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Re: I need native english teacher in Indonesia

Am Bolaji Aderemi Bakare,an industrial chemist by profession,presently residing in Nigeria,i am 53years of age,and presently the production/quality control manager ot Tasty Time Nig. Ltd,Lagos I hereby willing to make an enquires about how and the critarium at which i can be given an offer of...

Re: My Personal Statement for Scholarship for Masters - Please Comment

.I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions): Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding...

Internship Cover Letter Details

Any help "fixing" the following cover letter, would be greatly appreciated. I plan to send it to a research institute in the US which has a few internship positions available for students worldwide. In their own words, the cover letter should include a statement of my specific...

Re: What is wrong with this IT CV?

I have indicated the few outright corrections I could find in bold. Because you have chosen to present your information in sentence fragments, it is very difficult to analyze or make consistent any grammar present. If you continue to get complaints, I would suggest that you try casting it in...

What is wrong with this IT CV?

Hi all,I have been using my CV around for some months, and suddenly, an HR agent asked me to correct “several” grammatical errors in it. I have asked an English-speaking friend to review it. But, as I have added some changes or updates, I may have introduce some errors.Would you please review it?...

What is wrong with this CV II ?

Hi all, I have been using my CV around for some months, and suddenly, an HR agent asked me to correct “several” grammatical errors in it. I have asked an English-speaking friend to review it. But, as I have added some changes or updates, I may have introduce some errors. Would you please...

Re: What is wrong with this CV?

Hi, I have been using my CV around for some months, and suddenly, an HR agent asked me to correct “several” grammatical errors in it. I have asked an English-speaking friend to review it. But, as I have added some changes or updates, I may have introduce some errors. Would you please review...

What is wrong with this CV?

Hi all, I have been using my CV around for some months, and suddenly, an HR agent asked me to correct “several” grammatical errors in it. I have asked an English-speaking friend to review it. But, as I have added some changes or updates, I may have introduce some errors. Would you please...

Re: Please help to me to write perfect Motivation letter

Hello, I'll be really glad if somebody checks my motivation letter draft too. I've gone through this forum and copied some ideas and even senteces into that. I'm not sure if I can ask you also for grammar correction, but if somebody correct (maybe "fills in" is more appropriate, plenty of them...

Re: Should I mention example production in my motivation letter?

Here goes my letter of motivation. I will appreciate any suggestions and comments to improve it. Thanks in advance! Some notes: COUNTRY_NAME = my resident country XYZ = employer's name ************************************************* Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to apply for a...