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Re: I need native english teacher in Indonesia

bakarebolaji — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 14:17:46 GMT

Am Bolaji Aderemi Bakare,an industrial chemist by profession,presently residing in Nigeria,i am 53years of age,and presently the production/quality control manager ot Tasty Time Nig. Ltd,Lagos

I hereby willing to make an enquires about how and the critarium at which i can be given an offer of appointment as an English Teacher,since i am an international candidate.

Attached is my c.v,and i will be greatful if my request can be granted or successful.

Thanks.
B.A.Bakare

CURRICULUM VITAE

NAME ` BAKARE BOLAJI ADEREMI

DATE AND PLACE OF BIRTH; 7-04 1955

SEX MALE

MARITAL STSTUS; MARRIED

STATE OF ORIGIN; LAGOS STATE

NATIONALITY; NIGERIA

PERMANENT ADRESS; [removed by a moderator.]

NAME OF SPOUSE BAKARE OYENIKE MUYINAT

POSTAL ADRESS [removed]

NEXT OF KIN; ABOSEDE BAKARE

POSTAL ADRESS [removed]

NUMBER OF CHILDREN AND AGE; â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦..

POST HELD LAST/PRESENTPOSITION; PRODUCTION/QUALITYCONTROL

MANAGER

EDUCATIONAL INSTITUTION ATTENDED WITH DATES [removed]

LAGOS SECRETARIAL TRAINING COLLEGE, YABA, JAN 1970-JUNE 1974

UNIVERSITA ITALIANA PER STRANIER, PERUGIA-ITALY FEB.1977-AUG 1977

ISTITUTO TECNICO INDUSTRIALE STATALE, G.GALILEI

CARRARA AVENZA(MS)ITALY SEPT.1977-JULY 1981

ACADEMIC/PROFESSIONAL QUALIFICATIONS WITH DATES

FIRST SCHOOL LEAVING CERTIFICATE DEC 1969

W.A/S/C.GRADEII JUNE1974

PREPARATORY DIPLOMA IN ITALIAN LANGUAGE AUG 1977

H.N.D.INDUSTRIAL CHEMISTRY JULY 1981

PREVIOUS/PRESENT EMPLOYMENT,POST HELD WITH DATES.

U.T.C.DEPARTMENT STORESS LAGOS (FIRST SALES) APRIL 1975- FEB 1977

PROF.SSA FERARI INDUSTRIAL LABORATORY,

(PART-TIME)LAB.ASSISTANT,CARRA,ITALY JUNE 1979-JUNE 1981

SONA BREWERIES LTD OTA.(Q,C.ANALYST(NYSC) MAR,1982-MAR.83

FISCO CHEMICALS NIG. LTD,LAGOS(SALES MANAGER) MAR.83-MAR.87

UNIQUEPHARMACEUTICAL LTD OTTA,

(PROCESS CONTROL SUPERVISOR) APRIL 87-1992

TANU GROUP,ABA(GROUP QUALIYT CONTROLLER) APRIL1992-DEC 1992

MAYLUX PAINTS NIG. LTA,ABA,(PRODUCT DEV. JAN.1993-MAY 1994

ELOPMENT MANAGER.

SELLAR PAINTS NIG,LTD.(ASST.GENERAL

MANAGER) JUNE 94-APRIL 2002

TASTY TIME NIG.LTD.IPAJA-LAGOS.(PRODUCTION/

QUALITY CONTROL MANAGER MAY 2002 TILL DATE

CONTACT TELEPHONE NUMBERCONTACT [removed by a moderator. No personal comtact please. Add it in your profile only.]

REFEREES;

TEL [removed by a mod. No personal comtact please. Add them in your profile only.]

(BUSINESS MAN)

TEL;[removed]

Re: My Personal Statement for Scholarship for Masters - Please Comment

Mister Micawber — Sun, 24 Feb 2008 06:25:41 GMT

I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions):

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding in order to improve my intellectual capacity by mastering on European Studies and create higher utility for Turkish Cypriot society by making new linkages, learning new languages and being aware of other cultures, which is currently very important to Turkish Cypriots on the stage of significant turning point.

~~I am Mertkan Hamit.~~ I will be graduated from Marmara University, Istanbul, Department of Economics at the end of 2007 â 2008 study year. After my graduation my target is making my master degree on the area of European Studies. The main reason, ~~making my master degree on European Studies,~~ among the many problems and conflicts in Cyprus ~~island~~, it emphatically remain as a European Union Member-State ~~country~~ either Cyprus problem solved or not . ~~There is a fact that,~~ Cyprus ~~island~~'s two zones' are inequal in terms of economics or welfare. ~~As a young person who is being aware of this fact~~, the main need of ~~the~~ Turkish Cypriot society is professions who knows Europe very well, and have academical point of view for European ~~states'~~ economics, politics and culture. From my point of view, all those that I have implemented, can not be learned just from ~~the~~ academic works, nevertheless living and sharing the same atmosphere is substantial .

~~Having studied for~~ four years, in Istanbul have brought me great range of benefits. Living in a metropolitan like Istanbul, helped to broaden my vision ~~in wider perspective~~. During my bachelor studies I became a member of Cyprus Youth Platform, which is a student association for Turkish Cypriot students who are studying abroad in countries such as Turkey, England, Germany, USA, Canada, France, Ukraine and the Netherlands. Currently I am the Secretary General of the organization and have participated in many conferences and workshops about Europe and the Euro-Mediterranean region in various countries. Personally I am or under the name of Cyprus Youth Platform many projects constituted that funded by United Nations Development Program (UNDP) and the European Union. The primary goal of these projects is the re-unification of Cyprus which we hope to achieve by focusing on ~~re-~~rapprochement between the Turkish-Cypriot and Greek-Cypriot communities. We aim to bring Turkish Cypriots closer to Europe and help all Cypriots to build a culture of peace on the island. Also with our projects we aimed to improve youth's direct relations with Europe, by visiting European Union states, increasing awareness and improve the socialization of youth.

As well as these macro-level goals, Cyprus Youth Platform also aims to develop solutions to problems facing young Cypriots. We print a monthly magazine, that I am in editorial board, called "Cypriot Youth", which educates and raises awareness around issues such as drug addiction and sexual discrimination and so on.

We have also formed a working group to improve studentâs rights and employment prospects in North Cyprus. The working group involves many participants including the office of the President, the Ministry of Education, state planning boards and universities in North Cyprus. It aims to develop ~~long-run~~ sustainable education policies through targeted hands-on solutions.

The main reason why I am applying for such a scholarship is I am planning to make master in Netherlands which is one of the former-state of European Union, on the topic of European Studies. In this one-year study period, the university ~~that I have applied to make my masters~~ is located in city of Maastricht that denominated European Union's economic criteria. ~~Being~~ aware of ~~this fact, out of~~ Maastricht University's high academic reputation, I believe that it help me to analyse Europe better. Spreading the ideas that I will learn or the linkages that I will make while studying abroad would benefit Cyprus and all Cypriots in many ways. ~~On the other hand~~ I know that there are ~~considerably high number of~~ many youths from Turkish Cypriot society and Greek Cypriot society studying in The Netherlands, which will give me another advantage. I believe in a country like Netherlands, all attempts on improving bi-communal relations and relations with other countries, will form new ideas that increase ~~the~~ tolerance in understanding that will give Cypriots and whole Europeans extra value added.

~~It is a fact that,~~ on the Northern Side of the island, there is a high need for professionals which have master on European studies and related areas. ~~The scholarship that I get in order to make~~ my master on European Studies, will fill ~~the~~ one of the urgent need of Turkish Cypriot society. ~~That means,~~ having this education give me high chance in employment when I return back to Cyprus after my studies over. Moreover it is my goal that being the person who serves ~~for~~ Cypriots in order to minimize ~~the~~ problems occur on integration process to European union in political, cultural or economical points. Out of benefiting only Cyprus, incorporating growing European Unions' problems and producing solutions from Cyprus, will both give practical and intellectual benefits to whole Europe. This will lead all Europe to gain surplus value from the scholarship ~~that I will get in order to make my master on European Studies~~.

Finally, the scholarship ~~that is~~ for Turkish Cypriots who are somehow victims because of political reason on European Union state Cyprus, make Turkish Cypriots to widen their visions and perspectives by visiting new countries, facing with new cultures and having new relations with new people. To sum up, I think this scholarship is an excellent opportunity for my career and ~~the scholarship~~ seems like the perfect opportunity for me to facing with other cultures, meeting with new people, learn other languages and experience the European education system.

Please find enclosed my curriculum vitae, academic records and my references. Please contact me if you require any further details or documents. I hope to hear from you in the near future.

Best Regards

Mertkan Hamit

Internship Cover Letter Details

InViVe — Sun, 17 Feb 2008 15:32:22 GMT

Any help "fixing" the following cover letter, would be greatly appreciated. I plan to send it to a research institute in the US which has a few internship positions available for students worldwide. In their own words, the cover letter should include a statement of my specific research interests, contact details and relevant coursework and grades received. Having discussed it briefly with some of my professors i ended up with this:

"My contact details"

"Contact details of the institute's member responsible for the internship"

Date

Dear Dr. ***,

I am writing in response to your posting for the *** Internship Program. I am currently a final year Masterâs student in *** at the University of ***, and I would like to be considered for the internship position on the *** project. I am particularly interested in working on expanding the simulation capability currently available within *** whose âevolutionâ I have followed in the literature.

My academic background includes the following relevant graduate courses:

Computer Programming, a course referring to C++ programming â both object oriented and structured programming - in which I received a grade of 9 (on a scale from 0 to 10).
Advanced Software Engineering, a course on design patterns, the Single responsibility principle and refactorings (ongoing).
Advanced Artificial Intelligence, during which I was taught Prolog, Constraint Programming, Constraint Logic Programming (using the ECLiPSe platform), planning with constraints (including a project concerning mixed initiative temporal planning with constraints), and reasoning under uncertainty (MDPs, chapters 13 to 17 of the book "Artificial Intelligence, A modern approach" by Stuart Russell and Peter Norvig). I received a grade of 9.
Neural Networks and Evolutionary Algorithms, dealing with several neural network architectures as well as other machine learning approaches, including the first five chapters of the book "Pattern Recognition and Machine Learning" by Christopher M. Bishop (ongoing).

Other relevant courses from my undergraduate studies (also in ***) include:

Artificial intelligence, which covered the first twelve chapters of the AIMA textbook (including partial order planning). I received a grade of 10.
Object oriented programming, a course on Java programming and UML. I received a grade of 9.

This semester I will begin working on my Masterâs Thesis, the topic of which is "***. It involves simulating "...". In the future, I plan to pursue a Ph.D. in ***, possibly by extending my research in my diploma thesis.

It is my belief that I could contribute effectively as a member of your program, which in turn would allow me to continue to pursue my research interests and future academic career. I consider this internship an ideal opportunity to obtain hands-on experience. Also, it would greatly benefit me to collaborate with fellow interns and have as my mentor Mr. ***.

I enclose a recent curriculum vitae for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,

"My name & surname"

My doubts are as to:

Whether there are any grammar or syntactical errors
Should the cover letter have information on where i found their program advertisement? For example "I am writing in response to your posting for the *** Internship Program, of which I learned through an email from the *** googlegroup."?
The part "I am particularly interested in working on expanding the simulation capability currently available within *** whose âevolutionâ I have followed in the literature." in the first paragraph originally was "I would wish to be considered for the intership position on the *** project, and if possible for the part of ***, of which I read and was particularly interested in, in the paper â***â which was presented in the *** Workshop on ***." Which version do you think is better?
If i should include the sentence 'Also, it would greatly benefit me to collaborate with fellow interns and have as my mentor Mr. ***." or maybe it sounds "fake" (although it is in fact true!)
In the original version of this cover letter, the last paragraph was
"Also, it would greatly benefit me to have as my mentor Mr. ***, whose career in the *** and *** I think of very highly, and collaborate with fellow interns, as until this time, I havenât had the opportunity to work in a multi-member research group. Finally, travelling and actually staying in the United States has always been one of my dreams, being an avid traveller, but unfortunately, I havenât been able to make this trip a reality due to its excessive cost." Was i right in replacing it?
Finally, should the courses' information also refer to the teacher who instructed me (especially since one of them has cooperated in the past with the internship's project mentor), or not?

Thank you in advance for any help given!

Re: What is wrong with this IT CV?

Mister Micawber — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 10:36:10 GMT

I have indicated the few outright corrections I could find in bold. Because you have chosen to present your information in sentence fragments, it is very difficult to analyze or make consistent any grammar present. If you continue to get complaints, I would suggest that you try casting it in paragraphs ( "I was a sales consultant for Oracle Bl solutions, using demonstrations, prototyping, proofs of concept and presentations prepared for both potential and existing customers. I also designed customer business needs analyses and matched them to solutions, conducted internal sales team training, and had some involvement in marketing.")

PROFESSIONAL HISTORY

05/2006 ~ Present ACME â Sales Consultant

Salesconsulting on Oracle BI solutions using demos, prototyping, proofs ofconcept, presentations to potential or existing customers. Customerbusiness needs analyses, matching them to solutions. Internal training for sales team. Marketing involvement.

10/2005 ~ 05/2006 ACME â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting Company.

Projectat ACME - Federal Government IT Services - in partnership with ACME.Consolidation of 118 Oracle databases spread across the country,running at local/regional federal offices. All databases were migratedfrom 8i and 9i to 10g and transferred to a clustered IBM P590 machine,located at ACME main data centre in <city>.

09/2003 ~ 07/2005 ACME â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner. Big 5 Consulting company.

ACMEinternal IT offshore from US HQ to ACME's subsidiariesin <country> and <country> implementing 24x7 worldwidesupport. Consulting during the work transition process at ACME's BSC -Business Support Centre, in <country>. Training on customer's ITinternal processes received at ACME HQ's at <city>and <city> during one month.

06/2001 ~ 06/2003 ACME Consulting, now Triscal â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner and 1st Oracle CAP Partner in Latin America. IT and Management Consulting firm.

Pre-sales.Business Intelligence and Data Warehouse projects. Oracle solutionspresentations for potential customers and Oracle User Groups. Proofs ofconcept. Technical proposals definitions and technical support to thesales team, sales consulting. Technical courses definition anddelivery. System auditing, Oracle LMS. Warehouse Builder, Discoverer.

06/1998 ~ 06/2001 ACME â Oracle DBA/Analyst.

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting company, focused on public sector.

DataWarehousing and system integration projects in taxes, telecom, health,transportation, education and marketing industries. Customerinteraction. Data analysis and validation. Consulting in applicationdesign, architecture and development. Oracle courses delivery eitherinternally to teams or externally to customers. Technical evaluation ofcandidates through interviews.

03/1998 ~ 06/1998 ACME â Oracle Analyst

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting company. One of the biggest IT consulting firm in Brazil.

Improvement,extension and updating on a nationwide retail chain ERP: payables,credit, deliveries, inventory, stores and sales modules.

07/1996 ~ 03/1998 ACME

Oracle Developer and Analyst

OraclePartner. IT consulting company. Financial software house and OAEC(Oracle Approved Education Centre) analysis, development and migrationof financial and banking applications, such as open-market, accountmanagement, loans. Banking/financial market business rules andprocesses. SQL, PL/SQL, Web, Forms/Reports, Designer experience.

What is wrong with this IT CV?

Anonymous — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 09:08:57 GMT

Hi all,

I have been using my CV around for some months, and suddenly, an HR agent asked me to correct âseveralâ grammatical errors in it. I have asked an English-speaking friend to review it. But, as I have added some changes or updates, I may have introduce some errors.

Would you please review it? I have posted only its second part. I donât want to abuse from your patience.

I am very curious to know what is wrong with it. Please, focus only on the English grammar and not in template, model and so on and disregard some technical IT acronyms.

Thanks a million.

PROFESSIONAL HISTORY

05/2006 ~ Present ACME â Sales Consultant

Sales consulting on Oracle BI solutions using demos, prototyping, proofs of concept, presentations to potential or existing customers. Costumer business needs analysis, matching them to solutions. Internal training to sales team. Marketing involvement.

10/2005 ~ 05/2006 ACME â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting Company.

Project at ACME - Federal Government IT Services - in partnership with ACME. Consolidation of 118 Oracle databases spread across the country, running at local/regional federal offices. All databases were migrated from 8i and 9i to 10g and transferred to a clustered IBM P590 machine, located at ACME main data centre in <city>.

09/2003 ~ 07/2005 ACME â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner. Big 5 Consulting company.

ACME internal IT offshore from US HQ to ACME's subsidiaries in <country> and <country> implementing 24x7 worldwide support. Consulting during the work transition process at ACME's BSC - Business Support Centre, in <country>. Training on customer's IT internal processes received at ACME HQ's at <city> and <city> during one month.

06/2001 ~ 06/2003 ACME Consulting, now Triscal â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner and 1st Oracle CAP Partner in Latin America. IT and Management Consulting firm.

Pre-sales. Business Intelligence and Data Warehouse projects. Oracle solutions presentations for potential customers and Oracle User Groups. Proofs of concept. Technical proposals definitions and technical support to the sales team, sales consulting. Technical courses definition and delivery. System auditing, Oracle LMS. Warehouse Builder, Discoverer.

06/1998 ~ 06/2001 ACME â Oracle DBA/Analyst.

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting company, focused on public sector.

Data Warehousing and system integration projects in taxes, telecom, health, transportation, education and marketing industries. Customer interaction. Data analysis and validation. Consulting in application design, architecture and development. Oracle courses delivery either internally to teams or externally to customers. Technical evaluation of candidates through interviews.

03/1998 ~ 06/1998 ACME â Oracle Analyst

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting company. One of the biggest IT consulting firm in Brazil.

Improvement, extension and updating on a nation wide retail chain ERP: payables, credit, deliveries, inventory, stores and sales modules.

07/1996 ~ 03/1998 ACME

Oracle Developer and Analyst

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting company. Financial software house and OAEC (Oracle Approved Education Centre) Analysis, development and migration of financial and banking applications, such as open-market, account management, loans. Banking/financial market business rules and processes. SQL, PL/SQL, Web, Forms/Reports, Designer experience.

What is wrong with this CV II ?

Anonymous — Sat, 09 Feb 2008 15:32:14 GMT

Hi all,

Would you please review it? I have posted only its first part. I donât want to abuse from your patience.

I am very curious to know what is wrong with it. Please, focus only on the English grammar and not in template, model and so on.

Disregard some technical IT acronyms.

Thanks a million.

////////////////////////////////////////

PROFESSIONAL HISTORY

05/2006 ~ Present ACME â Sales Consultant

10/2005 ~ 05/2006 ACME â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting Company.

Project at ACME - Federal Government IT Services - in partnership with ACME. Consolidation of 118 Oracle databases spread across the country, running at local/regional federal offices. All databases were migrated from 8i and 9i to 10g and transferred to a clustered IBM P590 machine, located at ACME main data centre in <city>.

09/2003 ~ 07/2005 ACME â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner. Big 5 Consulting company.

ACME internal IT offshore from US HQ to ACME's subsidiaries in <country> and <country> implementing 24x7 worldwide support. Consulting during the work transition process at ACME's BSC - Business Support Centre, in <country>. Training on customer's IT internal processes received at ACME HQ's at <city> and <city> during one month.

06/2001 ~ 06/2003 ACME Consulting, now Triscal â Oracle Consultant

Oracle Partner and 1st Oracle CAP Partner in Latin America. IT and Management Consulting firm.

Pre-sales. Business Intelligence and Data Warehouse projects. Oracle solutions presentations for potential customers and Oracle User Groups. Proofs of concept. Technical proposals definitions and technical support to the sales team, sales consulting. Technical courses definition and delivery. System auditing, Oracle LMS. Warehouse Builder, Discoverer.

06/1998 ~ 06/2001 ACME â Oracle DBA/Analyst.

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting company, focused on public sector.

Data Warehousing and system integration projects in taxes, telecom, health, transportation, education and marketing industries. Customer interaction. Data analysis and validation. Consulting in application design, architecture and development. Oracle courses delivery either internally to teams or externally to customers. Technical evaluation of candidates through interviews.

03/1998 ~ 06/1998 ACME â Oracle Analyst

Oracle Partner. IT Consulting company. One of the biggest IT consulting firm in Brazil.

Improvement, extension and updating on a nation wide retail chain ERP: payables, credit, deliveries, inventory, stores and sales modules.

07/1996 ~ 03/1998 ACME

Oracle Developer and Analyst

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Re: What is wrong with this CV?

Clive — Thu, 07 Feb 2008 22:58:23 GMT

Hi,

Would you please review it? I have posted only its first part. I donât want to abuse from your patience.

I am very curious to know what is wrong with it. Please, focus only on the English grammar and not in template, model and so on.

Disregard some technical IT acronyms.

Thanks a million.

////////////////////////////////////////

AREA

BUSINESS INTELLIGENCE / DATA WAREHOUSING CONSULTING

EDUCATION

Computer Science Bachelor Degree

*** University of ***, 1994 ~ 1997.

SKILLS SUMMARY

* 12 years in IT industry: consultancies and software vendors.

* Customer facing experience <<< say this another way on pre-sales, project, delivery, and support roles.

* Ability to discuss technical issues with business approach (ROI, TCO, SLA, SabOx, SOA)

* Experience as DBA, Analyst and Developer on projects in several industries: banking, telecom, retail, health insurance, energy, marketing and public sector.

* Blue chip company experience: ACME, XYZ, XPTO.

BUSINESS INTELLIGENCE EXPERIENCE

* As pre-sales: POCâs definition, building and presentation. Business value propositions.

* Business requirements analysis and specifications definition.

* Data analysis and modeling: designing data warehouse models, facts, dimensions, star schemas, using Kimball methodology.

* ETL: data sources definitions, data transformations and loads, mappings.

* Deployment: BI tools, apps and data warehouse database installation, schema and metadata deployment, initial loads, database tuning, and ETL jobs scheduling.

INTERESTS

* Project Management

* Financial Industry

* BI&W, BPM, EPM

PERSONAL

* Consulting and costumer facing experience. <<< sounds like you worked in the fashion industry

* Self-studying. Analytical and problem solving skills.

* Dynamic, team player, flexible.

* EU Citizen. EU passport holder. Travel availability.

LANGUAGE SKILLS

* Portuguese: native language.

* Spanish: fluent reading and good conversational level.

best wishes, Clive

What is wrong with this CV?

Anonymous — Thu, 07 Feb 2008 17:57:51 GMT

Hi all,

Would you please review it? I have posted only its first part. I donât want to abuse from your patience.

I am very curious to know what is wrong with it. Please, focus only on the English grammar and not in template, model and so on.

Disregard some technical IT acronyms.

Thanks a million.

////////////////////////////////////////

AREA

BUSINESS INTELLIGENCE / DATA WAREHOUSING CONSULTING

EDUCATION

Computer Science Bachelor Degree

*** University of ***, 1994 ~ 1997.

SKILLS SUMMARY

* 12 years on IT industry: consultancies and software vendors.

* Customer facing experience on pre sales, project, delivery, and support roles.

* Ability to discuss technical issues with business approach (ROI, TCO, SLA, SabOx, SOA)

* Experience as DBA, Analyst and Developer in projects on several industries: banking, telecom, retail, health insurance, energy, marketing and public sector.

* Blue chip company experience: ACME, XYZ, XPTO.

BUSINESS INTELLIGENCE EXPERIENCE

* As pre sales: POCâs definition, building and presentation. Business value propositions.

* Business requirements analysis and specifications definition.

* Data analysis and modeling: designing data warehouse models, facts, dimensions, star schemas, using Kimball methodology.

* ETL: data sources definitions, data transformations and loads, mappings.

* Deployment: BI tools, apps and data warehouse database installation, schema and metadata deployment, initial loads, database tuning, and ETL jobs scheduling.

INTERESTS

* Project Management

* Financial Industry

* BI&W, BPM, EPM

PERSONAL

* Consulting and costumer facing experience.

* Self-studying. Analytical and problem solving skills.

* Dynamic, team player, flexible.

* EU Citizen. EU passport holder. Travel availability.

LANGUAGE SKILLS

* Portuguese: native language.

* Spanish: fluent reading and good conversational level.

////////////////////////////////////////

Re: Please help to me to write perfect Motivation letter

Anonymous — Mon, 04 Feb 2008 14:30:29 GMT

Hello,
I'll be really glad if somebody checks my motivation letter draft too. I've gone through this forum and copied some ideas and even senteces into that. I'm not sure if I can ask you also for grammar correction, but if somebody correct (maybe "fills in" is more appropriate, plenty of them are missing <img src="/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile [:)]" /> the articles and tenses, I'll really appreciate that. I'm going to enclose this text and my CV to a short email with application. Thank you a lot!

Jan

Here it is:

Dear Sir / Madam,

With this letter I wish to explain my interest for taking part in PhD project "***" which is proposed by the *** team.

I believe my motivation for applying for the position can be better understood considering my study path so far. I started my bachelor studies of Computer Science at *** Faculty of *** University in *** with clear intention to continue with master studies at the same place. After completing my bachelor degree I've chosen a specialization on Software Systems. From the beginning of my master studies I've been focusing on the field of formal methods in software development and especially on model-checking. During that stage I won the scholarship for excellent study results and finally I got my master degree this January with overall grade 1.

While working on my master thesis focused on model-checking of concurrent systems, I decided to get deeper knowledge in the field of formal verification and software reliability. I started to look for research groups and laboratories concentrating on these topics. I realized that *** group is dealing exactly with the problems I'm interested in and I immediately decided to apply for a PhD position in your team right after finishing my master studies. To get broader survey in the area of formal verification I started to attend a seminar, where many scientists focused on this topic present their current results. I also attend an intensive everyday course of French since September to reach at least basic level of the language.

My choice of my former university and faculty was based on general belief that this institution is the most challenging and provides the education of the highest quality in my country. This fact helped me to make my best while studying there. But now I appreciate an opportunity to focus on an exciting research topic even more than high demands imposed on students. I consider the *** group to be both the great challenge and the place of projects exactly corresponding to my research interests. I think of that as of opportunity to get broader view of formal methods and security and to take part in the top-class research project with exciting goals.

I'm convinced that I can contribute to the above-mentioned project because of the experience gained from my master thesis and during my master studies. In my work I dealt with model-checking, implementation of temporal logic, formal specification, modeling language design, semantics and translation. I believe that I can apply my knowledge of program verification in your project and that it is an excellent opportunity to get an expertise in the field of my utmost interest. I consider program verification and reliability being crucial for further development of software industry and I definitely want to take part in research of this area. From my part I have no doubts about my motivation and commitment and I believe that I am a suitable candidate for this PhD position.

Yours respectfully,
my name

Re: Should I mention example production in my motivation letter?

BMX — Tue, 15 Jan 2008 23:09:20 GMT

Here goes my letter of motivation. I will appreciate any suggestions and comments to improve it. Thanks in advance!

Some notes:

COUNTRY_NAME = my resident country

XYZ = employer's name

*************************************************

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply for a position of Project Manager / Multimedia Developer (reference no. 00000) as advertised on XYZâs on-line vacancy bulletin.

I first became interested in multimedia development and web-based applications twelve years ago. Since 2001, I am working as a project manager and developer in a leading internet agency in my country. As of March 2004, I am in charge for communication, management and execution of all online activities of ABC_CORPORATION in COUNTRY_NAME. The list of my responsibilities includes communication with the HQ office and local companies, website design, content development and update, adaptation of various online/ offline campaigns and presentations, research and invention of new channels for communication with target audience. During my practice I have developed a vast range of skills, for example: analysing complex numerical and verbal information, clear, concise writing for different contexts, working enthusiastically and productively under pressure, dealing professionally with a wide range of people, working in a variety of teams and on my own initiative, overcoming obstacles. I am comfortable in sourcing and handling data electronically. Making movies like the Flash presentation I've attached as a sample of my work is such an enjoyable experience, because I know how to turn content requirements into a multimedia concept by selecting the most appropriate choice of multimedia. I have a knack of the latest technologies which help me to evaluate rapidly project essentials, determine terms and deadlines, execute in full the project.

As you can see on my CV I lead a busy life through my daily responsibilities and various business activities, which has meant that I have very quickly learnt the importance of time management. I have always handed my work in on time and never missed a deadline. My communication skills have greatly developed through my work experience with ABC_CORPORATION and its markets in Central and Eastern Europe.

For the period of my management and fulfillment of the ABC_CORPORATION on-line activities, the ABC_CORPORATION recognizes COUNTRY_NAME as the fastest growing market in terms of Internet presence. My dedication to work and pursuit for perfection convinced ABC_CORPORATION to choose COUNTRY_NAME as a pilot market for several web-based projects and desktop applications. As of 2007 I am the person responsible for terms negotiation, concept development, execution and language adaptation of ABC_CORPORATION websites in COUNTRY_1, COUNTRY_2, COUNTRY_3, and COUNTRY_4.

XYZ position as a leading organization attracts me and I feel XYZ offers the opportunity to work with the type of people and projects that I am seeking. I feel I perform to a high standard and have a range of relevant skills that I can bring to XYZ.

I would be very keen to find out more about XYZ aims and would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application further at an interview. I hope you will consider my application favourably and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

FIRST_NAME LAST_NAME