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Please look through my narrative essay and correct grammar please

Do you think the title is relevant to the story? I want to say like "For all your good hope, one day, he will know it" or "Don't regret for your good doing" but can't come up with any good title. Would you mind suggesting me any? If not, it is fine. Thank you so...

Re: Is this paragraph correct Thanks! j

.I have underlined some problem areas: Writing is one of the powerful tools that a person can have because it expresses who we are as a person. It’s a key to achievement in school, in the workplace, Writing equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively...

Argumentative essay 'Against Cosmetic Surgery'

Could someone please help me with this argumentative essay? I have to write an argumentative essay against cosmetic surgery. Could someone please look if there are mistakes (grammar mistakes, vocabulary mistakes, logical mistakes), if the text is well-structured, if everything in the text is...

Re: For reference and discussion purpose

Hi, The situation is as follows : China says the Paracel and Spratly archipelagos belong to them ,but Vietnam says these archipelagos belong to Vietnam . The newspapaper publishes an article on this issue and wants public opinion ( everybody ) to judge it justly by listening to the source of...

Re: For reference and discussion purpose

Thank you Clive , I don't know how to translate exactly from Vietnamese language . The situation is as follows : China says the Paracel and Spratly archipelagos belong to them ,but Vietnam says these archipelagos belong to Vietnam . The newspapaper publishes an article on this issue and...

Looking for a crib

Hi everybody, I think that what I'm looking for may be somewhere in this site, but I haven't been able to find it. I need to find a list of words and sentences that may make the writing of an essay easier. I mean, things such as connectors, set phrases, and so on. For example, "on...

give me any adivice, please. i need help

hi :) i'm from south korea. i search for here and come to post this, to have some advice about my writing. it is so difficult to write something in english, because it isn't my mother tongue. but, now i have to write short essay for my english composition class. what you are...

give me any advice, please.

hi :) i'm from south korea. i search for here and come to post this, to have some advice about my writing. it is so difficult to write something in english, because it isn't my mother tongue. but, now i have to write short essay for my english composition class. what you are...

Re: Please help me with the essay! I need some comment! Thank you!

It's not the vocabulary that matters here. The problem is that the story moves at one pace. Slow down and dwell on the experience of cigarette smoking more -- the pleasure, the discomfit and (deep down) the guilt. When Julie gets home and argues with her mom, she really feels guilty, but she...

Please help me with the essay! I need some comment! Thank you!

Please help me with this essay. How can i make it sound more realistic and with more feelings. What vocabulary should be used? Are there good vocabulary to describe what happen? Thank you so much! This is an essay to be completed with the phrase : " Suddenly, I realised I had lost my...