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Please Check My Cover letter for Ph.D.,thanks!

andy_yuan — Mon, 06 Oct 2008 20:14:24 GMT

Before I stared to write my cover letter, I found this website and learned a lot from good posts in this forum. Thanks for these guys who posted them.
I would be more happy if any help to correct my Cover letter.
Thank you!
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Subject: apply for Ph.D program at ***

Dear Prof. ***,

I am writing to apply for PhD program in the field of environmental geotechnique, the research field seems to fitting well with my education, experience and career interests. I am a PhD student who majoring in mining engineering at *** University, a prestigious university in ***. Having been awarded a scholarship from China Scholarship Council(CSC) which sponsors Chinese citizens to study abroad and international students to study in China, I am seeking an opportunity to pursue my Ph.D study at famous research institute in the world. I believe that my research background in mining and geotechnique combined with my course work and professional experience will make me do more contribution to your group.

In June 2006 I got master degree in Safety Engineering with an emphasis on mining safety. During my graduate studies I worked on a research project about how to establish a positioning & management system for people in underground mines, and gained a lot of practical experience of system design thinking and how to deal with details problem. When facing some difficulties in the research works, try different ways, listen to the opinions from others and never give up easily, finally you will find a right and better solution. I think this is what I learned from the whole research process and it proves in the late work and studies.

After graduation I worked as a consulting engineer at the ***Institute of Nonferrous Metals. We perform risk assessment for many mining companies in China, include calculation of tailings dam, safety hazards evaluation for opencast and underground mining. This experience has helped me to develop good working relationships and communication skill with both companies and customers. In September 2007 I became a Ph.D candidate and participated in research projects, such as microseismic monitoring induced by blasting and mining tunnel excavation through hard rock. Since I was engaged in the field of geotechnique and mining, I became more and more interested in environmental protection for geotechnical engineering, such as CO2 Storage - an exciting research field for preventing Greenhouse effect.

I have enclosed my curriculum vitae for your consideration and would be happy to send you additional materials.Thanks very much for your time and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely,

*** ***

is this short paragraph correct?

demart28 — Sat, 27 Sep 2008 11:37:11 GMT

I am an experienced graphic designer with a sound knowledge in poster design.
I am looking for a independent theatre to cooperate delivering original and applicable design.
Is there any chance to send through my CV and work samples?

Re: Please help me to review my covering letter!

ferpectedit — Sat, 13 Sep 2008 02:10:40 GMT

Hello:
The letter is too long to revise word-by-word here. You make a lot of small errors, most of which you can correct by going over an English grammar and usage book. To get you started I'll give you specific suggestions on the second paragraph.

I don't understand the first part. Are you addressing someone? If so, you should put that name in the salutation and nowhere else in the letter. Here's my revision. Forgive me if I have changed your meaning, but as I said I have trouble understanding the paragraph as you have written it.

I would like an internship through the âErasmus Placementâ program for three to six months at your company. I could start as early as February 2009. Attached is a copy of my Curriculum Vitae (then touch on specific experience on your C.V. that makes you the best candidate for this internship).

To "serve" an internship is not a common expression and has unpleasant connotations: prisoners "serve" time for their crimes. The "for this reason" is unnecessary but you should include some specific experience or education in this paragraph which make you the right candidate for the internship. Good luck!

Please check my cover letter!

Ayubxon88 — Tue, 19 Aug 2008 01:05:38 GMT

I have been using this forum for about 2 month and never had a chance to ask your help. I wrote my own cover letter by using my knowledge that I took from this forum. Please check my letter and correct my mistakes. I would be delighted to receive your respond soon.

Truly,
Alex

COVER LETTER

Sinsung-dong Hana Apt 109-1305, DAEJEON

08 August, 2008
Dear Hiring Partner

I am writing in response to your recent advertisement for a new network manager. Because of my background in computer network, I am confident that I match your published profile. Please find my curriculum vitae for your consideration.

I studied Computer Science at Ehwa Womenâs University, Korea. I have worked as a system administrator in Agency for Defense Development since 1997. I have worked as a Network Administrator over a 30 server and more than 3000 users. Also, I recently worked as a security manager to integrate security systems and network infrastructure.. Also I have managed security systems like Firewall, IDS for the past 7 years. My experience in the area of Unix system, Windows Systems, networks, and Security Systems are cooperated each other. Those experience allowed me to design very large campus network and I can integrate many servers and security systems with network infrastructure seemlessly. I hold MCSE certification from Microsoft and CCNA certification from Cisco Systems. I received my master degree in Computer Science at Chungnam University, Korea. I am pursuing my PhD. I am already done with my coursework and starting my dissertation.

I believe I have the qualities that you expect. I am very interested in this position. It would be a great opportunity for me to work at XXX company. I will contact you within the next two weeks to arrange an interview. You may reach me at phone or through email.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,
**.

Re: Cover letter... I worked on it for hours!

nona the brit — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 12:22:31 GMT

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am applying for the position as Analyst in the Investment Banking Division at **. I learned of the opportunity through your online posting on the Companyâs website, and feel my skills and background are a good match for that position. I have a strong interest in finance and markets and I am looking for a job which is strictly related to these areas, especially at a company like ******. Some friends of mine are, or have been, employees at the firm, so I have had the opportunity to know your business closely and to be exposed to ******âs culture: I admire the diversity of people, as well as your strong commitment to provide continual learning and international experience.

I am currently completing a nine month internship at ***, in the Private Banking Division. I joined the team last February, working directly with senior Bankers. This is an extremely enriching experience, as I am involved both in relationship and investment activities, improving my knowledge of the investment process and operating with a high degree of autonomy, especially managing follow-up activities and communications with various asset class specialists throughout the Bank. I also had opportunity to collaborate with the ZZZZZZ ZZZZZZ Group, a team providing family owned companies with Investment Banking services, and I worked on some deals to manage liquidity generated by rights issues and mergers. I attend meetings with clients and prospects, sometimes explaining details on investment instruments like mutual funds and structured products. I have demonstrated excellent communication skills and, above all, the ability to work with accuracy and attention to detail, even under pressure and respecting deadlines.

I hope you could take the time to consider my curriculum vitae; should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you for your time and attention.

Cover letter... I worked on it for hours!

Sharleenandrea — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 22:01:21 GMT

Hi everybody, here is my cover letter in its latest release!! This is for an investment bank in the UAE... Who could have a look at it, in particular to improve the formal aspect of the letter? Thank you!!
Sharleen

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am applying to the position as Analyst in the Investment Banking Division at **. I learned of the opportunity through your online posting on the Companyâs website, and feel my skills and background are a good match for that position. I have a strong interest in finance and markets and I am looking for a job which is strictly related to these areas, especially at a company like ******. Some friends of mine are, or have been, employees at the firm, so I had the opportunity to know your business closely and to be exposed to ******âs culture: I admire the diversity of people, as well as the strong commitment to provide continual learning and international experience.

I am currently completing a nine month internship at ***, in the Private Banking Division. I joined the team last February, working directly with senior Bankers. That is an extremely enriching experience, as I am involved both in relationship and investment activities, improving my knowledge of the investment process and operating with a high degree of autonomy, especially managing follow-up activities and communications with various asset class specialists throughout the Bank. I also had opportunity to collaborate with the ZZZZZZ ZZZZZZ Group, a team providing family owned companies with Investment Banking services, and I worked on some deals to manage liquidity generated by rights issues and mergers. I attend meetings with clients and prospects, sometimes explaining details on investment instruments like mutual funds and structured products. I demonstrated excellent communication skills and, above all, the ability to work with accuracy and attention to details, even under pressure and respecting deadlines.

I hope you could take the time to consider my curriculum vitae; should you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you for your time and attention.

Yours sincerely,
Me

Re: My cover letter!

Anonymous — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 08:16:25 GMT

Thank you!
Yesterday I had lunch with an English colleague, I made him read my letter and he gave me these suggestions: what do you think about them?

Dear Mr. ***,

I had the opportunity to attend the meeting you hosted on ** last October, during the ** Expo in Milan, and I had the pleasure of speaking with you for a while after the meeting.

My name is ************ *******and I am currently completing a nine month internship at *******, in the ********** Division. I am part of the ************ team, working directly with senior Bankers and assisting them in their activities.

The reason I am writing to you is that I have a strong interest in markets and investment products, and I am looking for a position which is more closely related to these areas, especially at a firm like **. I would appreciate if you could take the time to consider my curriculum vitae.

Should you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you for your time and attention.

Yours sincerely

** **

Re: My cover letter!

26TMNTJG2PG — Thu, 24 Jul 2008 14:21:29 GMT

Dear Mr. ***,

I had the opportunity to attend the meeting you ~~managed~~ conducted last October, during the *** Expo in Milan, on (Name of the company's) certificates, and had the pleasure of speaking with you for a while after the meeting.

My name is *** *** and I am currently completing a nine months' internship at (Name of the company), (Name of the division) Division. I am part of the (Name of the team) team, working directly with Senior Brokers and assisting them in their activities.

The reason why I am to writing you is that I have a strong interest in markets and investment products, and I would ~~consider~~ hope for a position strictly related to these subjects, especially in a firm like (Name of the company): that is ~~the reason~~ why I would appreciate it very much if you would considered my curriculum vitae.

I look forward to hearing from you. Should you have any question, do not hesitate to contact me.

Thank you for your time and attention.

My cover letter!

Sharleenandrea — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 23:52:51 GMT

Hi everybody! Here is my cover letter: I have to send it to the director of a brokerage firm I knew some months ago; I would want to make it more elegant... Can you help me?
Thank you!!

Dear Mr. ***,

I had the opportunity to attend the meeting you managed last October, during the *** Expo in Milan, on (Name of the company's) certificates, and had the pleasure of speaking with you for a while after the meeting.

My name is *** *** and I am currently completing a nine months internship at (Name of the company), (Name of the division) Division. I am part of the (Name of the team) team, working directly with Senior Brokers and assisting them in their activities.

The reason why I am writing you is that I have a strong interest in markets and investment products, and I would consider a position strictly related to these subjects, especially in a firm like (Name of the company): that is the reason why I would appreciate if you considered my curriculum vitae.

I look forward to hearing from you. Should you have any question, do not hesitate to contact me.

Thank you for your time and attention.

Sincerely,

(My name and surname)

Re: cover letter internship ..

Mister Micawber — Sun, 16 Mar 2008 02:48:37 GMT

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Iam currently in my final year as a student in Business Management andAdministration at *** University in Italy, and I would like to beconsidered for a summer 2008 internship position at ***. I have a keen interest in film production and throughout my studies and work experiences, I have continued to shape this interest.

Duringbusiness school, I have developed skills that are directly applicableto this work. My academic background includes courses infinance, business management, marketing and public relations. I also had the chance to live and study in Los Angeles for morethan six months at the renowned Marshall Business School at theUniversity of Southern California, where I deepened my knowledge of theentertainment industry. Film Production & Distribution and EntertainmentLaw were among the courses I took. Besides my academic background, Ialso have more direct experience in this business, holdinginternships at talent agencies, where I worked in close contact withagents, casting directors and producers.

It is my belief that Icould contribute effectively as a member of your program, while in turnit would allow me to continue to pursue my interests and future academiccareer. I consider this internship an ideal opportunity to obtainhands-on experience.

I enclose a recent curriculum vitae for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,