http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aEssaySearch results for 'tag:Essay' matching tag 'Essay'en-USXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneLookWritingProcess-Suggestions/wqphc/post.htmWed, 27 May 2009 18:42:47 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:751232miatechguys could someone take a look at my pre-writing for an essay and make some suggestion.. Bill Gates' Impact on my Life Pre-Write 1 Ideas: 1- Do I like Bill Gates or Not? 2- Bill Gates' influence on my work day 3- Microsoft Office's impact on my work (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, etc) 4- Email clients and calendars (Microsoft Outlook vs Thunderbird and others) 5- Exchange Server vs other Mail Servers 6- Windows or Macs 7- Linux vs Windows 8- Web development and internet (Apache vs IIS) 9- Internet Explorer vs Firefox (browser wars) 10- ASP or PHP(web dev) 11- Standard applications in my everyday life 12- Microsoft Office or Google Apps 13- Bill Gates' impact on my work life (better or for worst) 14- Bill Gates and everyday...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EthicalEssay/wklpb/post.htmFri, 08 May 2009 02:30:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:720733chuckt88Please correct my essay for grammar and punctuation. Smoking in public Seeing people smoke is disgusting. It is common to drive by any place of business and see the employees enjoying a cigarette. To non-smokers this is a slight victory after years of trying; organizations such as the American Cancer Society have finally made an impact of how harmful second hand smoke can be. Although smoking is a right and the frustrations that a smoker feels, as if the whole world may be against them. Smoking pollutes the air everyone breaths and second hand smoke is more harmful than actually smoking. Possibly if smoking were banned more people would be prompted to quit and make for a healthier society. Smoking should have a ban in public...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneCheckConclusionGramma-ReasonableMistake/wzlqp/post.htmFri, 10 Apr 2009 01:59:23 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:696199fugitive08Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Could you check gramma, or sentences that doesn't make sence for me? Thank you very mucy This study indicated two out of three STs who worked in Taiwan were generally or highly satisfied with their jobs by comparing to US norm. However, when compared to the past studies in Taiwan, this study found lower job satisfaction. Chen et al. (2005) reported over 89.2% ST and audiologists were satisfied with their job. There were some signification findings. When comparing the pay factor and reward factor with US norm and US school-based SLPs, STs in Taiwan were the most satisfied with the salary and reward. Lin et al. (1991) mentioned 57.7% of Taiwan STs reported...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewWritingIelts-Preparation/wzbjh/post.htm#694950Mon, 06 Apr 2009 14:17:33 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:694950wijaya.theresiaHi AlphecaStars, Thank you very much for your kindness and help to review my writing. Would you please help to review two more letter about are about "Apologizing for the noise: ? Your kindness and assistance would be greatly appreciated:) Regards, Theresia Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 · Apologizing for the noise Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter o explain the reasons for the noise o apologise o describe what action you will take Dear my beloved neighbors, I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewWritingIelts-Preparation/wzbjh/post.htm#694949Mon, 06 Apr 2009 14:16:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:694949wijaya.theresiaHi AlphecaStars, Thank you very much for your kindness and help to review my writing. Would you please help to review two more letter about are about "Apologizing for the noise: ? Your kindness and assistance would be greatly appreciated:) Regards, Theresia Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 · Apologizing for the noise Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter o explain the reasons for the noise o apologise o describe what action you will take Dear my beloved neighbors, I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/TheTipsWritingCollegeAdmissions-Essay/wzvkg/post.htmFri, 03 Apr 2009 17:27:39 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:694065usacarolineTop Tip Number 1: Ensure that your admissions essay has a clear theme and direction. Utilize a thesis statement to state your main point. Top Tip Number 2: Ensure that prior to beginning your admissions essay that you outline what it is that you wish to say. Top Tip Number 3: Employ clear examples of your past experiences that aligns with your thesis and make sure these experiences cause you to stand out. Top Tip Number 4: Make sure that you are actually interested in what you have to say within your university admissions application. Top Tip Number 5: Begin your admissions statement with an introduction that captures the admissions officer attention such as a quote or a anecdote. Top Tip Number 6: Make shttp://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpGrammarMechanicProblemsAlot-ProblemsThanks/wvndm/post.htmFri, 27 Mar 2009 15:38:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:691640danielrams07It has been said that homemade cookies are delicious and a favorite among families and friends all across the world. Also homemade chocolate chip cookies make wonderful gifts during the holiday season, or for any special occasion. The fresh smell of homemade cookies just taken out of the oven makes everyone think about happy things in their life. Cookies are very popular because of it is sweet, very tasty and our taste buds crave for them. In every family it is common after dinner that everyone wants and enjoys a chocolate chip cookie for dessert. Let it be known, however, that without the proper equipment and directions, the great American snack is nothing more than a bag of cookie dough. There are three simple steps to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedCorrectingGrammarThank-You/wvmvp/post.htmThu, 26 Mar 2009 20:03:04 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:691371danielrams07Many of us have various family functions and gatherings we attend. We see family members that we have not seen in years. Often there are new members that are in the family, such as babies or new husbands; and sometimes there are people missing. No matter what, there are always a select group of individuals that we know will be there every year doing the same things. Every family event has four different family members that stand out. No matter who they are or where they come from, there are always these types of people at every family event. There is the drunken cousin, who always wants alcohol and basically passes out before the function even starts. There is the family nerd, the boy who stands in the corner at every event not...http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedProcessEssayMe/wvvjx/post.htmSat, 21 Mar 2009 01:45:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:689143baby2009Study for exam I know exam is hard to prepare so I going show you way to study for exam here are the step you can prepare for an exam. First write down the exam date on calendar. So ahead time you know when exam is exact date it gives you ahead started to study early. Second find a friend that get good grade so they help you study for the exam. You and friend can test each other on the exam question. Third listen to the teacher when she talking what go to be on the exam and also take note. This help you prepare for exam you and also will know what on the exam to study for. Fourth study couple day before to exam. When study early it gives time to refresh memory so you don’t cram on the day of exam. Final make sure you go bed early...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckThis/wvbhh/post.htmWed, 18 Mar 2009 18:27:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:688235alrexandar777Hello, I'm a student from Bulgaria. I will be really happy if check the grammar of my homework. We have to make some sort of essay on "Who is your idol". Thank you! Correct me if something is wrong! Here it is: From the current celebrities I do not want anyone to be my idol. Because when people have an idol they often start just copying it. And when you are copying someone you are loosing your own personality. When that happens you are just a stupid imitator that in most cases nobody likes. When nobody likes you start becoming insane. After that you kill your idol because you are obsessed from the idea to be famous.  It's cool to like a singer or any type of start but it is not good to start imitating it. That is why...http://www.englishforums.com/English/AnAppreciationBenefitsScholarship/wdgdj/post.htmMon, 09 Mar 2009 10:03:45 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:684701nhosjeThe Office of Scholarships and Financial Aid rejected this essay of mine. I am so mad. Can you tell me what seems to be the problem? The only Instruction given aside from the format was to write an essay entitled 'Appreciation on the Benefits of Scholarship. Here goes my essay: Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Dear OSFA, It has been four weeks or more since I last visited your office. I apologize for that. No, I was not out of school, doing gimmicks with my pals, nor hanging out 24/7 in an internet gaming café. I was very, very, busy making the best out of the free education you have gave to me. I was very, very, busy doing 2 major projects for my 2 major subjects in Computer Science. It...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneCheckEssay-Please/wcxbr/post.htmMon, 02 Mar 2009 19:29:33 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:682057amik2009jor February 9, 2009 　 As a student whose English is a second language, Agnieszka faces more challenges as a English writer. Lack of vocabulary, incorrect sentence structure, grammar mistakes, and incoherence are Agnieszka’s biggest weaknesses, but besides them she also has strong feature as: well done research and good essay organization, and all of them can be improved in order to make her a better writer. The lack of vocabulary can be a huge barrier appealing to create variety of sentence. Agnieszka doesn’t posses enough words that have a influence on her writing, which when shabby and uninteresting, may discouraged the readers. Because she doesn’t know all important words, she has a problem with expressing herself. She has to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayRevisionHelp/wcrbr/post.htmSun, 22 Feb 2009 00:28:41 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:678011doesxpHi could you please review this excercise? Thanks for your help :D Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and detail to support your answer. While some people like to live in a metropolitan big city, I prefer to live in a quiet comfortable small town. In my opinion, there are some advantages to live in a little town. Small towns have an easy access to anywhere, so I go easily wherever I want. Also, they have less environmental pollution than big cities. I like to care my health so this is important to me. The first advantage is that small towns have an easy access to all of their places because they have short distances to get to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/TheFinalDarftEssayCheckGrammar-Punctuations/wbcjr/post.htmMon, 16 Feb 2009 15:49:25 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:673812rodsI was still lazing in my bed on a sunny Saturday morning when I heard my sister screaming with excitement. My father had offered to take us to visit the zoo. Immediately, I jumped out of bed and started getting ready for my trip. We drove in my father’s car. My father had already purchased the tickets online . The first zoo creature I met turned out to be a rhinoceros . It stared at me warily and I grinned back with a goofy smile. I turned and found myself face to face with a tame hippopotamus . Unlike the rhinoceros, it was more concerned with basking in the morning sun than looking at me. I heard a noise and to my amusement there was a troop of chimpanzees fighting over a cap. The cap looked familiar, that is when I realized it...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckSpellingGrammer-Punctuations/wrqmr/post.htmSun, 15 Feb 2009 14:30:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:672996rodsI was very excited and not quite sure what to expect. The first zoo creature I met turned out to be an owl. He eyed me warily and I grinned back with a goofy smile. I turned and found myself face to face with an alligator. Unlike the owl, he was more concerned with basking in the morning sun than looking at me. I heard a noise and to my amusement there were a troop of monkeys fighting over a coconut. Then there was a herd of Arabian Oryx. The zoo keeper explained to us the efforts initiated by the late President of U.A.E to breed the Arabian oryx in captivity to prevent them from extinction. I entered the main building, where the primates and reptiles are housed, and found a King Cobra slithering in its enclosure. also there was a...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePleaseCheck/hxqlg/post.htmFri, 30 Jan 2009 17:55:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:658246sonny91Future Goals Everyone has a future, whether it is long or it is short but they have one, and what they end up doing with their future it will be their decision, but I have my own to worry about. I have to think about what I want to accomplish now, tomorrow, a year from now, and so forth. I want to do something with my life, I haven’t exactly figured out what I want to be, but I know I don’t want to sit at home and have other people work so I don’t have to, I like to be able to take care of myself so I’ve got to start making goals for the future. I’m in high-school, a junior right now, so I’m getting pretty close to figuring out what the real world is all about. I’ve got to get my act straight and I’m working on that right...http://www.englishforums.com/English/BetterEnglishSpeakers/hnqzg/post.htm#653233Sat, 24 Jan 2009 23:21:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:653233likesenglishBy the way, do you consider those with less vocabulary poor in English grammar even if they can write perfect sentences based on the basic sentence-patterns? Aren't they allowed to write formal essays?http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyWording/hmrjd/post.htm#643855Thu, 15 Jan 2009 17:14:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:643855ferpecteditHello: I work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't revise your entire essay here but I will show you the changes I would make in the first paragraph. The film The Kite Runner takes place from 1980 to 1988. The main characters are a wealthy man from Iran and his son. They live in Afghanistan. The father complains about his son because when the son is in trouble, he does not fight back. The son has a friend named Hasan. Hasan and his father work in the wealthy family’s house. The Kite Runner is a title of a full-length movie, so it should also be italicized. And the movie does include "The" as a quick search on Google attests. The movie was just filmed recently:...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CallingFriendsReviewEssayFranklin-MarshallCollege/hlxpp/post.htmThu, 15 Jan 2009 00:44:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:643006wanningHi, dear friends, Below is my essay to Franklin&Marshall College, with the topic" what lead you to apply Franklin&Marshall College?" Please help me to point out the unclear points or any other problems. I'll appreciate your help and value your suggestions. __ I choose F&M for I value the close relationships with my professors. I am the very student who manages to grasp teacher’s message through tacit eye-contacts, who visits teachers’ offices most frequently, and who always attributes much of the excellence in school to close relationships with teachers. Now I can even imagine the sunny afternoon, when I sit with Professor. Nicholas Montemarano in the exquisite Philadelphia Alumni Writers House interestedly...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMyResearchPaper/hzbjb/post.htmWed, 10 Dec 2008 20:20:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:609655awtarHello I want someone to check my research paper but I don't know how to put it here because it contains 6 pages. So should I copy it and past it here or what? Please help me. awtarhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/hbrnw/post.htmThu, 20 Nov 2008 10:09:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:589789xox esme xoxHey everyone, i was just wondering if you could cheak this essay for me please. It's a creative writting essay about a scary experience. Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 One of my scariest experiences happened when I was babysitting. It was the first time I had ever babysat Coco. I think she was about two, all dressed in clothes from Pumpkin Patch. She also had these big blue eyes and platinum blond, curly hair. She was honestly one of the most adorable two year olds I had ever met. The weather was awful, really cold and windy. It was just getting dark as I walked up the drive to their house. The house was kind of old and a bit shabby with decrepit trees scattered round it. I was kind of scared as...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatement/hrpcn/post.htmTue, 18 Nov 2008 22:17:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:589029naimahi, i am going to apply for economic major for Undergraduate Application, can you help me to correct my whole essay? I am not good at grammar and i hope to make each paragraph more link and smooth. we are require to show our knowleadge on economics in our essay, also, we are need to tell why the school should choose me and how i am outstanding or having advantage than others with same GPA, but i have not idea where to add these in. Could anyone of you help me out? These are some of the other requirment that i wanna to maintain in the essay: -Is thoughtful and honest , reflective -Strives for depth, not breadth -Follows the conventions of good writing -Conforms to guidelines -Answers the question! -Benefits from...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayAttendingCollegeUniversity/hrjbr/post.htm#587332Thu, 13 Nov 2008 18:03:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:587332ferpecteditI work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more information. I won't do the whole essay here, but I will show you how I would revise your first paragraph. Study is the most important activity in which we can engage. We learn throughout our whole lives. Everyone wants to have more knowledge. University is where one goes to gain the highest level of education. In university, students can prepare for a career, increase knowledge, and be exposed to new experiences. I tried to clarify, sometimes guessing at your meaning. I removed awkward, ungrammatical or overly informal phrases like "thing in our life" and "want to study more than what they get in the present." Also avoid vague...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpWithEssay/gxkbc/post.htmFri, 03 Oct 2008 15:30:52 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:572817kulsumi need to write an essay on 'if paper was not invented' . it has to be around 700 words please give me some key points so i can expand VERY VERY URGENThttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectThis/gmmdr/post.htm#564286Tue, 09 Sep 2008 22:39:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:564286ferpecteditIt's a long essay for this sort of question, but I'll edit the first sentence for you. I am in my senior year of college, about to graduate in a few months. You don't need to include "currently attending college", since being in your senior year (and about to graduate) already tells the reader that you are a student. I'll let someone else take it from there. Maybe we can get a sentence-by-sentence answers for you.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpEditPerosnalStatementThank-You/gmlnc/post.htmSun, 07 Sep 2008 15:44:01 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:563484davidzhaosMy mom once told me a story about the lion and the deer. She said on the African grassland the deer mother tells her children when they run, they must run faster than the slowest deer because if they don't, then they will get eaten by the lion. The lion mother also tells her children when they run, they must run faster than the slowest deer, because if they don’t, then they will not catch any deer and starve to death. This story has taught me a variable lesson: it taught me to always try my hardest because other are trying their as well. This is why during my junior year in high school, I decided to push myself to the limit, to get the best out of myself by taking as many AP classes. During my junior year I decided to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanEditCollegeAppliactionEssay/gmlnr/post.htmSun, 07 Sep 2008 15:39:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:563482davidzhaosb. The world is a better (or worse) place because of the computer chip. Image yourself not being able to talk instantly to your friends or able to find information at lighting spee d, what would life be like? This would be what life would be like without computer chip. The computer chip (whole computer technology) is one of the most significant advancement in the twentieth-century. It affect every single person who has access to it and affect the world as a whole. Computer technology has vastly improve world, whatever is your personal life or the world as a whole. Computer has affect our individual life dramatically. People say knowledge is power, the computer chip allow us Internet access that can delivery huge amount of...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpCouldEssayLot/gllgw/post.htmMon, 25 Aug 2008 15:04:25 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:558458bmattThe question is: Today people in different countries can see the same movies, watch the same TV programs and follow the same fashions. To what extent do you think this is a positive development? Following is my essay. As the technology is advancing, movies, TV programs and fashion are increasingly accessible to people over the world. However, many people start to argue about whether this phenomenon has positive impact on us. From my point of view, I agree that it brings human many advantages, but it has short comes too. Convincing argument can be made that same movies, TV programs and fashions could benefit people in different countries. To start with, I would like to point out that people who watch the same movies and TV...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneEditEssays/glrjq/post.htmSat, 16 Aug 2008 00:38:39 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:555338davidzhaoshi can someone help me edit two essays? 1. If you could invent one useful thing for humankind, what would it be? Describe the invention and its impact. In US today, one of the most significant issues we are facing is the automobile . Currently automobile produces the second largest amount of CO2 gas, the leading cause of environment damage and is cause oil crisis we are experiencing today. It is said that necessity is the mother of invention. Well, one of today greatest necessity is the need to replace conventional gasoline automobile and as result I would like to invent a eclectic power car that just do that. By using electricity rather than gasoline, my new electric automobile will solve both the environment problems and oil...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectEssayFriends/gkplg/post.htmThu, 14 Aug 2008 14:51:58 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:554784phumba2009About raining in my little town Sometimes the town where I was born looked a little sad. That was at summer time. During the winter we had a lot of fun. Mostly when it was raining we as a kids were so happy I do not know why. Maybe it was because the sound of the storm, maybe it was because we as a family were together talking and laughing during the rain. I did really like when my cousins and me used to play making paper little boats and put them to float on the spots of water we use to have after the rain. The streets practically were flooded but not enough to cause a total flooding or some tragedy. But anyways we used the water coming down over the streets to play with paper boats. We put many little boats to float over the little...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectEssay/gknkg/post.htmWed, 13 Aug 2008 05:30:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:554189phumba2009LANGUAGE LEARNING Language Learning it's very important for foreigners mostly when the foreigner wants to study at the University or some college. I think the best opportunity is the opportunity what you give to yourself. And neglecting some of the training you need to reach your goal it's a bad choice. Many people are conffused about many things mostly when the newcomer is alone in a different country where he or her was born. Sometimes newcomers get conffused about what to do in a different life style and difficult situations living abroad. Mostly when nobody cares about your life as usually happens in a different country, because there is not friends maybe not family or not the same circumstances. And all these situations...http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCheckIeltsWritingTask-IntroductionParagraph/gkdvc/post.htmTue, 05 Aug 2008 15:31:52 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:551193bmattCould you please help me review this paragraph and make any correction if needed (grammar...misused word, and so on)? Topic: Some people think the advantages of international tourism outweigh its disadvantages. To what extend do you agree? My introduction paragraph: International tourism is increasingly popular nowadays because of the highly developed world transportation system, commercialization and many other factors. But at the same time, controversy has arisen over whether international tourism has more benefits than drawbacks. Some assert that international tourism can usually bring more positive results. Speaking for myself, I agree with this proposition, with certain qualifications. == Many thanks, Leihttp://www.englishforums.com/English/Tobacco/gvwhk/post.htmThu, 05 Jun 2008 04:12:34 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:523219flash2008Tobacco Is this life quite long, so there is a need to shrink it? Most people don’t think so. However a great deal of people does bad habits harms their life and health. Nowadays many researches have confirmed the strong link between tobacco and cancers, but the number of smokers still very high. The proportion of the male adult global population smokers almost half O’Connel (2006, 105).Although, the link between cancer and smoking, many teens worldwide smoke, it is around one in five O’Connel (2006, 105).However, the cigarettes factories and tobacco companies have different opinion about smoking. They have large business and great deal of consumers. This essay will talk about advantages and disadvantages of smoking. The first...http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedCorrectionForEssay/zqwhb/post.htmWed, 09 Apr 2008 17:32:39 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:498645samundeeswari.m.bAs I am preparing for TOEFL exam, I practice for essay writing. I woud be happy if anyone correct my essay and give feedback to improve my writting. Thanks in advance. Question: Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do yu prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Answer: Many of us will say get up early in the morning is good to health. But we could count the followers who really practice in their life. One group will say get up early in the morning and start the day's work is really good. While the other group will follow get up later and work until late at night. I believe there are...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ItsMySecondDraft/zxlmj/post.htmMon, 17 Mar 2008 05:46:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:489779nocyit's my second draft. please give me any advice. i want it to be natural to read. expression,grammar(especially, pronoun is difficult), punctuation marks etc.. this is my first trial of english composition. ======================================================= Wisdom for Money For a long time, people have had a tendency to believe that money is the root of all evil. Even those who were rich and in high class didn't like to talk about money. As far as I know, this is because in the Bible, richness is &nbhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/GiveMeAnyAdvicePlease/zxkqp/post.htmSun, 16 Mar 2008 13:28:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:489564nocyhi :) i'm from south korea. i search for here and come to post this, to have some advice about my writing. it is so difficult to write something in english, because it isn't my mother tongue. but, now i have to write short essay for my english composition class. what you are going to see below is my first composition in english. main idea is about money. (what i want to say is money is so important to us. that's it.) please give me any advice ( grammar, voca, expression , or anything will be possible, please.) honestly, i don't know how i have to composite my idea. just write.. help me please. -- Wisdom for Money For a long time, many people have had a tendency to believe that money...