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Hi Sharon, and welcome to the forums. I'm sorry to say that your essay is ridded with serious grammatical errors, and before you worry about summaries, etc., you should make sure you have corrected those errors. I'm afraid that people won't take your ideas seriously if you don't present them...

cand someone have a look at my motivation letter for a business and economics summer school in slovenia and give me some tips , please.... here it is Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for the Ljubljana Summer School in 2007. I noticed your advertisement with great interest, as I...

can someone give me an opinion about my letter of motivation for a summer school in business and economics in slovenia. please have a look and give me some tips please.... here it is Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for the Ljubljana Summer School in 2007. I noticed your...

Your answer to the second question is about 200 words too long. Cut it down and bring it back here afterwards. Watch your spelling as well, as you have several silly errors, such as beak for break and Whiteman for Whitman. You need to be able to proof read your own writing and not rely on us to...

Why are you seeking an M.B.A. or M.S. from the Whitman School of Management? What do you hope to experience and contribute? What are your plans and goals after you receive your degree? (750 words maximum) Never is pursuing my graduate study in finance a cursory decision to me. I still...

Hi, I'm interested in assisting your venture. I have been a TESOL teacher in Thailand and Korea for four years. I have taught all levels including IELTS, TOEFL and Business English. I'm now involved in translation proofreading and International Trade Public Relations for a Korean provincial...

Hello~ This essay is for applying to Global Fashion Management(graduated course) of FIT. My strength is marketing experience and my weakness is my GPA. I wonder whether this writing shows my passion for studying at FIT or not. Thank you for your help. Regards, Nicole It was a sunny...