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do you understand what i wrote??

would someone check my error ?? do you understand what i wrote ?? Title : Does Business Intelligence Have Benefits for Company Decision Making?Decision-making is a common process in every company and managers have to announce new decisions in order to achieve company objectives. Business...

Re: Please look through my narrative essay and correct grammar please

Hi - There are some grammatical errors here, but not too many for a story of this length. There are a few other problems, though. Are we supposed to understand that your mother is Luk, the poor girl who never gave up on trying to do the right thing? It's not clera that it's so....

Please look through my narrative essay and correct grammar please

Do you think the title is relevant to the story? I want to say like "For all your good hope, one day, he will know it" or "Don't regret for your good doing" but can't come up with any good title. Would you mind suggesting me any? If not, it is fine. Thank you so...

Re: Is this paragraph correct Thanks! j

.I have underlined some problem areas: Writing is one of the powerful tools that a person can have because it expresses who we are as a person. It’s a key to achievement in school, in the workplace, Writing equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively...

Re: Money to live, or live to money?

Thank you Micawber! I appreciate your work on pointed out my mistakes.I tried correcting them by myself as below, though, still could not correct all the mistakes;I have got to study grammar.I would appreciate if you could let me know the mistakes I am sure I made somewhere in the essay below.I...

Apostrophe Grammar Question

I had a question about apostrophes in conjunction with nonrestrictive modifying elements. I am writing an essay and would like to know if you need to put an apostrophe twice, as in: "The author fully develops Kate Miller's, the protagonist's, character." -or- is it "The...

Re: College addmisions essay. Proof read.

Hi, Heres my essay, any critiques are welcom. Basically i need someone to edit (spelling, gremmar, ect.). Also tell me what you think about it. is this a good addmisions essay? I have no idea what an Institute like this expects from applicants. However, to me this is a very good essay. You...

self introduction

hello..i'm a girl who are interested with exchange students programme at *** university.the university required me to write a self introduction essay to summit to them.i already write the essay but i'm not confident with it.can someone help me to check the sentences, grammar,or can give...

Argumentative essay 'Against Cosmetic Surgery'

Could someone please help me with this argumentative essay? I have to write an argumentative essay against cosmetic surgery. Could someone please look if there are mistakes (grammar mistakes, vocabulary mistakes, logical mistakes), if the text is well-structured, if everything in the text is...

Re: Please check for me this discursive essay !

Thank you Grammar Geek, for your help ! "blue" words are the words that I correct again.However, I still don't know how to correct the the "red" mistakes ? Sorry for my slow understanding, my English isnt very good,so please correct for me one more time, Thank you so much...