It is a bit curious, and hard to parse at first. The single phrase, "The son of itinerant actors," gives rise to two separate appositives, one following the other. The second appositive matches up with the first noun, "the

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Hello, I enjoyed reading your essay, it appears that it is a descriptive essay...am I correct? The main task that you seemed to want to complete was to provide vivid details of your experience, in order to help the reader feel like they could

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Hello Jamillah, let me start off first by complimenting you on a really heartfelt essay, often times when you're reading something, it can be hard to feel attached to the writer's experience, because they don't capture the emotion of

Hello Vctory Ong, I enjoyed reading your essay, I think you're an imaginative writer who is skilled at making the place you are describing seem real. Here are some of the errors I noticed in your essay. We enjoys, they dances, jogs...

I am not a native speaker. I am also a English learner like u. However, I think your essay has some grammar mistakes. I will discuss it with u.Hope that some native speakers will look through. - their coming generations ---> I don't know

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