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Need some help in regards to my IELTS practice essay

Hey everyone, My IELTS exam will be in April. I was born and raised in Germany butI lived in the States for about 4 years. Well anyways, currently I am studying for the exam. I wrote an essay and want to hear some opinions about it. Fact is, there have been some heated discussions about the...

Re: IELTS essay: A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community

Thanks for your comments. It's very kind of you to spend your valuable time helping me correct my essay. Thank you again. Best wishes to you Mister Micawber!

Re: IELTS essay: A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

.I have underlined some problem areas (mostly regarding word choice). In addition, I don't believe you have presented a clear and detailed argument. It would be wiser to select only one side of the question and defend that more vigorously: There is no doubt that a government plays...

IELTS essay: A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

Hello! I’m from Viet Nam and I’m preparing for the IELTS examination. I try to practice writing IELTS task 2 everyday, but there aren’t any teachers who correct my mistakes. I would be very appreciate, if anyone could help me correct my essay. Thanks in advance. -- You should spend...

Re: Please evaluate this Ielts essay. I would appreciate any comments!

I thought the intro. was okay, if a bit generic.

Re: Please evaluate this Ielts essay. I would appreciate any comments!

Hi julielai, thank you for pointing out some gramamtical mistakes and lack of explanation in the essay for me. However could any of you assess the introduction and sentence structures because the introductions of my essays are often criticized as ineffective and the sentences sometimes appear...

Re: Please evaluate this Ielts essay. I would appreciate any comments!

Anonymous wrote: Hi everyone. I'm preparing for ielts exam next month. Because English is a foreign language in my country so I have many difficulties in expressing my ideas in english. This is my essay on computers. Please evaluate and score it if possible. Thanks in advance. People...

Please evaluate this Ielts essay. I would appreciate any comments!

Hi everyone. I'm preparing for ielts exam next month. Because English is a foreign language in my country so I have many difficulties in expressing my ideas in english. This is my essay on computers. Please evaluate and score it if possible. Thanks in advance. People increasingly spend their...

Could you please correct my essay?

I'm taking the IELTS (General) in September. I'm trying to prepare myself for the test, and I'd like to ask for your help guys. Hopefully you can correct my essay.Here is the description of the writing task:We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals,...

Essay help.

Hello, First of all, I would like thank all of you who are helping people to improve english. I have been trying to clear my writing part for a year. I dont know where it goes wrong and I am alway short for half band(6.5 band in IELTS, instead of 7). Last time when I wrote the essay, I checked it...