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Please I need help! Could you take a look at my application!!!

Anonymous — Mon, 14 Jul 2008 23:57:37 GMT

Hallo

I am for the first time here. I want to apply for a position of German account internship in an chinese company.

I never wrote an application before. Can you please look at this letter and give me some advice what can I do better.
I am also not sure about the grammar. Can you please tell me if something is wrong!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR HELP !!

Dear ***,

I am writing you to express my interest in the German account internship at the company ***.

I am currently studying a B.A. in Computer Science with an e-Business focus at the *** graduating in 2010.

My aim is to work in an international field of work related to marketing and consulting. Subjects which I am studying that are relevant to the post of German account internship include Project Management, R&D, Finance and Controlling, Developing Database, Marketing and Strategic Management.

At the work as a student employee in a small team I have collected experiences with Photoshop and Dreamweaver. The work has referred to the updating and developing of the WNB homepage.

With pleasure I would offer to you my cooperation and I am very interested in gaining an opportunity with your company to use the skills I developed, in a 6 months-practical internship, starting in September 2008.

I have excellent teamwork and leadership skills as evidenced by numerous university projects involving teams. I have a good command of written and spoken German. I also have a good command of written and spoken English and Russian.

I have strong evidence to show that my communication and organisational skills are also well developed.

An opportunity to apply my skills with an international perspective at your company would be an excellent opportunity for both of us.

I enclose my CV outlining my experience to date and key skill areas which I believe are relevant to this post. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application with you and I look forward to hear from you.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely

***

Re: To Whom It may concern

Clive — Sat, 05 Jul 2008 16:50:59 GMT

Hi,

Put the company address in top right corner, followed by the date. use paper with the company letter-head.

5 July 2008

To Whom It May Concern,

The bearer, Mr. Fred Madawa, has served at this company, Silver Computers, in the capacity of IT Executive from . . .. to ... .

His service, technical and business skills, conduct and moral character have all been of the highest standard, and he has worked lhard and loyally for the company. I wish him well in all his future endeavours. Silver Computers would be more than happy to employ him again at any time in the future. \

If you require any additional information, I can be reached at (416) 555-3452.

Yours sincerely,

(signature)
Thomas Smith,
Manager, Silver Computers.

Please Help me in writing the motivation letter for a Post-Masters Program

aswita38 — Sun, 29 Jun 2008 11:40:24 GMT

Dear Members,

Please Help me in writing the motivation letter for a Post-Masters Program. I would be very thankful for your time and efforts. Thanks in advance.

Here It goes like this..

Dear Admission Officer,

I am extremely delighted to apply for your *** program in yyy. I will take this opportunity to explain about my background and motivation for this program. I have recently completed *** course with specialization in xyz from *** Institute , One of the world class institutes in country name. I did my *** course from xyz institute, one of oldest institutes of country name.

In the past two years, I have made an effort to learn about the intricacies of some subject names. In this period of study I have success fully completed one project on "***" and one dissertation on â***â. I have always put a cognizant and conscientious effort to think innovatively and practically. The outstanding results of my projects and presentations in "course names" substantiate the above fact. My favorable aptitude towards positive thinking, diligent nature and most importantly to overcome the difficult situations with shear perseverance helped me in dealing with many decisive situations like winning the second prize in my only second presentation "course name" at a national level symposium conducted by "institue" in 2003 and securing maximum "grade" in the last two semesters of "course name".

The knowledge of "Major name" from "course" and the exposure that I got in "course" about "Major" have stimulated me to apply for your *** program in âyyyâ. With its entire professional structure and international stature, I believe that this program would refurbish me into a well prepared professional with the necessary integrated knowledge about the xyz. I like the idea of having regular meeting, seminars and group discussions that will improve ones inter personal skills hence to the overall development of a person. In my view the most enthralling aspect of this program is the xyz collaborated year long project, from which one can extract the maximum amount of essential hands-on experience to succeed in the real time environment.

The interplay and interconnections between various branches and processes is creating a world of new surprises. I want to take part in these innovations by acquiring the integrated knowledge of x,y and z. I think I got all the ingredients from my z years of z education. Now I want to learn the art of utilizing all my interdisciplinary skills and want to become a true technologist in the "xyz". With its Advanced Courses and Real Time xyz Projects, I believe that this course would give me ample opportunity to fulfill my aspirations. With all my knowledge and commitment to course work and research, I am sure that I can substantially contribute to the development of technology and hence development and welfare of society. I am concluding with the hope that you will find in me a deserving and credible candidate to take part in the glory of your legendary institution.

Looking forward to your positive response.

Yours sincerely,
abcdegfh..

Please Help me In writing the Motivation letter for a Post-Masters Program

aswita38 — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 13:17:23 GMT

Dear Members,

Please Help me in writing the motivation letter for a Post-Masters Program. I would be very thankful for your time and efforts. Thanks in advance.

Here It goes like this..

Dear Admission Officer,

Looking forward to your positive response.

Yours sincerely,
abcdegfh..

Re: Write a letter to school of drop-out the study

StarrySkies — Fri, 13 Jun 2008 22:01:59 GMT

Hi, Calamus.
Formal letters have different styles in different countries. I'm from the UK, so can only tell you what I would write.

Dear __,

I am writing in reference to my daughter, __.

My husband and I are moving to Canada and our daughter will accompany us. We will leave on (date) so our daughter's last day at school will be (date).
While in Canada she will be attending school/college at (name of school/college).

We will be returning in two years' time and I would like to enquire if it will be possible for my daughter to re-enrol at your school/college upon our return.

I an waiting for your reply,

Yours sincerely,

Re: Salary increment letter

Anonymous — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 10:45:39 GMT

Respected Madam,

It has been great opportunity working with you in Anand International School. Before this academic year start I want firm assurance for the following concerns.

Confirmation Letter from June.
Compensation for working in Summer Vacation. (One month salary )
School Bus facility Villa park.
Salary on time i.e. on the specified date(5^th of the month).
Increment in the salary as I handled various In-charge ships last academic year.

Please kindly look into this matter on urgent bases. Not considering any point will be assumed as termination of contract from your side.

Yours sincerely

narendra

Re: Shall I write my name and address at the top right side of my Motivation Letter..?

Clive — Mon, 28 Apr 2008 12:19:20 GMT

Hi,

Write your address, followed by the date, in the top right corner.

Your name goes after 'Yours faithfully'. Print your name, and sign above that.

Many people today prefer to use 'Yours sincerely'.

Best wishes, Clive

statement of purpose / letter of motivation for postgrad studies in the UK

kilolo — Wed, 16 Apr 2008 09:02:48 GMT

Hi everyone

This board has been very helpful in writing my statement of purpose for my uni applications (postgrad studies in development studies) - especially the tutorial on how to write such a letter. The person I wanted to give it to for proof-reading and feedback, is currently defending her Phd and has absolutely no time... so I thouht, maybe I could get some feedback here? I would appreciate it very much!

Here's my draft:

Dear Sir or Madam,

With the present statement of purpose I wish to support my application to the [name of program] program offered by the [name of department or school] at the [name of university].

This summer I will be awarded my BA degree at the University of [name of current university] in Switzerland, approximately ten years after my High-School peers. I cannot say that I've always wanted to study international development. In fact, my rather late decision to pursue an academic education is the result of a long and careful reassessment of my career. I came to the point where I felt that my professional activity in the field of business IT did not meet my personal ambitions to do something that would make a difference for society in one way or the other. I realised, that I needed a major career change and switched from business IT to human resources process management as a first step in the process of redirecting my career in a more humanitarian direction. After two years of seriously re-evaluating my personal objectives, I came to the conclusion that I want to aim at a career in development. My goal is to work conceptually on programming and evaluating development projects for the United Nations, a governmental development agency or an international NGO, wherever possible taking a gendered perspective.

The next and maybe most important step towards reaching this goal was to commence my academic studies at the University of Fribourg. I adapted quickly to being a student again and enjoy the encouraging and inspiring environment of a university ever since. I have been studying Social work and Social Policy as a major and Social Anthropology as a minor. My studies are focussed on social policy, social research, gender issues, human rights and migration. I feel that my choice of classes (please refer to my grade transcripts) provides me with a broad and solid basis to specialise on development issues in my MA.

My BA programme being highly research oriented, I have been able to acquire considerable research skills working on our BA thesis on the labour situation of clandestine migrant women in Switzerland and their coping strategies with their precarious situation. Additionally I've been offered the opportunity to conduct qualitative interviews for a project assessing the non profit sector in Switzerland under the guidance of Prof. Dr. [name of professor] at the department of Social Work and Social Policy at the [name of current university].

My professional background provides me, in addition to specific knowhow, a variety of skills beneficiary to my academic work as well as my future activity in development. I learnt to take responsibility, how to handle pressure and to meet deadlines, how to manage projects, to work in a team as well as analytical thinking and communicational skills. Additionally I've been able to develop leadership skills and gain experiences in university politics in my positions as president of the students' equality commission and head of communications department of my branches student body committee.

When one of the lecturers of an interdisciplinary gender studies seminar I attended in fall term 2007 offered me the opportunity to attend the 52nd session of the UN Commission on the Status of Women in New York this February, I grasped this chance without hesitation. I was free to chose from all of the events offered by international NGOs and permanent missions to the UN and took part in the NGO consultation as well as in workshops like "Promoting Gender Equality and the MDGs - Progress, Strategies and Finances", "...", "..." and "...". Participation in these workshops further strengthened me in my determination to become a development professional. I was particularly impressed by the combination of academic understanding, personal conviction and political mission noticeable at the conference.

I am aware that reaching my goal will be highly competitive. Being a very targeted and ambitious person, however, I'm determined to do my very best at working towards it. The more lectures and seminars I've followed, the more I've read during my BA studies, the more I've become aware of how little I actually know. This understanding has further contributed to my determination to continue learning as much as I can. I feel that the international environment of the University of Bath as well as the possibility offered by your MSc programme in international development of acquiring a solid understanding of different perspectives and concepts in development before choosing my own areas of special interest to focus on will prepare me in the best possible way for my future plans.

As a British citizen having lived outside of the UK most of my life, I would love to accomplish at least one part of my education in my home country. Considering my broad academic foundation as well as my professional background, I am confident that I would make a suitable candidate to the [name of department]. I would be more than happy if you could accept me to the [name of program] program this fall term. Thank you very much for your time and for considering my application, I look forward very much to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Re: Please correct my short letter

Feebs11 — Tue, 08 Apr 2008 21:04:01 GMT

Anonymous

could please correct this letter or draft in better way pls

Date: 07^th April, 2008
Ref : KCW/101/2008 Al Salem Establishment Safat, 32035. Shuwaikh.
Attention: Mr. Mohammad Amin, Human Resources Manager
Dear Mr. Amin,
SUPPLY OF MANPOWER: REVISED RATES
Further to your letter dated 23^rd March 2008, we would like to bring to your notice that the rates quoted for the supply of Engineering candidates are very low in relation to other companies' quoted fees. Therefore could you please send us revised increased rates for the Engineer category in order that we may supply suitable candidates on time.
Yours sincerely,

Hussain Yatim
Deputy General Manager

This seems odd. Who is charging whom? If you are supplying candidates for jobs, then it is for you to set the charges. If the person to whom you are writing is supplying candidates, then the letter does not make sense.

Please correct my short letter

Anonymous — Tue, 08 Apr 2008 06:31:29 GMT

could please correct this letter or draft in better way pls

Date: 07^th April, 2008 Ref : KCW/101/2008 Al Salem EstablishmentSafat, 32035. Shuwaikh. Attention : Mr. Mohammad Amin Human Resources Manager Dear Mr. Amin SUPPLY OF MANPOWER PERSONNELâS REVISED RATES Further to your letter dated 23^rd March 2008, we would like to bring your notice that the Rates quoted for supply of candidates for Engineer category are very low while we do the survey in the market. Therefore could you please send us the revised increased rates for the Engineer category in order supply personnelâs on time. Yours sincerely, Hussain YatimDeputy General Manager