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Hi. Errors pointed out in red. Parts you may wish to re-think are in blue. The use of the word torture is absolutely not appropriate here. It sounds as though he was doing them severe physical damage! Do you mean torment or tease? Andrew Bennet, 19, was born and raised in Carrollton,...

UPDATED: Andrew Bennet, 19, was born and raised in Carrollton, Mississippi and is a sophomore at Holmes Community College. He has already begun to venture into his adult life through careful planning and consideration. And, even though he loved to torture his little brothers in his younger...

Andrew Bennet, 19, was born and raised in Carollton, Mississippi and is currently a sophmore at Holmes Community College. He has already begun to venture into his adult life through careful planning and consideration. And, even though he loved to torture his little brothers in his younger...