By Essays, Exclamation marks

Basically, I have been set a piece of coursework: to compare the aforementioned poems. I am going for an A* piece at GCSE level, there is no particular question, just to compare the four poems. I have almost completed My Last Duchess, mentioning all the themes I can think of and reading the...

Hi, Can you say:"Look where i made you go through" (problems)or"Look where i got you in" (problems) No. Say "Look what i made you go through" (problems)or"Look what i got you into" (problems) You also need to use a capital 'I', or you will lose marks in exams and on essays. And a period,...

This essay is giving me Hell. I always seem to have poor organization but I never see it. Can anyone help? Also if there is anything that you know of to help this essay further please post it on here too please. Thank you. Oh yes... If you are wondering about the "Wren 1" and the choppyness, it...

What is your opinion about the importance of a person’s first day of school? Whether pleasant or terrible, almost everyone remembers their first day of school. (Do you really need the exclamation mark?) In the short story “The First Day”, author Edward P. Jones narrates a little girl’s...

Hi, You opening is weak because you repeat yourself or state the obvious. Look at your first two sentences. The rest of your essay is reasonably well written from an English point of view. From a logical point of view, it could use more work. For example, filtering effluent from factories is...

Hello! I'm a French student and I have to write an essay in English. It is about translation (from English to French) and I have difficulties finding websites about the way you type punctuation in English. I know it is different from the way we type in French, but I can't find any explanations of...

Bart, I have already responded to a previous post but will also respond to this one. A few words before I answer you plea for help. Don't use the exclamation mark for emphasis. Use it correctly--only after a true exclamation, such as "Wait!" or "Stop the bus!" It's sad that you "hate writing."...