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Re: correct my essay please!!

Each country is presented by its own culture. (You first have to mention there are three symbols.) Proudly, Kingdom of Saudi Arabia is known by the two Holy Mosques in Makkah AL-Mukarrama and AL-Madinah AL-Monawara in the western region. They are real symbols for my country where its the original...

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

I do not understand much more where the topic sentence of each paragraph is. In your introduction, you mean there are 2 paragraphs: Ad. and disad. In each p, you must make sure that you have a topic and some more sentences to suport it. for ex, TV benefits people in some ways. First of all,...

correct my essay please!!

Each country is presented by its own culture. Proudly, Kingdom of Saudi Arabia is known by the two Holy Mosques in Makkah AL-Mukarrama and AL-Madinah AL-Monawara in the western region. They are real symbols for my country where its the original place of spreading Islam .They show how all Muslims...

Re: Essay - check it please !

My terrible pastEverything began that night of May of 1999 when I and my friends we decided to enter the games of the Ouija in my house. Defying the warnings of the lady who us cured the damn table, on not playing with her after 7,00 p.m., we challenged the...

Re: Correct my essay(free type essay)

I fixed it already and is it better than the last post above? My personal dream job is to work in the Information Technology field as a software programmer. Some of those reasons I’ve chosen this career are the high needs in young professionals, high salary to maintain a stable life...

Re: pls write essay on computers frm safeer

.COMPUTERS A computer is an electronic data processing machine that accepts information from the user, processes it according to a program stored in its memory, and produces the computed results. Computers are used in railway and airline reservation systems, banks, stockbroking firms, etc....

Re: Please help check out this essay.

Highlighted a few glaring errors for you to fix.

Please help check out this essay.

ISSUE :The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare. Is really the case as the speaker contends that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare? The speaker’s assertion is tempting when it comes to various ways of living a life, innumerous optional...

Can someone look over my essay ? thank you so much

Internet is recently one of the fast, convenient ways for people to communicate with other people around the world. Especially with social networking sites, people are now able to create their own world online. They can do all the things they want to do even things they cant do them in their...

Re: Little help!!

Anon, you need the adjective definitions of familiar, not the noun ones. http://www.m-w.com/dictionary Main Entry: 2familiar Function: adjective Etymology: Middle English familier, from Anglo-French, from Latin familiaris, from familia Date: 14th century 1: closely acquainted :...