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Re: (Urgent!) Could you please comment my essay here? Thanks

Grammar Geek — Wed, 21 May 2008 14:25:21 GMT

Hi Chibi.

Paragraphs are always welcome. Highlights show possible problems.

Quynh, who is still very young in her twenties, desires to do a lot of remarkable things such as studying to become a successful manageress, travelling around the world and devoting to charity program for children. Thus, she does not want to fix her life to a marriage. This is also the choice of many other women at her same age. They â who have had more chances to lead their life in their own way choose to stay single so that they can put all their energies into social and career life without worrying the possible difficulties of family life. Looking back at the society ages ago, women were not allowed to get beyond the bounds of familial principles. All they could do was to obey their parentsâ guides, and then their husbandsâ. Living such a life may lead women to inactiveness and depression.* Therefore, when doors are open for them to decide on their life, they naturally turn themselves towards the joys of little commitment and pressure.** Thatâs the time they can take all their chances for travelling and having parties, or spend all their money on clothes and make-up.*** In addition, the fact that women have gradually gained the equal roles as men in the integrated society encourages them to urge for much more improvement. These women become so workaholic that they think they have little time for anything else. Related to the first reasons, family life now has been considered a burden to some young women ~~in some cases~~. They seem to be afraid of caring about the household, financial problems and children because these may take a lot of time for their own. The lack of private time not only limits their free life but also results in their little devotion to the job. Moreover, the mass media has talked continually about home violence which has physical and mental influence on all suffered women. As a result, many young women still keep unmarried to protect themselves.**** To wrap up, a considerable number of young women now avoid strain their life by not coming to a marriage. They preferably lead a free life without worrying to be a victim of any home violence case, at the same time; they can absolutely be dedicated to their own career.

* I suggest more women suffer from depression today than in the past, so this may not be a good argument.

** You don't think a successful career brings pressure??

*** Spend their money on clothes and make-up? What about buying a home of their own, or Quynh, who wants to donate to charity? This is an absurd statement

**** I don't think you'll find many people saying "I didn't marry because I was afraid of domestic violence." Do you have survey data to back this up?

(Urgent!) Could you please comment my essay here? Thanks

Chibi — Wed, 21 May 2008 13:40:26 GMT

Topic: Today many young women choose to stay single. What do you think are the reasons for this new trend? Write an essay between 300 and 350 words about what many lead to one womanâs decision not to marry.Quynh, who is still very young in her twenties, desires to do a lot of remarkable things such as studying to become a successful manageress, travelling around the world and devoting to charity program for children. Thus, she does not want to fix her life to a marriage. This is also the choice of many other women at her same age. They â who have had more chances to lead their life in their own way choose to stay single so that they can put all their energies into social and career life without worrying the possible difficulties of family life.Looking back at the society ages ago, women were not allowed to get beyond the bounds of familial principles. All they could do was to obey their parentsâ guides, and then their husbandsâ. Living such a life may lead women to inactiveness and depression. Therefore, when doors are open for them to decide on their life, they naturally turn themselves towards the joys of little commitment and pressure. Thatâs the time they can take all their chances for travelling and having parties, or spend all their money on clothes and make-up. In addition, the fact that women have gradually gained the equal roles as men in the integrated society encourages them to urge for much more improvement. These women become so workaholic that they think they have little time for anything else. Related to the first reasons, family life now has been considered a burden to young women in some cases. They seem to be afraid of caring about the household, financial problems and children because these may take a lot of time for their own. The lack of private time not only limits their free life but also results in their little devotion to the job. Moreover, the mass media has talked continually about home violence which has physical and mental influence on all suffered women. As a result, many young women still keep unmarried to protect themselves.To wrap up, a considerable number of young women now avoid strain their life by not coming to a marriage. They preferably lead a free life without worrying to be a victim of any home violence case, at the same time; they can absolutely be dedicated to their own career.

Please look through my narrative essay and correct grammar please

T_nattawat — Fri, 09 May 2008 18:06:41 GMT

Do you think the title is relevant to the story? I want to say like "For all your good hope, one day, he will know it" or "Don't regret for your good doing" but can't come up with any good title. Would you mind suggesting me any? If not, it is fine. Thank you so much for your help.

Regret Not For Good Deeds
Leo and I have been friends since we were in diapers. We live in the same neighborhood, go to the same schools, and know each other's house like it is our own. Even though Leo is not one of those handsome guys, he is very intelligent. In fact, he always ranks among the Top Three in our class. Apart from his academic excellence, he has a girlfriend that every guy would envy. Her name is Daw. She is a slim, tall girl, with twinkling black eyes. Her charming appearance and confident expression make all guys dream of her. However, there have been many rumors about this girl going around. I have never believed all that rubbish though. Until one night when I was at a pub. I saw her and was going to say hi; but then I have to stop because she was kissing with Bill, a rich and good-looking athlete in the school. I tried to tell myself that I might be drunk but the fact was that I just arrived and had not yet drunk anything, not even water. The following day I anxiously go to Leo's house and tell him what I saw last night. Believe it not, he chooses to trust his girlfriend, not his best friend who he had known for all his life. He says that I am jealous of him and made that story up to destroy their relationship. Before he runs away, he says, "get away from my life." I am stunned.
I come home and tell my mom what had happened. Much to my surprise, she starts smiling and says, "you are so me, my son." She asks me to calm down and tells me that she understands how I feel because she herself once had been in the same situation. She recalls her memory; a story that change the way I see the world begin.
Luk was married to Chi, but not everybody agreed with their relationship. Sue, Chi's mother strongly opposed it and declared that she would do anything to prevent the marriage. In her eyes, Luk was just a poor girl coming with empty hand to squander their wealth. Luk had realized this since they met for the first time, when her husband-to-be's mother greeted her with a piercing look and said, "from your head to your toe, nothing could match my son." Yet, their wedding ceremony was one of the biggest events in the area. All elders in the village were invited as well as many relatives in China. Probably, the only person who was home that day was the groom's own mother.
Everyone in the house loved her because she was kind, patient, and hard-working, but the attitude of her mother-in-law remained the same. She was so melodramatic and would blame her for every little mistake. One day, she shouted and accused Luk for trying to kill her by preparing water that was too hot. This kind of story kept repeating day after day. Luk was lost. She had done everything to please her mother-in-law but it was worthless. This painful position made her cry many times. Thanks to the support of her beloved partner and Luk's belief: "good deeds beget good results," she did not give up.
One day, Sue got the flu. She had a high fever; aches and pains spread all over her body forcing her to stay in bad all the time. Unfortunately, most of her children including Chi had happened to be away for several weeks, and the rest were too busy working. Sue was left home alone with Luk, the very last person on earth she would want to be taken care by. Although Sue had treated her badly, Luk did not mind sacrificing day and night to her. She would woke up at five in the morning to make a bowl of rice porridge, prepare Chinese medicine, and serve her. After finished her housework routine, she would boil water to made a pot of ginseng tea and had it next to Sue's bed to drink at night. Not even a word of "thank you" came out from her hard-to-please mother's mouth.
Four rough days had passed, Luk was very exhausted due to the fact that she had not gotten enough sleep lately. Everything was like usual, she got up early, cooked food, and prepared medicine. While she was handing a glass of ginseng tea to Sue. KRESHH! She dropped it. The glass was broken as well as all Luk's courage. She knew that she will be blamed for her clumsiness. Luk kept saying "sorry" like crazy. As to her surprise, what the mother said was, "it is okay; just prepare me another cup of that." That few words meant so much to her. She knew that a saying, "good deeds beget good results," is true. All her effort was starting to pay off. She quickly ran with smile to the kitchen, and a new cup of tea was prepared and served.
Just before Chi came back, Sue recovered from the flu. Although a mother-in-law still could not fully accept her daughter-in-law as her child, the relationship among them gradually got better. Sue was less arrogant towards her daughter and talked to her in a much nicer way. Unfortunately, she did not live very long; a couple years later, she passed away because of breast cancer. You will not believe what was her last words: "I am sorry, Luk, my wonderful child." My mom closes her story with a smile but her eyes are close to tears.
I am relieved by that story; at least I know that I have done the right thing.
That evening, Leo calls me saying that he is extremely sorry; he did not mean like what he said. He admits that he always knows that Daw does not take their relationship seriously; but he has denied that fact and fooled himself. Before he hang up, he says,"Thank you, dude, for pulling me out of that fancy world."

Re: There is an essay that I need help to correct!

phuthuy-zin — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 10:57:36 GMT

This is a paragraph that I want to check for grammar mistake. I hope that you can help me for this entreating help. So please accommondating for helping me.

A single parent adoption is so popular in social today. Many people are successful and having spare money for living. So they want to have a baby but they donât want to be covered by relationship in a family. Therefore, they think that they just have a baby without get marriage and then they take cared their child with only dad or mum. But a single parent adoption has a lot of disadvantages against both parents adoption. Hereafter, I will present disadvantages of single parent adoption and advantages of both parents adoption.

Regard,

Phuthuy-zin

Re: Please help check out this essay.

julielai — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 02:51:21 GMT

Highlighted a few glaring errors for you to fix.

Zoe young

ISSUE :The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.

~~Is really the case as the speaker contends that~~ Is the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare? The speakerâs assertion is tempting when it comes to various ways of living a life, innumerous optional products (odd) in shopping, etc, however, to have a deep and thorough reflection over the choices we donât take, will reveal ~~us a fact that~~ choices available is really only a few (what do you mean?).

Consider, when we first come to earth, we have no choice over who will be our parents, later on, the social values instilled into our minds left us with no options in defining right from wrong since parents and teachers are making all the judgments ~~work~~ for us while our job is only to follow, gradually we form our character, which ultimately separate us what the speaker mentioned that circumstances absent of choices is very, very rare. The education we received, the restriction our values system and outlooks of the world placed on us has always been hampering us substantially from myriads of choices.

The fetters imposed by the ingrained assumptions we take in our lives can be aptly demonstrated in the instances of womenâs status in the Middle East world. (Make it simpler) ~~One of the many progress of modern society has achieved is the heightened status of women throughout the world. However,~~ consider the women of the Middle East~~, this extraordinary change in womenâs status could hardly be inferred from their lives~~. It is a social assumption that they should stay at home, nurturing children and taking care of the elders, obeying all the orders from her husband. Women in such a society hardly have any choice to be a working woman, to be a learned female or at least to search the true self. Indeed there are choices for women, but these are the choices of what is the date for a her marriage, when she will go out to markets. Women of this world are held back ~~in house~~ and most often they seldom think there being any necessary for a change. Thereby, we may come to a conclusion that the environment, all kinds of social ideologies, ~~circumscribe and~~ prevent us from other possible developments. Thus, the authorâs assertion pales in the face of ~~all kinds of~~ the inveterate social value system.

However, it is not my intention to conclude that we will live a miserable life due to the destined environment and destined choices we could only make. More importantly an incisive understanding of how profound impact external factors have on us allows us a chance to break the fetters imposed on our minds so that give us ~~a rise and courage for~~ more choices in life. Only by liberate our minds and rise above to all kinds of boundaries can we come to real innumerous choices.

To summarize up, had it not been we are fettered with all kinds of conventional ideas or values, or limited by some other economic conditions, the choices in life will be numerous ~~as the speaker maintained~~. Thereby, in order to strive for more choices really available to us, we need rise to all kinds of conventional ideas and boundaries.

thanks in advance

Please help check out this essay.

Zoe young — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 18:08:37 GMT

ISSUE :The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.

Is really the case as the speaker contends that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare? The speakerâs assertion is tempting when it comes to various ways of living a life, innumerous optional products in shopping, etc, however, to have a deep and thorough reflection over the choices we donât take, will reveal us a fact that choices available is really only a few.

Consider, when we first come to earth, we have no choice over who will be our parents, later on, the social values instilled into our minds left us with no options in defining right from wrong since parents and teachers are doing all the judgment work for us while our job is only to follow, gradually we form our character, which ultimately separate us what the speaker mentioned that circumstances absent of choices is very, very rare. The education we received, the restriction our values system and outlooks of the world placed on us has always been hampering us substantially from myriads of choices.

The fetters imposed by the ingrained assumptions we take in our lives can be aptly demonstrated in the instances of womenâs status in the Middle East world. One of the many progress of modern society has achieved is the heightened status of women throughout the world. However, consider the women of the Middle East, this extraordinary change in womenâs status could hardly be inferred from their lives. It is a social assumption that they should stay at home, nurturing children and taking care of the elders, obeying all the orders from her husband. Women in such a society hardly have any choice to be a working woman, to be a learned female or at least to search the true self. Indeed there are choices for women, but these are the choices of what is the date for a her marriage, when she will go out to markets. Women of this world are held back in house and most often they seldom think there being any necessary for a change. Thereby, we may come to a conclusion that the environment, all kinds of social ideologies, circumscribe and prevent us from other possible developments. Thus, the authorâs assertion pales in the face of all kinds of the inveterate social value system.

However, it is not my intention to conclude that we will live a miserable life due to the destined environment and destined choices we could only make. More importantly an incisive understanding of how profound impact external factors have on us allows us a chance to break the fetters imposed on our minds so that give us a rise and courage for more choices in life. Only by liberate our minds and rise above to all kinds of boundaries can we come to real innumerous choices.

To summarize up, had it not been we are fettered with all kinds of conventional ideas or values, or limited by some other economic conditions, the choices in life will be numerous as the speaker maintained. Thereby, in order to strive for more choices really available to us, we need rise to all kinds of conventional ideas and boundaries.

thanks in advance

Re: My short essay about LOVE need correction

chuenwing — Fri, 29 Feb 2008 04:34:01 GMT

Here's a new version that I have corrected recently.
Is there still any problem?

In the past, parent-arranged marriages were very common. Usually young people would have their spouse decided by their parents. Nowadays in the modern period, this tradition still exists in some of the families in the world. However, I donât agree the tradition that parents should choose the person for their children to marry.First, I think that everyone should choose to get married with whoever they love. When I was a high school student, one of my friends told me that he would get married with a girl when he grows older. However, he said he has not even seen that girl yet. After few years later, I met him on a bus, and he said he already divorce that girl because of different personal characteristics. He said he likes outdoor activities when he has free time, but his ex-wife likes to stay at home. After one year, they both found that they didnât really like each other and there were a lot of emotional issues, so they divorced. Not only parent-arranged marriage increases the divorce rate, but also it hurts both of them.Second, it is so cruel to get married with someone who is not your true love. Love is the strongest and deepest element in all life. After the wedding, the spouses have to face and overcome lots of problems together. Although a problem is big, they would try to overcome it. I believe a marriage is worth resolving and keeping the marriage if the marriage can continue in a true, open, honest, caring and sharing direction. On the other hand, I donât think I can overcome the problems if my wife is not my true love.Finally, love is a kind of magic. It is not the magic like playing poker, it is also not the magic like taking a rabbit from a black hat, but it is the magic of love which should be created by a real couple. By decreasing the divorce rate and making the world more beautiful, we should get rid of the traditional marriage and say ânoâ to the matchmaker.

My short essay about LOVE need correction

chuenwing — Fri, 29 Feb 2008 02:38:21 GMT

In the past, parents arranged marriages were very common. Usually young people would have their spouse decided by their parents. Nowadays in the modern period, this tradition still exists in some of the family in the world. However, I totally disagree that parents should choose the person for their children to marry.

First, I think that everyone can choose to get married with whoever they love. When I was a college student, one of my friends told me that he would get married with a girl when he grown older. However, he said he has not even seen that girl yet. Few years later, I met him in a bus, and he said he already divorced with that girl because of the different personal characteristics. He said he likes the outdoor activities when he has free time, but his ex-wife likes to stay at home. After one year, they both found that they didnât really like each other and there were a lot of emotional issues, so they divorced. Not only it increases the divorced rate, but also it hurts both of them.

Second, it is so cruel to get married with someone who is not your true lover. Love is the strongest and deepest element in all life. After the wedding, the spouses have to face and overcome lots of the problems together. Even though the problem is so big, they would try to overcome it with no doubt. I believe a marriage is worth resolving and keeping the marriage if the marriage can continue in a true, open, honest, caring and sharing direction. On the other hand, I donât think I can overcome the problems if my wife is not my true lover.

Finally, love is a kind of magic. It is not the magic about playing poker, it is also not the magic about taking a rabbit from a black hat, but it is the magic of love which should be create by the real couple. By decreasing the divorced rate and making the world more beautiful, we should get rid of the traditional marriage and say ânoâ to the matchmaker.

Help proofreading "A Doll's House"

Anonymous — Sun, 24 Feb 2008 03:40:25 GMT

I have finished writing an essay, which is due tomorrow. As an ESL student, I have the feeling that I have a lot of grammatical mistakes. Is there any sentence where you wonder what the heck I am trying to say? Hope anyone can help!

The Woman Within the Doll

The Baltimore Sun wrote that back in 1879, âA Doll's Houseâ by Henrik Ibsen âshocked and offended people wherever [it] was played,â and that the dramatist assured it was not about a woman, but about âanyone who had to live according to the rules created by othersâ (Hyder). Society thought to be outrageous that a woman would get involved in manly things, for her role in society was exclusively to care for the family and please her husband. Women did not enjoy the rights women do now. They were not taken seriously, and decisions were made by the man who was and still is considered the head of the family. Nora's choice to become free, independent and leave her husband, along with some of the characters' actions made this play to be scandalous for its time.

Ibsen wrote in a letter that the story in âA Doll's Houseâ was about a woman who feels:

ppressed and bewildered by belief in authority, she loses her faith in her own moral right and ability to bring up her children... [She is bittered because,] like certain insects, (ought to) go away and die when she has done her duty towards the continuance of the species... [she shakes] off of cares, [but then she feels] a sudden return of apprehension and dread. She must bear it all aloneâ (Doll).

Nora had a beautiful life, she had a husband, beautiful children, and everything she wanted. Earlier in her marriage, his husband suffered of an illness of which he needed to recover somewhere in the south, but this was concealed from him by the doctor and Nora. Not having the means to afford a trip so costly and out of love and desperation, Nora decides to ask for a loan without letting Tolvard know. She forges her father's signature to obtain the loan because she does not want to trouble her father either, who is very ill himself too. However, she is responsible and works secretly from home in order to make the payments. Eventually, Tolvard finds out about her secret and feels that his life, happiness and reputation will be lost once Krogstad, who lent the money, publishes the then scandalous situation out of revenged for having fired him from the bank he now manages. He quickly turns against her. That is the moment when Nora starts to understand things she did not understand before; she realizes she does not love Tolvard anymore just as he does not really love her as she thought, and decides to leave for good to discover herself.

The scenery consists of the Helmer's apartment and nowhere else. The description of the apartment depicts the decision that Nora will have to make. There is a door to the right which leads to the entryway and another to the left which leads to Helmer's study. Nora will have to decide which door to take: freedom or Helmer. The place is not âexpensively furnishedâ, but it is comfortable, just like Nora's marriage, she lives a comfortable life, but there are certain things she lacks that are more important than riches. No woman could even consider back in the 1800s doing such a scandalous things as to leave not only the husband, but her children too.

The main character in the story is Nora, a seemingly selfish, materialistic woman who cares a lot about money and in living a good life. This is to be expected since her father liked to spend money himself and live a life he could only could afford with credit. He used to called her his âdoll-child, and he played with [her] the way [she] played with [her] dollsâ (Ibsen 1041). She was obviously very protected and spoiled by both, her father and her husband, who provided anything she needed or wanted. Her father raised her not think for herself and just play her role in society. âWhile [she] was at home with [her] father, he used to tell [her] all his opinions, and [she] held the same opinions. If [she] had others [she] said nothing about them, because he wouldn't have liked itâ (1041). This repeated again as a married woman; she would not express her opinion to Tolvard, for they never talked seriously, but seemed to have trusted Dr. Rank better. Norah was greatly misunderstood. She was a loving person, she loved her husband so much that she was willing to forge her father's signature to obtain a loan to take her husband south in order for him to recover from a deadly illness. She is willing to do anything for him. Eventually she realized she does not have to play the doll anymore. One can only imagine people's reaction throughout the play's events.

Tolvard Helmer seemed to be an ideal husband. He is loving, admirable, honest, ethical, hard-working and successful, but there seems to be a dark side of him. He is a prideful man, he won't ask for money to anyone, to do so would be humiliating. To him, honor and appearances are more important than family. He does not believe people can change and become good, as he did not believe Krogstad was a good person although he had been honest for a long time already. Also, he is so affectionate that makes one wonder of his sincerity; he calls Nora diminutive names such as featherbrained, spendthrift, a squirrel, a song-bird, lark, strange little being all the time (994). One cannot think of a woman who would like being called like that and who would not be affected emotionally. Tolvard's reaction after finding out Nora's secret is amusing. He had told Nora that sometimes he wished â[she] was in some terrible danger, just so [he] could take [his] life and soul and everything, for [her] sakeâ (1038), yet he quickly turns against her calling her a wretched woman, a criminal, unprincipled, untrustworthy of raising her children, incapable, etc. His hypocrisy is clearly revealed when as soon as he realizes that Nora's mistake won't affect his reputation he forgives her (1039-1949). There's a saying that goes something like a good friend is hard to find, specially during difficult times; Tolvard was nor a good friend neither that perfect husband he seemed to be. He loved to have control of his wife's life, and his conversations usually tend to imply that Nora would be lost without him; that she needed his guidance and teaching. Tolvard did not love Nora, â[he] thought it fun to be in love with [her]â (1041).

Dr. Rank is in love with Nora, and that seems to have been the main reason he visited the Helmer's house. This character is not essential in the play, but it causes outrage when he dares to reveal Nora his secret. This is almost vulgar for him to do, and very dishonorable, specially during those times in which people were very conservative. It is as if he had taken advantage of the trust the family had in it and ended up tarnishing his reputation.

Mrs. Linde is one of Nora's old friends from school. She gave up her true love for money, but in the end things did not turn out the way she had expected. Her husband died leaving her in a terrible financial situation making it necessary for her to work in order to sustain her mother and brothers. After her mother passed away and her brothers did not need her help she left town. Not to have someone to take care of made her feel âcompletely alone in the worldâ, and it frightened her âto be so empty and lostâ (1032). She needed âsomeone to take care ofâ, she wanted to be a mother and wanted the companionship of a husband. In the end, she was supposed to have helped Nora hide her secret. She could have convinced Mr. Krogstad to get the letter back, but she did not intercede (1033). She might have been envious of Nora, after all, Nora had all she was longing for; a husband, beautiful children, and a good life.

Lastly, Krogstad is the one who lent Nora money to save her husband, and threatens her to tell her husband if she does not convince Tolvard to let him keep his job at the bank, but just as Nora did, he once made a mistake, which caused him to loose his reputation. He was a man who seems to have been harden by life's difficulties. When he was left by the woman he dearly loved âit was as if all the solid ground dissolved from under [his] feetâ (1031). This might have caused him to become the âhalf-drownedâ kind of man, as he refers to himself. After finding love in his life he turns from the revengeful person into a forgiving one.

In conclusion, Nora realized of her true value as a human being and as a woman. She decides to leave everything and everyone, husband, children, luxuries to a journey to liberate herself. To do such thing was unthinkable at that time and caused turmoil, but it was the best choice she could ever make. To leave one's children is a terrible things to do and was not necessary, but looking beyond that, without prejudices, it is not hard to understands she is trying to figure out who she really is and what she believes in. This is essential to one's happiness; therefore she is determined to make necessary changes in her life even if people think bad of her. It seems that daring to do so back in the 1800s was just as bad as selling drugs or prostituting oneself.

Works Cited

"A Doll's House." Triton College. 21 Feb. 2008 <http://academics.triton.edu/uc/files/dollshse.html>.

Hyder, Willian. "A Doll's House is No Toy Effort." Baltimore Sun. 15 Feb. 2008. 21 Feb. 2008 <http:// www.baltimoresun.com/news/local/howard/bal-ho.chesapeake15feb15,0,4775242.story>.

Ibsen, Henrik. "A Doll House." The Norton Introduction to Literature. New York: Norton & Co., 2006. 993-1045.

Re: cheating comes in many forms, not just students cheating on test

Grammar Geek — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 01:59:21 GMT

Some people cheat to get ahead some cheat to lie and others just cheat for the fun of it. Cheating happens everywhere you go weather its because a student wants a better grade in a class, or a married man or women cant resist the sex appeal of another person. Cheating comes in many forms, not just students cheating on a test.

A student sometimes would do almost anything for a better grade in a class. Weather they get a smarter friend to do there homework, or maybe even go online and purchase that essay thatâs due in English class You don't have a main clause here.. Some students even go as low as copying off each other, or even breaking into the school and stealing the answer keys. Some kids have a way of thinking that some will never get caught?. I think if we show our children at an early age right from wrong maybe they will study more instead of wasting ~~the~~ time trying to cheat.

Cheating and having an affair One thing or two? is probably ranked really high ranked really high is an odd word choice here in the cheating category and is probably happening more then what we know. Cheating when you are married is a big no but it is still happening all over the world. I think someone who is feeling unloved or unappreciated may begin looking outside their marriage for sources of comfort and get that emotional need. In your introduction, you said it was not being able to resist sex appeal I once seen in a movie a married man and women having an affair, it seemed to me like they enjoyed the rush that it gave them and getting caught some how turned them on and thatâs what made it so much better for them.

Cheating happens because of temptation and desire, the student wanting the better letter grade, and the married couple that is not getting the emotional comfort from there loved one. Im sure everyone at one time has done some form of cheating weathers its accidentally if is accidental, can it be cheating? looking on some one elseâs paper, or lying on your taxes, some im sure worse then others . Like I said before, teach our children early right from wrong, and all we can do is sit back and hope for the best.

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