which you can correct by going over an English grammar and usage book. To get you started I'll give you specific suggestions on the second paragraph.

I don't understand the first part. Are you addressing someone? If so, you should put that name in the salutation and nowhere else in the letter. Here's my revision. Forgive me if I have changed your meaning, but as I said I have trouble understanding the paragraph as you have written it.

I would like an internship through the âErasmus Placementâ program for three to six months at your company. I could start as early as February 2009. Attached is a copy of my Curriculum Vitae (then touch on specific experience on your C.V. that makes you the best candidate for this internship).

To "serve" an internship is not a common expression and has unpleasant connotations: prisoners "serve" time for their crimes. The "for this reason" is unnecessary but you should include some specific experience or education in this paragraph which make you the right candidate for the internship. Good luck!

Re: please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Feebs11 — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 14:39:10 GMT

Quangtrungvtv wrote:
Marius Hancu wrote:

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

Why did you give me some advice?

Are you asking "Why did you not give me some advice?"

Marius has indicated where you made errors. If you check these in a dictionary, you may be able to correct them yourself. If you still cannot find an answer, ask again about the ones that are a problem.

As a matter of the way in which to write a letter to a company in which you do not have a contact, You address it to "Human Relations Department", and with an opening salutation "Dear sir/madam,"ending with Yours faithfullt". This site gives lots of information on how to write letters: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/549/01/

Re: [URGENT] GREAT BRITAIN: job application in London - cover letter

nona the brit — Fri, 02 Mar 2007 11:46:54 GMT

corrections in bold and other areas you need to look at are highlighted for you. Watch out for the length of your sentences. You tend to run on and try to connect too many ideas and are not using enough commas.

Dear Sir or Madam (US uses colon, UK uses comma or nothing after salutation)

This letter is to express my interest in the ZZZZ/YYYY position within your GGGG/HHHH Team listed on http://www.YYYYYYYY.co.uk (Recruiter Ref: YYYYYY). I earned an Economics Masterâs degree in September 2006 from the the YYYYYYYY University, Berlin. I graduated within the top 10 of my class and last year this university won the title 'Elite University' in a German-wide excellence initiative. The department of economics is ranked 5^th in Europe and 2^nd in Germany.

The advertisement said you seek someone who is passionate about the fixed income market and is able to work independently to produce accurate, detailed materials while meeting tight deadlines. Analyzing the events that influence the world economy as well as the fixed income market is my passion. Due to my stock market activities, mainly on the French small and mid-cap market primarily using fundamental analysis combined with technical analysis, I was able to finance my entire studies. In 2005, as well as in 2006, I generated an after-tax return of about 60% per year.

During my studies I gained placement experience in several well-known companies, where I often did accurate and self-reliant research and analysis work and prepared exact decision memos (?). My academic focus on empirical economic research and on transition economics helped me a lot in developing strong analytical and quantitative skills by using the right tools.

My work experience and extracurricular activities as a member of the stock market group of the University of Berlin are the best proof that I am quick to learn, a strong team player, and also able to work effectively alone. I am eager to learn more about the position at Johnnyâs Bank & Co., and I look forward to meeting with you. My curriculum vitae is enclosed.

Thank you for taking the time to review my application.

Yours sincerely,

Johnny Cash

Re: Please check my covering letter

wumanfu — Thu, 09 Oct 2003 18:36:42 GMT

Hi, I reckon itâs a good letter but it sounds like youâre offering your general/special competencies to an employer without researching their business or the job. Maybe the layout and salutation isnât so important but Iâd find a MS Word template, or an equivalent, on the web.

Dear Mr Burke, assuming itâs Finnegan)

Ref No : KKK000
Position: Programmer

Please find my CV enclosed in the application for the above-mentioned vacancy.

You will note from my CV that I have extensive experience in programming and web design in ASP and Visual Basic and excellent SQL skills (RDBMS Design,
T-SQL, Database backup procedures), which I feel would be very suitable for this role. [what are the essential/desirable criteria for the job? Maybe try to match the ad. Confidently. For instance, A coderâs work is different from an analyst/programmerâs work. Also, an MCP comes in many different forms, many certifications arenât directly related to programming.]

I am a "Best Employee Award" winner and a Microsoft Certified Professional (what flavour of MCP?) having applied my skills to a variety of commercial environments, including banking, mobile, cement industry and patent and trade mark.

I am based in Harrow, North West part of London and available immediately for the interview.

Looking forward to hear [hearing] from you.

Kind regards
Rob