By Dates, Sentence structures

Hi again, Fizzi, Can somebody please help me with the English? Almost all studies noted that this information was (?) often available (more than 93.5%) in India in 1983, the UK, the US, and France. However, newspapers that were evaluated in Mexico and another Indian study which was also...

Hi guys, I have a sentence structure question. the fllowing sentence sort of makes sense, but I'm wondering if anyone can see any flaws and possibly optimise it, as it may be a little long winded? Here goes: "The fact that the UK plans to cut carbon emissions by 60% by 2050 and...

I have struck out unnecessary or inappropriate verbiage, made some corrections (in bold). You may also have to fix the sentence structure to correct for my deletions.February 2, 2008 Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC Dear Dr Smith:I am writing to apply for the Master’s...

Hi Jason, Although I only exchanged a few threads with you, and a belated welcome! I find it completely amazing that everything you said about English learning is exactly what I have been trying to emphasize to the learners. Before I go on, there is one minor point I must validate. I am not a...

Hi, nice letter overall, you've stated your case very well. I've made corrections for you highlighted in blue, and added comments and highlighted in pink other problem areas you need to re-write or clarify. Dear Mr. -----, I graduated from Kiev National University of Construction and...

I apologize for not being able to break free today to edit your letter. If this is a cover letter to be sent with your resume, I am afraid your autobiography it’s a lot longer than most recruiter want to read. If this is an actual resume, the tone and fluency need to be improved. In my...

CalifJim wrote:What you guys are discussing is "heavy phrases" or "heavy clauses".Yes, it's true that the canonical word order of English is sometimes modified to accommodate that fact that an enormous number of words intervening between other related words in a structure can obscure the...

1. If you go there, you can read a book (,) floating on the water. -- Are you floating on the water? Is the book? Comma or no comma, it is confusing, and I suspect the writer tried to solve the problem by considering commas rather than fixing the sentence structure. 2.AA: Who is...

I like the dash. It lets one add emphasis and (dramatic) pauses.I think the summary in Webster's Third New International Dictionary is excellent:7. THE DASH7.0 In its function in writing and in the speech intonation to which it corresponds, the dash is similar to the comma and the colon, and a...

INTRODUCTION chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />> > Professional writing is the most challenging task for the inexperienced student. Above all academic requirements it still ranks top of the list in day to day campus stressors. On average, eighty five percent of the requirements are based...