Hi, dear friends, Below is my essay to Franklin&Marshall College, with the topic" what lead you to apply Franklin&Marshall College?" Please help me to point out the unclear points or any other problems. I'll appreciate your

Hello Hoang I too am a learner of English (I'm Japanese). I know your essay is to be corrected by native speakers. But if you don’t mind, please take a look of my version. It is not a correction of your essay. Please take it rather as a kind of

(Once again I forgot to log in -- MM) And, reading through the thread again, I think you do a good job of supporting each other. (Julie is indeed supporting your core ideas, Dmitrij, by detailing the point on 'sprawl' that was

Hi JessyK, Welcome to English Forums. Can you tell us a little about this brief essay? Is it for school and what grade? Are you learning English as a second language? I will help you with the first paragraph and perhaps we can do the

I have no desire to play typo tag with you either. I was simply making a point -- it's hard to catch our own errors. It's not a native speaker/ESL student thing, and writing is more than just catching errors. I've studied English as a second